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With BA-🤬's expressiveness and the background of the picture, it was well expressed that the main character was nervous.

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I liked it but I think you shod of write more about the character.

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Jame's story and illustrations (all of the story)

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Jame's story and illustrations (all of the story)

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A  I like how you share the story with us. But   maybe next time you could add more words to the pictures.
T  I like how you draw the picture well. I can image what you are talking about. (the book)
G  I like that how you change feeling from every pictures. (sad,to HAPPY)
Thank you for sharing a amazing book for us HARU!!!!!!!!!

from Tomi.K

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A section. question for u did u draw James? yes/no
Why didnt u show the one of the pictures in the storys?  yes/no
What is BA-DUM means is it bad or a heart sound? why/what

G- I like how u did the book like illustration but next time write a tittle in your book and your name so everyone could see your book.

T- I think u did good at a story  but next time can u tell me what is about the BA-DUM means? when u come next time
im sure!

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why some of the illustrations was no't in the book?

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G - I think maybe you can make the story better by saying he is in a smaller grade.

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T:
I like your illustration. It has many details and  it has pictures that shows what is going on in the story. The picture and the story matches.
A:
I wonder what ba-dum means. I also wonder what the picture shows (The second one from the last). Maybe you should make the car look the same car.
G:
I think you could have more things going around James. I think it will make it more interesting.

T:
I like your story. It shows what James actually feels. It has lots of details.
G:
Maybe you could add more words in the book.

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I think you should use more word for the picture

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I like how you made the story I made me understand the feelings but next time you could tell us about the feelings of the character.

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Illustrations: Picture with BA-DUM and heart

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Illustrations: Picture with BA-DUM and heart

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I not sure what is BA-DUM means🤔

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i like the drawing of the sun set and the car but next time can you bur a street light.

by Shahril

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i notice that u use the american map and i understand were he live.

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I think Ba dum means bad so can you just say pump pump

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I like it because it has tiny details and that means there lots to look.

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A - So James is in grade 5, right? If that is, why are the children everywhere, and why are they learning what 1+1 is?

P.S. Sorry if I went hard you Haru!

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Why is James scared of being a target?

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I didin't know what ba-dum is

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Fantastic moral that is really relatable to students. I think your book would be good for Grade 1 to Grade 5.

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I did not see the drawings 3 and 13 and I like the drawing of them

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Illustration PICTURE WITH JAMES AT THE END

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Illustration PICTURE WITH JAMES AT THE END

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G - I am not really sure what you drew behind him, you said it was a car? Maybe make it the same colour as the car in the picture.

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T - Tell me something you thought I did well about my story

A - Ask me a question about something you want to know more about or don't understand about my storyline or plot (If you don't have a question, you don't need to write one)

G - Give me a piece on feedback on something you think I can improve on for my story

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Please write your TAG feedback below the illustrations. Thank you!

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Please write your TAG feedback below the illustrations. Thank you!

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T - Tell me something you thought I did well about my illustrations

A - Ask me a question about something you want to know more about or don't understand about my illustrations (If you don't have a question, you don't need to write one)

G - Give me a piece on feedback on something you think I can improve on for my illustrations