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She refers back to the documents regularly, and citing specific evidence from them. She uses this evidence combined with paraphrased background info to help the reader to fully understand the topic. Her explanations of how sugar affected the economy are also very strong, as she uses the previously mentioned evidence to show the great effect sugar had on the world.

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Paragraphs are indented, information is accurate and it doesn't take too long to deliver the message by going straight to the point.

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This is a good essay because of how it brings up points in the thesis and carries through with those points and elaborates on them. It is also very descriptive

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When she was using evidence from the documents, she explained what the evidence showed. Not only what the documents said, she interpreted it for the reader. She also does a good job with constantly backing up her thesis, and using the reasons from her thesis as the body paragraphs and writes the whole paragraph around that reason.

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The girl writing this essay was very organized. She uses her sources and go back on them to explain and use them as reliable evidence. She explains her sources so a reader who knows nothing about the topic is able to understand where she is coming from. She also refers back to her thesis, as a way of explaining her claim.

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This essay was well written because of the use of the documents. Not only did the author use what was written in the documents as evidence, but they also included the time, location and who wrote the documents as more information. The word choice also contributed to the success of this essay.

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She explains the topic that she is writing about in more detail. She then uses the evidence to further explain and describe on how the evidence connects to the subject. She always kept the topic based off her thesis and went back to it.

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She gives good evidence from the documents and clearly states what document the evidence came from.

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She wrote the essay with good use of sources. She referred back to the documents to support her claim.

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She gives good evidence and good reasoning in full detail while choosing important details and leaving out the useless details. she also refers back to the documents often giving direct quotes.

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This is a good essay because both paragraphs connect to a part of the thesis. Also when explaining she uses evidence and make sure to cite which document it was. Once finding the piece of evidence she explains what it means and how it connects.

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She uses a lot of evidence to back her claims. Refers back to the documents a lot and uses quotes from the documents.

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The essay is very well structured, she uses only the important bits from her sources, and has a lot of evidence to back up her claims.

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I think what makes this thesis good is the amount of evidence they have to explain the documents.

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I think what made this essay good was the amount of evidence in this piece. they used a lot of different documents. and they elaborated using facts on each document.

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I believe the essay was thorough and well thought out. The author structured it perfectly and made sure to give evidence after every claim she made.

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This is a good essay because there was lots of evidence and a good use of sources. And the essay was also very organized and cited there sources in the text by including the name of the documents, as well as the time, location, and writer of the documents.