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Use these guiding questions to check your own or a classmate's CW1 draft:

CW1 Checklist

1.   Plan

1.1 - Does your plan address every part of the essay question?   ☐

1.2 - Do you have a clear thesis statement which states your position in response to the essay question?          ☐

1.3 - Do all the body topics clearly address part of the question? Have you made sure that any background only occurs in the introduction?     ☐

2.   Sources:

2.1 - Are all your sources academic? Replace any non-academic sources, such as newspapers, magazines, company websites, or blogs.            ☐

2.2 - Are all your sources current? If they were not published in the last 10 years, can you justify why they are still relevant?        ☐

2.3 - Are all your sources clearly relevant to the essay question? If this is not obvious from the title, can the relevance be clearly explained in part 2?           ☐

2.4 - Are all your sources listed in the Leeds Harvard referencing style? If not, check the style guide on the University Library Website. ☐

3.   How you found your sources:

3.1 - Have you used more than one search engine to find your sources?    ☐

3.2 - Have you clearly indicated the search terms, using “quotation marks”?    ☐

3.3 - Have you included additional detail about how you refined your search? ☐

3.4 - Have you included additional detail about how you selected your source and decided it would be suitable?        ☐

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Hi there, I am Molly your class tutor for AES. I have lived in Yorkshire for 3 years now and believe it is one of the best parts of the UK for getting outdoors and being in nature.

There are some fantastic walks in the Yorkshire Dales (an areas of outstanding natural beauty) and many monuments such as the Ribblehead Viaduct railway bridge in this photo.

Please upload a photograph of something you like to do and comment on other people's posts.

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Hello. My name is Chan Xin Ling, and I am from Malaysia. I have lived in Malaysia for most of my life, but last year, I spent about six months in Japan, which was a fun experience.

I am in way too many fandoms to count ranging from anime, Superwholock, Marvel, Formula 1 and much more. But I guess currently I am very much into learning more about ww1 & ww2. I especially love the HBO TV series called Band of Brothers alongside others like The Pacific and Masters of the Air. Also if any of you are interested in getting to know the rifles and machine guns from WW2 D-Day and getting to hold them, try your lock in Royal Armouries Leeds and see if they are holding those cool events.

I guess that is all for now, baii.

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Seminar Assessment (Ammar, Mohanad, Xin Ling)

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Seminar Assessment (Ammar, Mohanad, Xin Ling)

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1) While interacting with students, it prepares students for university in terms of improving their English skills.

Help improve communication skills.

Good to see how well you have understood the lecture.

2) Listen to the teacher, lectures, classes, etc.

More practice in your own time and participating in class.

Take notes while watching lectures.

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increasing speaking skills

Its interactive so not boring

work really hard

do alot of reading and listenting

help us be able to university study

hardworking

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1.To introduce topic and let people what are we going to write.What are you going to argue with the topic.

2.Background of the topic, identify the topic.Positive or negative in the essay,

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Its commonly understood that social media platforms such as the famously known platform called tiktok, are used frequently by the general public. As any other topic, social media has its benefits and drawbacks that might effect peoples lives such as: better communication, or the negatives such as misinformation. This essay will argue that although social media has its positive effects, the negative impact of it significantly outweighs any benefits it has.

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1. introduce the essay what are you gonna write, answer the question, give your perspective

2. background, thesis statement

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Bruce Sherry : Social media is essential part of modern life because it lets people share knowledge and connect with each other right away. It has numerous benefits, such as better ways to communicate and get news, but it also has some issues, such as stalking and less privacy. This essay will look at both the positive and negative effects and argue that negative is outweigh than positive.

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Bruce Sherry : Social media is essential part of modern life because it lets people share knowledge and connect with each other right away. It has numerous benefits, such as better ways to communicate and get news, but it also has some issues, such as stalking and less privacy. This essay will look at both the positive and negative effects and argue that negative is outweigh than positive.

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Examine the positive and negative effects of social media. Evaluate whether the positive outweighs the negative.

Social media has become an integral part of our lives; it provides influential communications for people and helps people more easily to get information. But it also has positive and negative effects on our lives. Overall, the negative effects on individuals and society. This essay will explore its positive and negative effects and assess whether the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, also compare them.

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Social media provides a platform for people to connect with and share ideas. It's a new concept that has taken the world by storm. There are both strengths and drawbacks to social media. So some people think that it is beneficial while others believe that it has disastrous consequences on the human mind. This essay will argue that social media has more negatives than positives.

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Introduce the reader to the topic.

attract the reader.

The structure of the essay.

General overview of the topic.

thesis statement.

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1. To introduce the topic/main ideas to the reader. Let the reader know what the essay is going to be about. What to expect from the essay. Talk about which stance/opinion we side with

2. thesis statement, context, background, keywords

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nowadays, social media is very common platforms that people use for many things. a lot of convenience to use such as integram, for us to communicate, there are negative and positive about social media that I will mention on the essay. however there is lots of positive affect, I think there is more harmful.

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There are many negative effects of social media that effects the mental health of teenagers. The first negative effect of social media for the youth is insecurity. Insecurity is the lack of confidence that one feels while comparing themselves to other people's highlight reels on social media. The second impact is social currency. Likes, shares and comments hold a lot of value which leads to individuals being treated like a product or commodity. It effects people's reputation both online and offline. The last negative effect of social media is FOMO (Fear Of Missing Out) people not being involved in social media can lead to them experiencing social anxiety.

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there are few negative impacts that affect young people in term of mental health. first, social media can make them feel insecure, for example, lack of confidence which make them depend on the approval of social media, such as compare to others which is the best moment of others. second, the likes and comments become the social currency, they become the product. last but not least, living in a world everyone got a smartphone, they feel fear to missing out, when they don't access the social media, they will have social anxiety.

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Social media start to play a crucial role in our life but it you use it in the wrong way it would negatively effect your mental health. one of the effects is insecurity due to people comparing themselves with their followers, secondly social currency where likes and shares are highly valued, has distracted a lot of people Perception of self-worth, in addition fear of missing people have that they would probably left out if they didn’t concentrate which may lead to social anxiety.

In conclusion social media effects towards mental health is serious and people should avoid these effects by decreasing the time they consume on social media.

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It can be argued that social media has a negative impact on the youth of today, especially on their mental health. The most common impact on your people is that it leaves a bruise on their confidence, leaving them feeling insecure about themselves. This is due to the fact that most people often compare their lives and struggles to the highlight reels of other people, which only show the best moments of a person's life. Another impact that can be seen is that social media has become a sort of way to measure of self-worth, like some sort of social currency. Likes, comments and the number of shares are examples of social currency. Making it seem as if we are the product on the shelves, like we have become some sort of inanimate object. Lastly, people often have a fear of missing out if they aren't on social media 24/7, having a fear of not knowing the latest trend. This can lead to social anxiety and impact many young people's mental health, making them more withdrawn from their peers. - Xin Ling and Jinhong

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1. Brown (2010) asserts that there is no proof to show that men are better drivers.

2. Geissler and Powers (2011) support the theory of the possibility of existence of aliens on other planets.

3. Moore (2015) strongly believes that Jones (2013)'s research has dire problems of reliability which may nullify his findings.

4. Rogers (2018) proposes that the pressure of large companies is another integral factor that influences government decisions.

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1. Brown(2010) argues that there is no proof to support that men are better drivers

2. Geissler and Powers(2011) claim aliens can exist on other planets.

3. I am sorry

4. ㅠ.ㅠ

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1. Brown(2010) point out that the better drivers are man has not been evidenced

2. Geissler and powers(2011) suggest that there is the possibility that alien might exist on other planets.

3. Moore (2015) claims that there are significant reliable problems of jones (2013) findings may cancel.

4. rogers (2018) argued that pressure on larger companies is another crucial factor of government decision.

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Brown(2010) claims that there is no evidence that men are better drivers than women.

Geissler and Powers(2011) argue that the existence of alien life on other planets is possible.

Moore(2015) reports that reliability issues in Jones' (2013) study may undermine its conclusions.

Rogers (2018) emphasizes that the influence of large corporations is an important factor influencing government policy decisions.

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Brown(2010) implies that there is  no evidence supports the claim that men are better at driving

Geissler and Powers(2011) speculate the possibility of aliens existence

on other planets

Moore(2015) argues that the findings jones(2013) has conducted by researching has major issues of reliability which may backfire his findings.

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Brown (2010) states that there is no proof to indicate that men are superior drivers.

Geissier and Powers (2011) suggest that there is a possibility that aliens exist on other planets.

Moore (2015) argues that there are significant reliability problems with research overseen by Jones (2013), which might invalidate his conclusions.

Rogers (2018) emphasises that the key element is that big corporations could have power over the government's rulings.

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1. Brown, 2010 speculate that there is no evidence to show that men are better drivers.

2. Geissier and Powers, 2011 implies that there is a chance that aliens exist on other planets.

3. Moore, 2015 argues that the research controlled by Jones(2013) have a problem of reliablity which may nullify his findings.

4. Rogers,2018 emphasies that another essential factor is how large coroporations pressure can have an effect on goverment decisions.