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1. IS AN INTERESTING TOPIC

IT'S AN .....

2. I saw the girl which classroom is next to mine.

I saw......whose classroom ...

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Sofía García García

1. By the other hand

On the other hand

2. Verb tenses

3. These/this

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Celia Santamarta Fernández

Also he is so talkative ❌

Furthermore/Besides/In addition✅

Although being ❌

Although it is✅

How was tackling with it ❌

How was tackling it✅

Is a difficult ❌

It is difficult ✅

I know him over ten years❌

I’ve known him over ten years✅

It can quit teenagers❌

Take them away from✅

Third person (s)

Avoid `and ‘ `but ‘ use synonyms!!

If you are telling a story in the past tense, keep to the past.

this/these!!

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Amalia Fernández

Avoid saying that

Avoid long complex sentences

These/ this

Third person

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Daniela Arduengo

Avoid ‘and’ / ‘but’.

Third person.

Despite it was funny, it was scary.

- Despite de fun, it was scary.

Also he is too talkative.

- He is also too talkative.

These / this

Its / it’s

There are 6 rounded tables.

- There are 6 round tables.

There were some fishes.

- There were some fish

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Isabel Vior Blanco

•Avoid and//but.

•Thrid person.

•If I start talking in the past tense keep to the past.

•These//this.

•Start using less ‘normal’ words and start using synonyms more appropiate for out level.

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Nathán Casaprima Cabañeros

1. I looking afterwards you write me back❌

I'm looking forwards to hearing from you✅

2. Fishes❌

Fish✅

3. You can see a really variety of animals❌

You can see a real variety of animals✅

4. Yours, faigthfully❌

Yours, faigthfully✅

5. Something you get befoure doing highschool❌

Something you get before....✅

6. He also could observe❌

He could also observe ✅

7. Was able to sense the smooth sand❌

Was able to feel the smooth sand✅

8. I thought myself programing ❌

I thought myself programing✅

9. Fitness classes would acoplarte yo a lote of...❌

Fitness classes would appeal to a lote of..✅

10. Instead of staying at home playing videogames❌

Instead of staying playing videogames at home✅

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1 zeus gave to Pandora a box ❌

Zeus gave Pandora a box

2 Also he is very talkative

(In addition)

3 Avoid “but”and “and”

4 No change tenses

5 This/these

6 Use more complex adjectives

7 Use conectors

8 She told me to not do that ❌

She tole me not to do that

9 Use literaly language

10 is ❌

It is

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Sara Baragaño Rodríguez

-Differentiate between is and it is

This is incorrect

It is very clever

-Put nationalities with the first letter capitalised

Maria is Spanish

-Avoid complex sentences

One day a long time ago when it was very hot in the summer there was a girl who I didn't know her name who followed me everywhere.❌

-Do not translate Spanish idioms directly

Bed of roses✔

Path of flowers❌

-Spealling errors

Goodness❌

God✔

-Using more complex connectors

And❌-Besides, in addition, as well as...✔

But❌-Nevertheless, however, in spite of...✔

-Use irregular verbs and do not -ed everything.

Burst✔ Bursted❌

-Do not start the sentence with "that".

That I did not prepare it❌

-Don't use "plus" as a connector in written texts.

Plus I went home early

-Differentiate between Its and It's

Its his pencil

It's black

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1. Fish, children, mice / Fishes, childs, mouses ❌

2. Third person present; clean ❌cleans ✔

3. Avoid vague words

4. Avoid repeating sentences

5. Not start sentences with that

6. Difference between Fordwar and Fordwars

7. This/These

8. By ❌On the other hand ✔

9. Not start sentences with is/are

10. Avoid using and/but in your writings

11. writting, writen ❌writing, written ✔

12. Adjetive order OSSACOMP

Aaron Fonseca Menasalvas

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1. I have 16 years old ❌

I am 16 years old 🟩

2. This / These

3. When I saw him, I noticed he had a haircut ❌

When I saw him, I noticed he had had a haircut 🟩

4. He told me he has been to Gijón ❌

He told me he had been to Gijón 🟩

5. Keep to a single tense

6. Different from me... ❌

Unlike me... 🟩

7. Don't start a sentence with "that"

8. Proper use of in/on

9. I'll go out after the dinner ❌

I'll go out after dinner 🟩

10. They're vs Their vs There

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marta fernández

-write long sentences

-The dad of lucia bought a house for her: Lucia's dad bought a house for her

-verb tenses- if you star in present, you must finish in present:do not mix verb tenses between sentences

-although being so smart:although he is so smart...

-use more developed adjetives and contractiones instead of the usual ones (furthermore, besides, as well as, nevertheless, in addition)

-i have 6 years old: i AM 6 years old

-identify when its and it's is needed: it is not the same ( one talks about the subject and the other one is posession)

-despite it was raining:despite the rain