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Bonjour,
Merci pour vos belles histoires.
Bien: ponctuation, temps du passé dans le récit, verbes introductifs, contraction des auxiliaires, précision dans les gestes, imagination.
A améliorer: il manque parfois la phrase au discours indirect que je demande , il manque des expressions d'oralité, des questions-tags, des ellipses, pour rendre le discours plus vivant.La description des sentiments est un peu superficielle, donc je poste une liste de mots à ce sujet.
Good luck!

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A few days after dinner, Linda feels guilty.

So she decides to see  Bill again, in order to

apologise, so she calls him.

Bill accepted her invitation . So, they met in a café the next day.

"Hey Bill, how are you?"

« I’m okay and you? »

« Me too, I 'll be honest ,I wanted to see you because I feel remorses about my behaviour last time. I need to apologize.I'm really sorry"

"I’m very glad you apologise, I

didn't want to tell you because I didn’t want you to feel guilty, but it is true that I didn't appreciate that you said »

« Yes, I know… I hope you don't have a grudge against me»

« Of course not! If you want to catch up, we can meet again in the coming days »

« Bill, I also decided to see you to tell you that it would be better if we remained friends.

I really like you but it can't work between us »

« Oh…okay… I can understand, but I think it 'll hurt me if we stay friends, I 'd rather we keep a distance for now »

« Yes, I agree with you. I hope I didn't hurt you too much… I wish you  happiness! See you soon! »

« Thanks Linda, me too I wish you all the best.

Bye »

Linda realized  that Bill was disappointed ,but she thought it was better to tell him the truth so as not to make him imagine things.

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Two days after the episode, Linda runs into Bill at the supermarket. She feels guilty about what happened when he asked her to dinner, so she decides to meet him to talk and apologize. When she got closer, she gently touched his shoulder and smiled,

"Hi Bill! I just wanted to apologize for what happened last Wednesday, I don't think I was nice to you..."

Bill lowered his head in surprise

"I'm ashamed to put you through all that. If you want to give me another chance, I promise it won't happen again!"

Desperate, Linda said sympathetically,

"Bill...no more dating. This is a bad idea, I don't think this relationship is for us anymore. Don't you think so?" Linda asked

Bill sighed and nodded, "Well,ok then. "

Bill wanted to tell Linda how much he missed her, but he changed his mind.

Linda added with a smile "Then I wish you all the best in the world, happiness, work, family, women and mustaches."

Then they exchanged one last look, said goodbye, and left the supermarket, going separate ways this time.

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Two days later, Linda decides to call Bill to clarify the situation.

“ Hello Bill, I wanted to ask you to clear the air between us “

“ Hi Linda, first of all I wanted to apologize for the other night “

“ No, I’m the one who’s sorry I didn’t appreciate the effort you made the other night and it wasn’t right of me“

“No, Linda, the real thing is me. I’m the one who ruined everything. I wanted to impress you, but I totally missed that dinner. Plus I drank way too much which does not fit me and which my act in deplorable way“

“Bill, this would never have happened if I had been clear about the basis of our relationship. I thought I had real feelings for you but in reality I didn’t. I am very attached to you but only as a friend. I can't see myself spending my life with you. I'm really sorry if this hurts you.“

“ I'm happy because that's exactly what I wanted to tell you. Indeed after this completely failed dinner I realized the same thing as you. I hope this problem will not impact our friendship.“

“So Bill and Linda decided to stay friends and continue to see each other and have a good time together.“

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The next day Linda regrets what happened when Bill invited her to dinner. Many days afters she decides to call him to talk and to apologize her.

« Hello Bill, how are you ?

"Hi, i’m good, why do you call me ?"

"I just wanted to apologize for what happened last Wednesday, I think I wasn't very nice to you…"

Disappointed, Bill doesn’t know how to react

Then linda continues "I very much regret the last night, i think we should give each other time and go our separate ways, maybe we will meet later but for now i tghink we have to go on our own way "

"ok ok so i d’ont gonna lie i miss you Linda but i think same as you, we have to take time. I wish you the best."

"Well, so I wish you all the luck and happiness in the world, with your job, your family… Bye bye »

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After the dinner, Bill and Linda was both regretful. One week later by chance, Bill meets Linda at a park
"Hi Linda! How are you? I'm sorry for last week it was a disaster."
She was surprised to meet him and answered "Hi bill! Don't be sorry for last week, I wasn't very nice with you and i'm apologize for that"
He was happy to heard and he decided to take his chance "If we are both sorry for last week why not go somewhere to catch up?"
She dreaded this question and she risponded honestly at the question"We lived a really good story together but I think it's time to finish it. I'm sure you underestand it"
Deep inside, he knew the answer "I think you're right but it's difficult Good bye".
She was rassured by his answer and reply "Good bye too".

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After the first meeting, they did not see each other again. Then one evening, as Linda is walking quietly by the seashore, she sees Bill in the distance.

Her first instinct was to run away as fast as she could but then she decided against it.
to go see him to ask his forgiveness.

Linda, "Hi Bill! I hope you're okay ? Listen, I wanted to apologize for the last time, I wasn't very correct with you, and I apologize for that. »

Bill responded, "Hi Linda, it's been a long time! It will be my pleasure ! »

Linda then said ,"Great, so see you tonight."

Bill: "See you tonight, at7 ?"

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A week after that disastrous meal, Linda, overcome with compassion, decides to contact Bill again for a new dinner, but this time at Linda's house.

Bill was a little surprised that Linda wanted to contact him again, but he agreed and jokingly told her "Your cooking will always be better than mine". The next day, Bill went to Linda's house and they started to have dinner. The food that Linda had prepared was very good, but the feeling between the two was very bad. The problem with Bill's meal and his poor style of dress was not the problem on the last dinner, the real problem was that the two couldn't understand each other anymore. At the end of the dinner, Bill gave Linda a simple goodbye kiss but the two lost contact after that meeting.

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The next day, Linda, hit by a feeling of guilt, decides to call Bill back to have an explanation, luckily they had exchanged their phone numbers before.

The first time Bill didn't pick up but the second was the good one.

Bill picked up and noticed that he was just going to call her.

Linda, surprised, began by apologizing "I'm sorry for my comportement yesterday, I sincerely blame myself, but I must admit that I wasn’t in the mood"

Bill admitted with difficulty "I wasn't perfect too, I'm sorry about that, you have to admit that I'm clumsy sometimest"

Linda added shyly "Do you think we can give each other another chance?"

Bill retorted, filled with enthusiasm "with pleasure and this time without so many manners"

Linda, feeling relieved, and replied "well I guess we'll see you soon"

Bill agreed and added that he hoped to see her again very soon.

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A few days after dinner, Linda still feels guilty for having been so hard on Bill. That was not her usual way of doing things and she felt bad about it.
Linda decided to go to Bill’s to explain herself and do things right. When she got to his door, she was stressed. She took courage  and rang the bell.

"Hello Bill, I’d like to talk"

"Come in," he said.

"Listen, I’m not like the way I did the other night and I wanted to apologize because I really don’t do that. I’m aware that I may have hurt you, and it really wasn’t my attention."

"I really appreciate you apologizing and regretting because I really care about you. But I’m also wrong and I really should have shown you how much you mean to me. But instead, I bought a poor quality wine and I cooked myself to the trouble of following a recipe. So to make amends I invite you to the restaurant so you will be sure to eat well! "

Uncomfortable Lynda said compassionately, « Look Bill, I don’t think it’s a good idea for us to see each other again. I think deep down you know that we can’t make it work but it was still too hard for you to admit it"

Sad Bill replied, "On the contrary, I think that if we work together it could work. However I can’t force you and you look like you so maybe deep down you’re right"

Relieved Linda replied, "I’m glad you feel that way. You are a great person, you deserve all the happiness in the world and I hope you find the one who will make you happy."

Then Linda got up, went towards the door and before closing the door she exchanged a last smile

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The next day when she wakes up, Linda regrets the evening she spent the day before with Bill and feels guilty. She then decides to call him to discuss and clarify things. She takes her phone and calls Bill.

“Hi Bill! How are you? You slept well ? »

Bill still asleep taked time to answer. "I haven't slept much... but it's okay"

Linda then decided to apologize "Listen Bill, I very much regret the evening last night which was... a bit catastrophic I would say" she adds with a little laugh. "Even though I really like you, I'm not sure it's a good idea that we continue to see each other"

Disappointed Bill doesn't know what to say. He likes Linda very much and wants to continue spending time with her.

Linda continued “I think we should give each other time and go our separate ways. Maybe we'll meet later, but for now we have to go our own way."

Bill then decided to tell himself everything he thinks about Linda “You mean a lot to me, and I miss you Linda. But I understand your choice. Last night's dinner went badly, I should have done better for you. I wish you a good continuation and who knows, maybe we will meet again one day Linda »

Linda smiled, and with a twinge in her heart, she replied "maybe... goodbye Bill", before hanging up

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The next morning ,Linda  decides to go to Bill's house and talk to him.

Linda said to herself "I really miss him and he tried his best for this dinner... it came from a good intention all the same."
Once she arrived at the door,Bill opened ,
" Oh, hey Linda! What are you doing here?"

"Hey Bill. I'm here to apologize for the behaviour I had yesterday. It was not really nice because I know you tried your best to impress me."

"You were right. The wine I took wasn't the best, the meal wasn't really good and you couldn't even eat a bit of the dessert. It was a real disaster !"

"Not at all! Even if you were a little clumsy, it was kind from you and I admit it was a little funny to see you beingso clumsy."

"I understand that you were upset, so I drank too much and my behaviour wasn't exemplary either. I was trying to get  you backbut it  got worse."

Bill and Linda suddendly became shy and didn't know what to say. So linda started to say, "I'm sorry, I should..."but Bill interrupted her  to say "you don't need to apologize, I've already forgiven you."

Bill and Linda got back together after that dinner  and after some time,the terrible dinner was just a laughable memory .

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A few days later, she starts to feel remorses so she decides to invite Bill to a small café to discuss about their last disastrous meeting.

The place was very nice and warm. Waiting for Bill she ordered a cappuccino. She waited a long time and then she heard  his voice behind her.

“ Good afternoon miss” ,said Bill.

“Hey Bill, what’s up?”

“euh I’m okay and you ?”

She was uncomfortable and stressed. She said she wasn’t okay.Suddenly Bill looked  anxious and he asked her what was the matter.

I said “We need to talk about happened last night. I need to apologize about my behaviour .” He was confused.

“ If it’s because of my drunkeness, I apolozige. I was an idiot and behaved selfishly. I was very nervous and as you weren't  drinking, I took avantage of it. I promise you I won’t do it again.”

She didn’t know what to answer . He was so sweet and he looked so sorry but I had no feelings for him any more .

“Bill I think that it’s better if we stay friends. It’s not just your drunkeness it’s more than that. I don’t feel like I have feelings for you. We are very different. We don’t like the same things. We have  different personalities. It would never have worked between us. You are a very nice person but not made for me. I’m so sorry. I hope you'll find a beautiful wife who'll suit you. Goodbye Bill.”

She left the café without turning around and he didn't make a move.

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Two days after this episode, Linda meets by chance Bill at the supermarket. She feels guilty about what happened when he invited her to dinner, so she decides to go see him in order to talk a little while, and to apologize.

Once she got close enough, she slightly touched his shoulder, and smiled.

« Hi Bill ! I just wanted to apologize for what happened last Wednesday, I think I wasn't very nice to you… »

Bill, surprised, lowered his eyes,« I felt ashamed that I had put you through this situation. And if you wanna let me another chance, I promise I won’t let that happen again ! »

Linda, desperate, said with compassion « Bill… There won't be another date. It was a bad idea , I don’t think this relationship suits us anymore. Don’t you ? »

Bill sighed, and nodded, « Well, I guess so. »

He didn’t want to admit it, and wanted to say, once again, how much he missed Linda, but he changed his mind.

« Well, so I wish you all the luck and happiness in the world, with your job, your family, women, and your moustache » she added with a little smile.

Then, they exchanged a last look, said goodbye, and each of them left, taking different ways this time.