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I liked how nicoles story was detailed and how it is set.

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She made me realize I need to add more emotion in my story

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Johna is my par

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My partner was Abraham
I liked how he used homework in his story for a horror. He thought it was funny how he got kidnapped in my story by Geeth.

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Francisco Lorenzo
That Henry fights his nightmares
That they liked how the city in the story was in the clouds.

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Jansen Hubbard
I liked the conflict
They liked the reality behind the story

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Jansen Hubbard
I liked the

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Jansen Hubbard

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Cason Cole
I like that it takes place somewhere fictional. He pointed out that even though the main character wasn't a good kid he did the right thing when it was needed

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Lauren Rios
The reality in it
They liked my conflict

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1) Emma White
2)Samantha escapes but gets captured again, and dies.
3)I rhyme to much

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My partner was Alex and I liked how unique her story was. I should give more information on the antagonist.

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Isabelle. The lizered wizard. She named mycemetery

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My partner was Morgan. Her story was very nice it was about science and fiction. Well.......I guess overall it was pretty much good. Nice work Morgan😘 ......And yes, all of you also did a great job guys. Keep it up 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻.Have a nice day🙋🏻

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I like that he had aliens and robots in his story.

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I like how my partner made me the character that gets killed in her story. Hahaha

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Saloni, I loved the creativity of her story and we had no criticisms

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Angelica was my partner and I liked how the conflict was fixed and it was all calm and no violence.

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I liked how my partner had a fantasy and how she used political stuff in it

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Grace told me to make time jumps more noticeable

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Daily was my partner and she told me to fix the dates in my story

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My partner was Trisha she told me to show how long the task took or many for how many days the story takes

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Sophia was my partner and I loved how serious her story was and how it dealt with serious topics. She liked how my main characters were out of the norm, and I broke numerous cliches with my setting and dates.

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interestingMy partner was Ishaan
I loved that his story was detailed and it was very interesting witha  great climax.
He told me to talk more about my characters in my story.

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Trevor did good on presenting his story

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Somebody once told me the world was going to roll me, Im mot the sharpest tool in the she

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My partner was Dominic his story had a plot he told me to change the dragon dragon a little bit and add a little more details.

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My partner was Jake, I liked that he story make sense why the monsters are there. He pointed out that mine was scary.

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My partner was mrs sartin

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I would like to add that Olivia pointed out about my story , was that every thing stays in line pretty well and it fits the genre (fantasy)

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My partner was Alli and I loved how her story was a combination of two stories.

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My partner was Alli and I loved how her story was a combination of two stories

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My partner was Alli and I loved how her story was combined

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My partner was Alli and I loved how her story was

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My partner was Alli and

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My partner was Alli

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My partner is valeientina her story was so interesting the genre is scientific fiction and her plot was very well written and she just needs to maybe add a new character and she overall did so good

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She pointed out that I should add some more excitement to my story so I can keep whoever is reading it interested.

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My partner is Olivia M.
Her story was good the genre was realistic fiction which
match the plot pretty well she is very descriptive which helps but she just need to put some improvements like addding more excitement to keep the
reader on a hook.

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My partner was Aline and I liked how well her plot went along with her genre.

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Eduardo was my oatner
He incorporated his topic well.
He liked that the pineapple was spongebobs.

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My partner rylynn and i liked how her story included dragons and that's always cool.  I should change the kids to teenagers because killing kids is apparently "bad"

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SO MY PARTNER WAS BREAD JOIN AND HIS STORY WAS ABOUT COPS AND COPS R COOL DUDE AMD THEY POINTED OUT MY STORY WAS PRITY UNIQUE AND SPICIALS HI

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Tyler was my partner he used a pineapple as the antagonist and it turned out to be spongebob's pineaple

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Hinkley is my partner, I like
How the towns have numbers in hinkley story, I like how there is a good plot, suspenseful, and well action packed. Cliff hanger.

(My story) hinkley told me to add a suspenseful cliff hanger.

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My partner was grace T hers story is good it is about a girl ghost try to kill a little boy to become alive again.

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Josh is my partner. He told me make sure to add details of how they get stuff. What I liked about his story is that it was very descriptive and funny, apocalypse type of story. A

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My partner was Marianne. Her story was fun, centered in a fantasy world. I loved how the wizards in her story had such causal names, like Derek and Carl.
I need to improve the way I explain the story, speaking clearly and including more detail.

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My partner was Sebastian and his story was good, interesting and mysterious.

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My partner was Naureen and I like that her character overcame a difficult hardship.

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Kerime said I needed to add more detail I like her stories sense of mystery

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My partner was Eric L I liked his resolution

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My partner was Jackson his story was really good especially his climax

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My partner was Ryan D. I liked his theme and idea of the story. They pointed out to include more detail to my characters especially the main.

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My partner was Eric. He had a good story and a climax

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My partner was Melanie and I liked that her story was about WWII. I think that her story could be slightly more eventful. I should make my story less confusing and a little more straightforward.

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My partner was Kim. I liked how it involved real/historical events. She pointed out that I needed to make my characters motivation more clear.

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Partner- Ethan Tong
Had a good conflict and resolution.

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My partner was Adelina and I liked how she kept her story engaging. She pointed out that I should make my story more clear and not confusing

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Partner Aryav

Sifi historical fiction adventure

I like the  climax when they find out that one of the team members was a traitor and worked for the nazis

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My partner was Liza,
I liked her whole story and the climax it was very interesting. And the resolution was very shocking.

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1. Kyah Jones

2. I liked that it was basic

3. Put more details

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My partner was Amita. I liked how her Climax was very thrilling and exciting. She made me realize that I should add some more interesting details.

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My partner was Hiba. She pointed out that I should explain my characters a little more.

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My partner was Brendan and I liked how he was detaile with his story and how he made the story interesting and making you want to know more.

He told me about my story and how he liked the names of my story and he liked my resolution and how it was a nice ending to the story.

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1. Anika
2. I like how she put a lot of drama in her story
3. She said that I should have more suspense which I agreed with completely.

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My partner was Sachi. I liked the rising action of her story. She pointed out that Ishould write at least 2 pages. She liked how detailed each step was.

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My partner liked my story and thought it would make a great story Outline. She thought I did not need any improvements.

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My partner was Sejal. I liked how her character disappeared into an alternate universe. She pointed out my inciding incident, and how to add more detail.

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1: Will B

2: I liked how the antagonist gave clues to find him and gave the protagonist a chance to get his stuff back

3: He liked the setting and the ch

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Katie,that it had a lot of conflicts in the story.
That she liked how the protagonist was so determined to reach her goal

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My partner like my story and gave a me a few good advices on how to tweak the story. I also like the intensity of his story and how big of a thrilling story it is.

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I liked how she made lots of twists to it and how she made her protagonist so determined to reach her goal.

She liked how there is a lot of conflict going on.

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Rohan G.
It's back when cavemen were alive and how he rides a taradaclitle he liked that the bad guy gave clues in my story

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Partner- Angie
I liked how her protagonists were criminals instead of the 'good guys'
She pointed out that there should be more detail on what the inside of the computer in my story looks like.

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I liked how she made an dystopian world come to life.

Emma pointed out that my character should have totally opposite personalities.

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Emma H.
1 I liked how she made a new world and made it come to life.

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Emma H.
1 I liked how she made up the dystopia

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Hanna
I liked how her characters start off doing something that they know they shouldn't and learn through the experience. Almost like karma.
Hanna pointed out that I should add more details about the world

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Emma H.
1 I liked how