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The fourth grade primary colonies we were doing activities, one of them was
nocturnal, and it was time to do it, it was very dark we even needed the flashlights
that we took, after 30 minutes a group found it, and they left us 5 more minutes so
that those that were missing we could find it, no group found it and in the end when
they told us where it was it was a little strange, because the monitor was in the top of
a tree, I climbed the whole and was caught up at the top, from that moment
whenever I play hide and seek I fixed a lot in the trees.

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When my brothers and I, we went to the cinema to see Avengers Endgame, the film was very sad and the room was a lot of people, when the films started, good, but when we 40 minutes into the movie, the first character dies, and sure I cried, an unknown girl cried too but most, and my sister when the film ended, she said me “a one girl cried most” and the two  we started laughing, when the film ended, the people living the room, and the films of marvel have 1 or 2 scene post credits, and a guy said screaming "Have a scene after credit" and most people laughed.

When a have 5 or 6 years old, my family and me we went Andorra for the snow, we buy a sleigh, and we go to the top and mi father said “when we arrive don’t walk for the ice”

I, I went up a one hill, but the hill was made of ice, and I resvaled and my family laugh

Corrections:
Resvaled????? You did not use a dictionary...
A one ---> Un una??? Just "a" or "one", choose one.

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When I was younger my mother used to feed me, but one day, I had vegetables to eat and I didn’t like, so she wanted to feed me again. The problem was, that while my mother was giving me some food, she was also watching TV, so she was not very careful. So I spent 5 minutes trying to eat because my mother was so hooked to the TV, when she realized that she had to feed me she said “Sorry Paola!” and after this she put me the metal fork in my nose. I cried because it hurts, but the cries were short because I got angry immediately, so my mother left the dining room.

I didn’t know what to do because I couldn't calm down, so I held my stuffed Spongebob and I threw it off the balcony, later, my dad said “Where is your stuffed Spongebob, Paola?”, at that moment I remember that I threw it off the balcony but I didn’t say anything.

My mother and my father searched for it but they didn’t find it. Actually I have a new teddy Spongebob and the other is lost in the street.

Corrections:
at that moment I remembered...
Actually,
my mother was so hooked on the TV
I had vegetables to eat and I didn’t like them
and after this, she put the metal fork in my nose.

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Hello my name is Sandra and I will explain my past story. My grandfather and I went for a walk a day after eating, we took care of me because neither my mother nor my father were home. I was wearing gold earrings and I noticed that I had lost one, I told my grandfather and we started looking down a very rough road. We didn’t find it, and we kept walking. I suddenly tripped and my two front teeth broke, I got really scared and I started crying. My grandfather had to call my parents running. My mother came running and just fell down the same road. We ended up both at the dentist.

Now I’m going to explain my second funny story, it all started on October 31, 2019. I always celebrate Halloween every year at my camp, so my friends and I decided to get dressed to go to the tunnel of terror. One was a vampire, another was a butcher, and I was a witch. Around 8 p.m. we went to my caravan for my mom to make us up. When we looked in the mirror we almost broke it because of the fear we gave! Well, it was almost 9, but... the tunnel of terror began! We got here at 9:00 because we really wanted to. We had to enter and we were very nervous, but since we are very brave we decided to enter without thinking. Further down in the middle of the tunnel more or less, I realized that something was not right because... a friend had disappeared! Ari (my friend) told me to go through another tunnel to find her, I was very afraid. We finally decided to go through the tunnel but when I got out... I was alone! I began to cry a lot but after they both came for my back, they scared me and said: happy halloween! I won’t forget this story in my life.

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Like five summers ago, a very funny story happened to my brother and to me. I will remember this anecdote forever. Well, we were coming to our house after spending time in our cousins’ swimming pool. We of course wore flip-flops and other summer clothes that we always wear for the pool, while we were walking in the park next to our house to arrive there. In that park was a very big dog poop in the middle of the swings made of wood, and my brother ran to the swings very excited. So he was spending a great time there like a little child when suddenly he fell down just on the big poop. Fortunately he didn't fall with his 🤬, but he spotted all his flip-flops of poop. I was laughing a lot because of the situation when he threw me his flip-flop with poop. He was angry but also he was laughing.

- You are so dumb!

I said to him while I was laughing too.

Just at that funny moment, it started to rain, and this summer rain caused a lot of puddles of water. So, my brother asked me:

- Can you clean my flip-flop for me in one of the big puddles of water?

- No! It’s your problem, not my problem.

I answered him.

He was tired because I was laughing and laughing all the time, and for this, he ran to me and pushed me into a puddle of water.

- What are you doing?

I asked him angry.

And he started to laugh. So then, I pushed him into another puddle of water, and like that all the time. A very funny time we spent together in the park under the rain with poop and water, disgusting but amazing. The important thing is that we enjoyed it a lot!

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One day in the morning in the summer we wake up around 7, my family and we are preparing to go to Port Aventura, to spend a whole day.

Finally when we arrived at the Port Aventura after the trip and we were given the tickets, we went to the hotel to leave the mini suitcase that we brought.

The first attraction we went to was the mine train.

I was very afraid to ride since they did not like the high attractions, but in the end I dared to ride with my brother.

When we got on I was really afraid because it was my first high attraction, but in the end my brother and I loved it.

The next attraction is the tutuki splash

The next attraction was your tutuki splash, as it was very hot and we decided to ride my whole family.

During the day we got a Furius Baco, shambala, tutuki splash X2, etc….

Then we went to eat, and we did the digestion and in the afternoon we went to some shows and some attractions with little tail.

In the evening the attractions closed at 8 and we saw the last show at 9 after we went to dinner and finally we went to sleep.

The next day we had breakfast and went to the Caribe aquatic park.Afterwards we went to eat and we got on the last attraction, the stampede.

The funny thing that happened was that during a queue of about 2 hours they had to close the attraction.

I had a great time that day

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When my brothers and I, we went to the cinema to see Avengers Endgame, the film was very sad and the room was a lot of people, when the films started, good, but when we 40 minutes into the movie, the first character dies, and sure I cried, an unknown girl cried too but most, and my sister when the film ended, she said me “a one girl cried most” and the two  we started laughing, when the film ended, the people living the room, and the films of marvel have 1 or 2 scene post credits, and a guy said screaming "Have a scene after credit" and most people laughed.

When a have 5 or 6 years old, my family and me we went Andorra for the snow, we buy a sleigh, and we go to the top and mi father said “when we arrive don’t walk for the ice”

I, I went up a one hill, but the hill was made of ice, and I resvaled and my family laugh

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Elsa’s Funny Story: My funniest birthday

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Elsa’s Funny Story: My funniest birthday

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I'm gonna explain one of the funniest birthdays of my life:

This happened two years ago on summertime, specifically the day of my tenth birthday in my grandmother's house in a village near Toledo: It's a two floors apartment that my family and I used to visit when I was little but actually I have not gone for two years. It's a very comfortable and familiar place made of wood and metal.

My grandma used to live there when she was young, and currently, she keeps her childhood house. But now she lives here, in Viladecans.

My family and I were putting on all the decorations and presents while we were waiting for the cake that my grandmother baked. I was very excited and nervous.

Finally my grandma came out from the kitchen with a giant cake covered by a layer of cream.

She was distracted letting the cake over the table when my cousins came quietly from the back and punched my grandmother's face over the cake!

My cousins Andrea and Oriol used to love that type of jokes when they were younger.

That summer my grandma had a sticky and sweet bath of cream. She ended the day so angry, but it was the funniest birthday of my life :D

Corrections:
Pronunciation of comfortable!!!!!!!!
This happened two years ago in the summertime

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A few years ago there was a candy store my friends and I always bought.

one day we went to buy sweets and the seller got confused and gave us more change. We had to go back but the shop closed. We waited until the next day to return the money. It was funny because he did not notice.  it was also funny because the seller told us that the mistake was from us in the end we ended up laughing about what happened last we bought some potatoes and they were very good were some pringles flavor onion

Corrections:
Watch out the pronunciation. Do not use Google Translator or Reverso translator.

A few years ago there was a candy store my friends and I always bought at.

We had to go back but the shop was closed.

last we bought some potatoes and they were very good were some pringles flavor onion --> it makes no sense at all.

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When I was little, in second grade, I went to the colonies with the school and I didn’t like it because I was afraid of the activities of the monitors, so I stayed with the teachers crying. (At that time I used to cry all the time). While I was there I watched cartoons. And when I was sleeping my friends told me that the next day I should go with them to play. The next day I went to play with them and I had a great time. We were playing football and a friend cut his arm and I helped him and took him to the teachers to have his hand bandaged. After that we went all the time together everywhere. And now is my best friend.

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I remember one day I was with my family in Barcelona and we spent the whole afternoon there having fun until my aunt said that we were going to a park or a place where children can also have fun until cousins ​​over 10 years old get together and chat , laugh, etc ... And then one of my cousins ​​says that we are going to play for more fun or laugh and well, we said yes, that we are going to play until we have ridden in a place I called him up and down then I rode with my cousin and then I got tired and I told my cousin that you are going to play that I am tired and she said she was fine and left, until like a fool I put her belly and chest where she sits to ride you and suddenly I fell and I hit myself with all my mouth and nose and all my cousins ​​laughed until one of them laughed but a lot and told me that you really fell until he put his foot where the seesaw which is where we sit until the seesaw goes very fast and hit my cousin.

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Hi, I want to talk to you about my past. Oh, it's true, my name is Matius. My past was very craZy, okay, so let’s go. When I was 6 years old, my mom and I were making a sponge cake when my mom said to me, “son, squeeze the 4 bananas'' and I did, but me of my past did this with the peel, and my mom laughed because this was wrong, and I did too.

Another anecdote of my life was that when I was 10 years old, I was with my cousin, I was playing with she, but my mom said to me and my cousin “children's, it’s time to eat, and your cousin, it’s time to go to your home” and my cousin said “I DON’T WANT TO GO TO MY HOUSE, I AM FUNNY WITH MY COUSIN” and me said “my cousin can be sleep in our house?” and my mom said “yes, she can'' and my cousin and I said “ya, we can entertain!” and it was very funny and entertaining.

So, oh! It’s true! Curfew one thing! While I was 11 years old, me and another cousin were playing beyblade, my cousin said “I want to be in your house one night, please!” and I said “Yes, it’s a good idea! I will talk with my mom” I talked with my mom, and she said “Yes' '.

So, here are my 3 stories. I don’t have plans for these 3 stories, It was very good to talk, so bye! Oh, yes! I forgot, when I was 11 years old… I used to play video games every Monday, Thursday, Wednesday, Thursday and Friday, but now not. Also, when I was 7 years old, I loved the trains. I even went to a train park and my mother and me went up to trains, and we passed very well. I used to play with “Nintendo 3DS” but now not, I was even very good. These are my mini stories.

Another thing that is not part of this, but one day, I was in my house alone with my dog “Guachi'' there that my house have a garage with shutter that you touch, it makes very song, so, boys were mading my dog because these boys were touching the shutter for mad my dog, I was looking how they were mading my dog and I made a song very noisy when they ran, it was very funny, until here arrive, bye!

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I'm gonna explain one of the funniest birthdays of my life:
This happened two years ago on summertime, specifically the day of my tenth birthday in my grandmothers house in a village near Toledo: It's a two floors apartment, that my family and I used to visit when I was little but actually I hace not gone for two years. It's a very confortable and familiar place made of wood and metal.
My grandma used to live there when she was young, and currently, she keeps her childhood house. But now she lives here, in Viladecans.

My family and I were putting on all the decorations and presents while we were waiting for the cake that my grandmother baked. I was very excited and nervous.
Finally my grandma came out from the kitchen with a giant cake covered by a layer of cream.
She was distracted letting the cake overthe cake when my cousins came quietly from the back and punched my grandmothers face over the cake!
My cousins Andrea and Oriol used to love that type of jokes when they were younger.

That summer my grandma had a sticky and sweet bath of cream. She ended the day so angry, but it was the funniest birthday of my life :D

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Hello my name is Jan and i’m going to talk to you about my past. My past was very interesting. I had a lot of funny moments with my family and friends, for example, one day, one year ago I was in the forest of my campsite with my friends when one of them fell down, and he started to roll down. It was so funny, but he got injured and broke his arm. We had to go to the hospital with him and we were there for many hours. Finally we went back to the campsite and my friend had a sling on his arm. He had to wear it for 4 weeks. That afternoon we did a football match and my friend played with the sling. While we were playing football it started to hail. And one of the icy stones fell on my head. My friends were laughing and I went to my campervan to put some water on my head. Finally I had a bump on my head but I was so good. It was one of the most funny days of my life.

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One day, two years ago, I was at home with my family. After having lunch, my father asked us to go to the Shopping Centre Splau in Cornellá. We thought it was a good idea so we took our things, went to the parking and got into the car and went to Splau. We were in the car when we remembered that we left an open bag with chocolates on the living room table and my dog was alone at home. We thought it wasn’t important so we didn’t care and continued driving. We were talking when my father had an idea: he remembered the security camera he put on the living room and he decided to look at what was happening at home. We looked and it wasn’t happening anything strange: the dog was on the sofa and the chocolates on the table. We arrived at the shopping centre and we spent all afternoon there. We looked at some new shops, we bought some clothes and we had a snack: We ate some donuts. At about 7:30 p.m. we decided to go back home, so we went down to the parking lot , took our car and went home. My brother and I were playing clash royale when we arrived  at our parking lot at home. We got out of the car and got into the lift, and while we were going up home my brother remembered the chocolates. He asked my mother if he could eat one before having dinner. He said that it was better after dinner, like a dessert . When we opened the door, we saw my dog with the empty chocolate bag on the sofa, and the sofa stained with chocolate and also my dog’s hair stained with brown chocolate. He ate all the chocolates while we were in the Shopping centre!

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In 2018 my school is going to a house in Tarragona. It's an excursion with all schools of 4t and 6th, when all schools have just arrived, going to bedrooms to leave the bags, later going to lunch and then playing some activities like rabbit killer or chinese football. In the afternoon I see one friend naked on the balcony and all the people see her. They laugh, and when he goes to her bedroom, two boys arrive.

they took us to a strange place and they were able to do strange dances, then they explained to us that there were seven bulls and 6 bullfighters because one had died, the whole school began to shout and they forced us to go to the forest where supposedly the bullfighters and the bulls were, Everybody ran all over the forest until the monitors had to calm us down saying we now had to look for things to stop the bulls from attacking us. We finished the activity and everyone locked themselves in their room almost crying out of fear. They were one of the best camp of my life

Corrections:
You have to improve your pronunciation.
You have not used what was expected = Past simple versus past continuous.
4th and 6th
Chinese

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sooo in the story i was like 6 or 4 so ya anyways i was in school and i was invited by a friend of mine his name was Pau to go tu his birthday, he gave me a letter with the address and told when i should be there soo... after school i when to my mother and show her the letter and after going home i ate and waited a bit then we went and it was so cool there was chips, fanta a huge obstacle course and a mountain there was a also like a small valley that my mother told me and the others kids to stay a away so you know... to not fall and it's no like i would fall there (foreshadowing) and ya there was time that we would play close the valley but our parents would always tell us to get away the edge and so we would... but at some point i didn't listen and i look down and the most strangest thing i ever saw it was a rusty locomotive it look abandoned... there was rails and a tunnel and then just then i fell but by some miracle i was able to grab a roots a a tree and hold on for dear life and i had the strength and the adraling to pull myself up and it was so weird in a way cause i didt feel like myself like i was in some sort of mode that was all about survival i was dead silent i didn't scream and i didnt feel fear or anything i was so weird anyway after pulling up myself i act like nothing happen

5 years or 3 years later

my family went on a visit to the place where the party was 5 or 3 years ago

and where the train was down in the valley 5 or 3 year ago it was gone nothing left just the track and the tunnel i was like a ghost train but ya that's is the end of my story so bye and please give me a 10 plz

Corrections:
Watch out for your spelling...!!!
"I" always in capital letters
Use past tenses in a proper way

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Caps = monitors
Cau = boy scouts

I was in camps with my Cau(like boy scouts) , the camps with the cau are always super funny, and I had an experience that was so funny.

Me and some friends have a kind of war of jokes with our monitors and one night we decided to make a prank to our caps, into the night, when our caps are sleeping, we go to her tent and we removed the rings that were holding the tent,

We ran to our tents and didn’t sleep all night in case we got the joke back.

At the next night we are sleeping and I woke up with the tnet glued to my face, we try to open the tent zipper but it wouldn't open, when the other tent heard us shouting they open the zipper and we left the tent, the most bad, when I put on the mountain boots I noticed a gelatinous sensation, spoiler they put toothpaste in my boots.

Corrections:

when our caps were sleeping, we went to their tent and we removed the rings
the worst, when I put on the mountain boots,
the next night we were sleeping
Some friends and I had a kind of war
always super fun
I woke up with the net stuck to my face

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I was bored at home when I wanted to pee, I went to pee and when I found out I had peed in the washing machine my mother punished me.

My mom call me to brush my teeth, I ran to wash them and when I brushed them with soap. My mom and we starting laughing at me

I was with my family in Barcelona, we saw a man in a very strange suit, a girl came to him to give him a coin and the man told her to come. Her parents forced her to approach him but she was afraid, the girl approached, the man touched her and the girl threw herself on the ground crying and kicking. We was laughing so much

I was with a friend in the Barcelona waiting a metro, it was at night and we wanted to get home, I passed a train and we thought it was ours, we ran until the next stop without stopping and when we arrived it was, but it was not ours and we had to wait more

Corrections:
Pronunciation!!!
My mom called me to brush my teeth

My mom and I started laughing at me
the girl held herself on the ground
We were laughing so much

I was with a friend in Barcelona waiting for a metro