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1. personal experiences or reflection

it means when the author shares their own personal thoughts, feelings and experiences like life events. For example in “This i believe” edward shared about his personal experience in ww2 and he mentioned about the impacts of ww2 and his own beliefs

2. very narrative

personal essays are kinda storytelling that explores more personal or broader themes related to personal stuff, edward mentions part of his life like the neighbours and their lives to connect with his beliefs as well as truths

3. honest and vulnerable

Edward often wrote about his honest inner thoughts and struggles. in paragraph 7-9 also suggests a reflection on self-confidence, emphasizing the importance of being open and vulnerable.

4. broader themes

edward explores broader themes like hellen keller to engage in wider audience and connect more to his own beliefs as well as using it as an elaboration (illustrates how personal struggles can inspire broader conversations about resilience and hope.)

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3A 03

-A combination of narrative, descriptive and argumentative essay

1.Narrative

-personal essay involved the writer sharing his/her own experiences as examples, while sharing his/her own experiences, the writer would use narrative, since it can tell a story with its elements(scenes, setting, characters, dialogue of characters etc)

Eg. In the example of general Lucius Clay and Mrs. Roosevelt’s, it involved the dialogue between them. And to show different distinctive contributions to their different beliefs.

2.Descriptive

-personal essay involved examples in order to give more details on the writer’s personal experience. Therefore, the writer would use descriptive to convey a memorable picture of what the writer is describing.

Eg. “Around us all, now high like a distant thunderhead now close upon us with the wet choking intimacy of a London fog, there is an enveloping cloud of fear”

3.Argumentative

-personal essay involved personal opinions to bring out the readers’ self reflection. Therefore, the writer would use argumentative to to convince the readers to his personal view with the evidence.

Eg. “What truths can a human being afford to furnish the cluttered nervous room of his mind with, when he has no real idea how long a lease he has on the future?”

However,there are still some differences between argumentative, descriptive, narrative essay and personal essay.

Because personal essay…

-doesn’t require lots of researched/ factual data to support the writer’s stance, but require the relevant experience of the writer/famous people.

Eg. In the example of general Lucius Clay and Mrs. Roosevelt, there is no any factual data, but the dialogue between them two.

-may not have a lot scenes in the examples. Since the example doesn’t need to be very detailed and lengthy, the most important is to bring out the point that the writer wants to express.

Eg. In the example of Helen Keller, the writer only wrote about her personal settings and some briefly introduction of her, but not telling all events in her life, since it is not a story about Helen Keller.

-doesn’t have a fixed perspective

Eg. “This reporter’s beliefs are in a state of flux.” “I do not believe in, than the other way around.” These two sentences are using third person perspective and first person perspective respectively. Therefore, in personal essay, it is not a must to use third/first person perspective in the whole essay. As long it can bring out the writer’s view, it is fine.

-casual

Eg. “A-bomb” “don’t” the writer would use short forms of words. Therefore, it is not a must to use formal language in the whole essay, informal language can also be involved.

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1. personal voice

In each personal essays, the writer expressing themselves is very important, it helps readers connect with the writer and be able to share their real and honest thoughts and feelings. to do that, we can use “I”, “we”, “us”, etc.

2. tone of writing

personal essays requires a informal and causal tone.

3. personal essays include the writer’s personal experience and small actual evidence, this can help readers understand the writer’s beliefs and feelings better, almost like having a conversation with a friend.

4. the structure of personal essays

introduction: always starts with a thesis statement to grab attention and introduce the main beliefs.

body: have a few paragraphs with personal stories, mostly focus on a specific moment related to the main beliefs.

conclusion: summarise you whole key  beliefs written in the essay.

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Uses first person, such as including works like “I” and “we”, which can make the reader feels closer to the writer and more convenient to express emotions and make detailed psychological description.

Includes narrative and descriptive writing, so the arguments and opinions of the writer could be more persuasive and credible, so the reader would agree with him and believe him.

Includes true life stories of the writer, which allows the reader to make deeper personal connections with him and makes the essay more engaging.

The tone is informal, which feels more personal and relatable, allowing the writer to connect with the readers on a more emotional or familiar level. It is also more personal, casual and spontaneous than a formal tone,

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- The tone can be informal and descriptive as it allows for a more relatable/friendly narrative.

- Always using "we" to make a connection with the audience. It encourages them to reflect on their own experiences/situations .

- Subjective and argumentative. The speaker tries to express their perspective which is supported by different evidence which makes their points more persuasive.

-Have a clear thesis and introduction about what he is going to say. Have a sentence to hook the audience. E.g. “This I Believe” “In this brief time each night, a banker or a butcher, a painter or a social worker, people of all kinds who need have…”

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It is written in first person perspective using words like “I”, “us”, “we”, etc, which helps express the reporter’s thoughts and opinions

Uses different literary devices like metaphor, for example “how close upon us with the wet choking intimacy of a London fog, there is an enveloping cloud of fear” and rhetorical questions like “what truths can a human being afford to furnish the cluttered nervous room of his mind with, when he has no real idea how long a lease he has on the future?”

States personal views and opinions with examples to prove their point like Hellen Keller’s life

The tone is genuinely reflective and sincere, it is because the writer provides deep and meaningful points to support his belief

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It includes personal beliefs and experiences of individuals, they share their backgrounds to connect with the beliefs they hold in the essay

It uses first person and in a genuine sense of tone to explain to prove their point

The points are realistic and actual, examples include the inspiring woman Keller

It offers quotes and examples to highlight the core theme of the writing, from General Clay and a railway executive

The writer has a takeaway in the end to conclude and explain how others' experiences can lecture him on how to tackle his own problems

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3A 09

To write a personal essay, a casual and affable tone would be suitable to be used. First-person is also used such as the words of “I”, and “us”.

Firstly, in the “This I Believe” essay, the author, Edward R. Murrow used words that are easy to understand and comprehend by many. He also uses different kinds of examples such as fear during WWII, etc, to allow the readers to easily relate to his personal experiences.

Secondly, as this is a personal essay, the most suitable point of view must be first person as this essay came from the author Edward himself directly. As mentioned in the examples, he uses his own experiences to allow readers to relate through his easy, causal, and affable tone in the essay.

And lastly, how his own experiences can lead to the main topic of the — the beliefs of people. The author shared his opinions on people sharing their beliefs and then he shared his takeaway from the broadcast transcript. By doing so, the personal views and takeaways of the author himself can be expressed thoroughly.

In conclusion, the features of personal essays are using an easy, causal, and affable tone, the use of the First person the point of view this essay, and the personal takeaways from the author himself.

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The writer’s own opinions. It’s like argumentative essays, but they don’t have detailed explanations, and more descriptions about what the writer thinks.

Descriptions of the writer’s perspective. For example, in the fourth paragraph of the essay, it talked about the images of witches in a neighbor’s yard, which is an example for the writer’s thesis statement about the existence of mental fear.

Structure: many paragraphs about the writer’s opinions. For example, the writer used different paragraphs for different points about what they believe.

first person for personal pronouns like “I” to make it clear about the writer’s beliefs and explanations.

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It contains their own thesis of the topic (kind of like how is done in argumentative writings)

Shows personal feelings and their thoughts

Uses different real-life examples to show their point (Famous people like Helen Keller)

Uses descriptive language in the writing

The tone is like a voice speaking out directly from inside of the mind

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1. Is a subjective piece that includes the writers own thoughts and beliefs.

2. A more causal and conversational tone.

3. Shares a core idea or message, but the purpose isn’t necessarily to convince the reader of it.

4. Incudes examples, often personal experiences or quotes rather than blatant facts.

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Features of a personal essay

Uses personal voice, like using ‘I’ the reflect the reporter’s thoughts. Example: I do not believe in, than the other wat around.

Write what you believe or think and be honest and genuine.

Structure: the introduction, body paragraph and conclusion

Examples of famous people like Helen Keller, personal experiences/thoughts

Share your thoughts but do not present your beliefs as a definitive truth.

Tone: conversational and reflective

Use different literacy devices to let readers understand clearly. Example: now close upon us with the wet choking intimacy of a London fog, there is an enveloping cloud of fear.

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It shares their thoughts, beliefs, and experiences in a personal and honest way.

It uses a friendly tone , and reflects on lessons that the writer has learned. In the article, people share what they value most through personal stories.

It often includes some storytelling to share some experiences from the writer’s life. It also has a clear purpose.

connect with readers, inspire them, and make them think about their own beliefs.

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Firstly, I think a personal essay needs to be in first person. The writer uses first person pronouns like “we”, “us” and “I” throughout the essay.

Secondly, I think the author needs to describe a personal experience, which also relates to others. For example, the author describes how he feels scared and paranoid because of the war. This also relates to how most other people are feeling.

Thirdly, I think the author needs to share his takeaway from the experience with the reader, and persuade them to believe it. For example, the author’s takeaway is that everyone has problems, so it’s good to share solutions. He uses devices like rhetorical questions to make readers believe his point.

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To write a personal essay, a casual and friendly tone is usually sported. Just like how Edward R. Murrow presents his speech, he selected simple words, so that the audience and readers would understand better about the topic. He quotes from phrases people have said, and listed out examples, such as the life of Helen Keller and many other famous people. Personal essays are usually more conversational, just like chatting to a friend, but it also brings out useful insights from the speaker or the writer.

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uses first-person perspective, speaking directly to the reader, sharing the thoughts and feelings

tells a story about a personal experience or a series of related events

based on actual experiences, not fictional stories

a message or a lesson in the essay

write in a casual, natural way

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shares writer's own personal views, thoughts and beliefs

carries a more conversational tone, as if they're in a talk show

uses different examples (could be personal experiences, famous quotes, social situations..) to support their beliefs

however, it isn't in an argumentative tone, it is subjective towards the writer's ideas, the point isn't to make the reader agree 100% to the idea

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1 it is narrative,but the essay is with a specific purpose

2 it is related to significant event, or a closely related series of events

3maybe talk about the writer’s life experience or gain

4 personal essay has an introduction with thesis statement or a hook,body paragraph to support or express the writer’s views,ending with a conclusion to bring the main idea of the essay

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1. A casual but intimate tone, as if the writer a close friend of the reader

2. Personal experiences and what the writer has learned from them

3. The writer's own views, presented in a way that isn't argumentative

4. A core theme, present throughout the entire essay

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Read the sample essay before inputting your responses using your class and number (e.g. 3A01) - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-Nd2cVZnBHxrlXl6E17cn61xx_70BZjO/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=111324979957049989423&rtpof=true&sd=true