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The theme is very profound and detailed.

I like the idea of having only three characters.

The plot seems detailed.

Think more about the film techniques like shots, angles, lights, and how they portray your story/and character

Need to understand the variety of shots selection

How much time have you spent on the beginning and ending

Focus on the ending!

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I really like their theme about death education, it is actually a really heavy and serious topic to discuss, but it’s necessary to be told to young kids. The shooting techniques are also very great.

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The team created a film about facing death. I really like the overall color and the theme of the film, as well as the angle presented in the PPT. The color made me feel the strong chinese family style they set. Although we didn't see the film, I believe it will be exciting.

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The theme is quite creative and meaningful. Death education is not mentioned often in China, and most Chinese people actually lack knowledge of death, including how to deal with the death of relatives and friends and how to face the coming of death. Thus, I think it is a really meaningful film.

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Incredible! Nothing should be improved, all is well done. I love your theme, which that is death education is the thing we need to be educated about at a very young age. Thanks for your presentation.

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The shots are very nice and make me forget these are students' work. It looks like a real movie. The plots are also meaningful and talk about death. It is very educational and this movie can really make people learn something. The place and color of the movie looks cozy and comfortable.

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The story is is interesting and has a deep intention. It talks about death education and how the little girl grow up. The shots used are very nice and it's a good film.

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Your film presentation was engaging and insightful. You clearly conveyed the main themes and characters, capturing the audience's attention with your well-organized content and confident delivery. Your analysis of the movie's artistic elements and their impact on the storyline was particularly impressive, showcasing your deep understanding of the film. The visual aids you used complemented your points effectively, making the presentation visually appealing. However, a bit more focus on the film's cultural context and its reception would have provided a more comprehensive overview. Overall, your enthusiasm for the subject was evident and made the presentation enjoyable.

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The plot is fantastic and shows a profound theme. The photos on the PPT also reflect their professionalism in shooting techniques. Overal I think there work is really nice so far.

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The story is very creative, very healing, the theme is really nice and attractive. The shooting style is perfect also the tone is perfect.

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You have done great work in developing the characters.

The cinematic techniques were discussed in detail.

Please also include the plan for editing

What is the story arc? I am not clear on the beginning and end.

No other feedback could be given since the film was not presented

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The style of Mockumentary was explained very well.

The plot seems very interesting!

The character description also very well documented

Long shots are creating a very good feeling for the tension.

Think about more such techniques that could help with your story line

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The plot is very creative and shows the real sides of school life.

The shooting technique section explains the designs and ideas in detail and helps to convey the mood and atmosphere of the film very well.

The goal of associating students together is close to life and very nice.

It would better to see the video of the film or some pictures from it.

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They want to create something like a documentary or mockumentary, which I appreciate very much. And I like the background music they choose for the film.

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The idea is very innovative and the shots as well as the background music is showing it greatly.

The film started as a close-up to the clock presenting the passing of time is very creative. The music is working with the clock and the student who is typing very well and creating a nervous atmosphere.

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The theme, and style is very clear. Good job on getting that clarity.

Great work on the character analysis

Great new thing to think is how are you going to show each of the characteristics using film techniques

You need to add external sound as part of sound design

The way you guys shot is commendable

The ending needs to be thought of even more

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The theme is very interesting. The characters all have their own unique personality and it's good that they chose to shot outside the campus. The color of the film is very comfortable and making people feel just like the characters feel.

The overall topic is also very new and exciting.

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Their film focuses on some minority groups, which is creative and very impressive. I really like the idea that the film shows self- discovery. but to be honest, I think their film is more like an interview on the street instead of designed film.

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The idea of a street survey is really cool. The focus on LGBTQ+ is also really meaningful in China because this group of people are not getting enough attention and they are always under discrimination.

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This is an innovative plot, i really want to see the final cut. Through these photos, i think it can be a very good work.

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The theme is quite meaningful and your approach to shooting is really creative.

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I think the process of taking this film is very unique and interesting. Most of us may ask our friends to perform it. Asking some strangers to act the film is a very different way.

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The movie talks about groups of people we don't pay much attention to, such as the LGBTQs. And the way of a street interview is really cool.

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Good topic, good shooting techniques, which really attract people.

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Your film presentation was both informative and captivating. You did an excellent job of summarizing the plot and highlighting key themes, making it easy for the audience to follow. Your insights into the director's techniques and the film's stylistic choices were particularly noteworthy, demonstrating a thorough understanding of cinematic elements. The use of clips and stills from the film added a dynamic visual element, enhancing your points effectively. To improve, consider delving deeper into the historical and cultural background of the film to provide additional context. Overall, your presentation was well-structured and delivered with confidence, showcasing your passion and knowledge of the subject.

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the music at the start of the film was impressing, really attract the audiences attention and constructed tension for the plot.

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Very interesting thoughts about the cinematic technique

The editing could get more smooth

Exposure, brightness, etc could be matched better

Directing and acting could significantly get better

Watch some reference videos to get help on the structure on the plot

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deep consideration for every shot. enjoy the overall color, feeling very warm. looking forward for the final project

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Interesting plot, attracting shooting techniques. I really want to see the ending of this film.

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The film is very creative and uses very surprising symbolism. The shooting angles can express the emotion greatly and are very vivid. The light control is vey mature and creates the corresponding atmosphere. The sound effect can be improved since it's a bit hard to hear the sound.