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It's looking at something again and seeing where improvements, additions, or deletions can be made.  I want my students to really embrace this and drop this "I wrote it, and it's perfect!" attitude about writing.

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It's looking at something again and seeing where improvements, additions, or deletions can be made.  I want my students to really embrace this and drop this "I wrote it, and it's perfect!" attitude about writing.

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What is looks like is me guiding students through a process using standard "rules." I'd certainly like to make it more fun. Rarely is our first draft our best. 

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What is looks like is me guiding students through a process using standard "rules." I'd certainly like to make it more fun. Rarely is our first draft our best. 

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Revision to me is making their writing better, which sometimes happens by kids reading their papers out loud to a peer or a peer reading their paper out loud to someone else.  It is hard work, and something that kids in 4th grade have a hard time with.

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Taking a fresh look at your writing and trying to make it better - maybe more exciting, more clear, more emotional-depends on the topic.

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Revision can be a difficult process in my classroom. Students often write and want to say "I'm done!". I want students to be open and willing to take another look at their work with different lenses during revision. 

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Revision can be a difficult process in my classroom. Students often write and want to say "I'm done!". I want students to be open and willing to take another look at their work with different lenses during revision. 

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It is looking at a piece of writing and making sure it sounds right.

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It is looking at a piece of writing and making the necessary adjustments in order to progress to the publishing stage. It is answering the question: Is this what I want to communicate?

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1.  Revision is taking another look at your work and seeing what could be improved (word choice, arrangement of ideas, thesis, etc.).  There may not technically be anything WRONG, but it could always sound better.

2. In my classroom, it looks like students self-selecting areas of focus that THEY need help with and discussing/exchanging with peers.

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Revision is a process of reseeing--considering options for what ideas I want to include and how I might include them.

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What does the revision process look like in your classroom? 

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What does the revision process look like in your classroom? 