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she never eat smores again,
she burnt her mouth when she eat the smore

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she used a lot of similes, semicolons, sensory descriptors.

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I noticed that she had sensory descriptors, she had some sentence length problems because they were too long. I noticed that she does love S'mores because she kept mentioning it. She also used a lot of similes and semicolons.

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-She uses lots of similes.
-Uses sensory descriptors
-Uses lots of dashes
-Not really formal

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She described stuff very well and in depth. Also she added a lot of details. She used a lot of semicolons and had a lot of similes. She also was in first person. She also used a few metaphors.

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-Used lots of sensory descriptors
-Used semicolons
-Uses similes

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Started off with a simile:  Autumn is like eating a hot fudge sundae.

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She used a lot of smimles. Also she was really sarcastic. She used a lot of simi colons. she also used sensory discriptors. Also she told a really tramatizing story.

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i noticed that she used a few sensory discrictors

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she used some sensory descriptors
kind of traumatizing
formal
little bit of similes
semicolon

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SImile Mouth looks like the belly of a dead fish.
Her friend doesn't want to burn the forest
Painfully descriptive about the sound inside of her mouth and the skin in the mouth.

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she used a bunch of sensory descriptors like smells, good looks good, and tastes even better

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Used a lot of sensory descriptors and lot of simi collins used a lot of commas

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It was very descriptive, and longer than the rest. Also, she was okay with making fun of herself. She used a lot of descriptive words and she also used some dialogue, she used semicolons as well.

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They had a lot of sight, sound, smell, touch, taste.

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-Good description
-I don't think she cared what other people think of her,
-she used a lot of semicolons.
-Used similes
-Written in 1st person
-Used senses, touch,taste,sight

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She did a few similes. " Autumn is like eating a hot fudge sundae", and " the inside of your mouth looks like the belly of a dead fish.
She used many semicolons.
She used many good and descriptive words including sickening, sizzling, traipsed, daze, envision, cottony, wavering, enthusiasm, abrupt, and halt.
Good sentence starter - in a daze
First person
Used senses- smell, taste, etc.
Many sensory descriptors.

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-traumatizing
-sad/ terrible
-kind of informal
- semicolons
-couple of similes
-good descriptors
-her friends were jerks
-first person

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The author used a lot of sensory descriptors and wrote memoir in first person.

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she uses sensory descriptors such as slimy gooey fork. your mouth looks like the belly of a dead fish which is a simile. she use semicolons; her story was 6 paragraphs long. fiery inferno is a metaphor.

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PAINFUL
sensory details
semicolons alot

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Easy to read and understand, she used a simile, used a semicolon, the experience ruined s'mores for her, uses a lot of dashes, her friends weren't very helpful

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Painfully descriptive about the hot fork and the skin
similes
semicolon sentences
describes everything possible
1st person
lots of sensory descriptors
a bit dramatic
hyphen sentences
transitions
a long, dramatic, build up backstory to the part about her mouth getting burnt
not necessarily formal

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It was very descriptive, She used a lot of sensory descriptors, Dialog
was used, And semicolons.

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She used some of the 5 senses like taste, touch,  and smell
used a lot of similes and semi collins

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they wrote the story it in 1st person

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there was a few similes
semi colons
she uesed some of the 5 senses like touch,abd taste