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The neighbours found it disturbing and complain about the incident.after jake realizing that he has been disturbing the neighbours he changed and be more consederate to other living around him.And revolded the problem.moving forward,he will be more consederate to people.

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The mother complain and confiscate his drum Jake that is too noisy and the neighbour's baby might wake up and cry.Jake should stop playing drum during dinner so that the his neighbour's won't get affected by the sound he should play during afternoon

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After maya is going to sleep,the next day mayas parents found out and told maya to clean it and wanted maya to learn her lesson so that she will not do it again.

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Maya will ask jake to play the drums softly. He didn't listen and roll his eyes. started to play the drums loudly but the neighbour did not care and he slept peacefully. so Maya shouted at him.

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Maya friends stop her and told her to put the plate in the tray return . Maya igonre her friends and just go to the class room .

Her friends tell the teaher that is did not return the plate and when is igonre us and just go.The teacher called the parents of maya and got scolded.

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The neighbor called Jake parents because Jake was making alot of noise and the neighbor told him to stop but he did not listen,because he played the drum too loud.Jake parents grounded him for playing the drum.

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Insects and birds come to the seat where Maya and her friends left their plates and the seat became more dirty.No one could sit at that seat and the worker had to work hard to clean that seat.

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I use Facial expression like his mother give jake his drum back jake was happy

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I used the fast strategy by using face experssion,it was very helpful.

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I use action like the old lady grab my hand

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i think i can use fast stratergy on my story and climax

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Look up at the sentence.

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By practising and understanding the story.

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I can use fast strategy by showing the facial expression describing the action writing a direct speech and describing the characters thoughts

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i think i can write my climax better and use more better words

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I use Facial like jake did not care about his mother and play the drum very loud dum dum dum

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I think that my draft two was absouloutly great!i think that my introduction was the best and that i can improve more.

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I think i wrote my climax and ending better

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By practising using the F.A.S.T strategy and finding my mistakes.

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I think that my friends draft two can improve alot.and i liked the falling part.

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I think aariel wrote a intersting and long compo and she used alot of words from fast

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I felt good because i write it very slow and it took around 3 hour.

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I think i wrote the climax better and write more words

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I think Hari and Qaaid did a very good job in their climax

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I csn use fast strategy on introduction

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It is nice .

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I can improve on my grammer

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The strategy i use was facial experssion.It was helpful to me.

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1.By using snapshot.

2.Understand the pictures.

3.By using the facial expression.

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I think that i can use new words.

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Not bad she has to fix on her grammer and spelling

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I think hari and syamil wrote better in their climax

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I think l can use that teacher teach us at the compo lesson,and use the fast strategy.

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I use the fast strategy to help me with action

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I can use fast energy for introduction

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I did a very good job on my ending

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I think that Aaqil can use a better climax.

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She was a good thingking and writing

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I think l can use more intresting word and make the story more intresting .

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I think that my climax was better

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(Draft 1)

I think that i can write better climax and improving my grammer.

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I think syamil and qaaid did a very good job for their climax and ending

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I felt good because i use better words.

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I did better than my draft 1 and i write more words, more ideas and climax.

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Good .because he improve and use good words.

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I think my friend draft 2 can make it more intresting to the story that my friend write.

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I think the introduction of Aafiyah was good because she write better ideas.

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It was ok and i think that it was better than draft 1.The climax was better.

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I can think about draft two when i can do the climax better

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Not bad.Aedly's compo is a fun read.But he can improve his climax and grammar.