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And I don't like writing

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i dont no how to use speach marks

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i want paragraph's

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i no how to use capitals and fall stops

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I don't know how to read my stories properly.

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i need to read my story before i put it on the blog

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i need to read my story before i put it on the blog

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CORALEE

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I need to re-read my story

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bye

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can we have time to edit and I don't know how to edit my work

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I need to read my work after I  finish

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I need to practice using   metaphors.

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I really need to use metaphors in my narratives

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i want to use metaphor and  powerful word in my story!

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I need to challenge myself
in writting

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i want to challenge myself by writing more and adding a lot of detail

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i need to talk about my characters a lot more.

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i need to talk about my characters a lot more.

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i need to learn how to put full stops in my paragraph so i can start my next paragraph.

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i need to write more detail and make it more sense

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i need to write more detail and make it more sense

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HIRIA

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i want to challenge myself and write a 500 word story

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i want to challenge myself and write a 500 word story

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I want to challenge myself by trying to add at least more than 10 powerful words.

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I need to learn to see if my sentence makes sense

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i don't know how to use powerful words in my story

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i don't know how to use powerful words in my story

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HIRIA

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I want to know when to put a certain type part of the story in a type of paragraph that will match
-Edith :D :L

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lopi

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i need to read my story to make sure it make sence

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i need to read my story to make sure it make sence

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I want to learn about when to make a new paragraph

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Can you teach us how to use semi colons and brackets.

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I really need to know how to use S.A.L.T in my narratives

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i am not sure

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I do know how to add detail but I don't know how to put powerful words in it.

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I need to practice using metaphors

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i need to use more detail about the story

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I agree with lydia

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i need to know how to do lot's of detail in my stories to make them interesting.

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I need to know when to stop and make a new paragraph.

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I want to challenge myself to use tension in my writing and learn to give my stories a title that will give my story to pull you in.
-Edith :D :P

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I know how to write a narrative but can't think of a title for my narratives

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I need to use less detail but don't know how because I am a detailed freak

-Lydia

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don't know

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I want to challenge myself to create tension/mood in my writing

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I want to challenge myself to create tension/mood in my writing

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I don't know how to give my story a title

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I don't know how to give my story a title

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I need to add more detail to make more story more interesting, but don't know what to do

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I need to add more detail to make more story more interesting, but don't know what to do

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I need to add more detail about characters, but not sure how..

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I need to add more detail about characters, but not sure how..

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I don't know where to put speech marks when the characters are talking

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I don't know where to put speech marks when the characters are talking

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I know about paragraphs but don't know what goes in the introduction and conclusion

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I know about paragraphs but don't know what goes in the introduction and conclusion

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I don't know the difference between a simile and a metaphor

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I don't know the difference between a simile and a metaphor