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Purpose,Focus, and Organization:3/4.
It was very well organized and it was mostly focused on the topic.

Evidence and Elaboration:3/4. There was no citations from the text where you had gotten your information from.

Conventions:2/2 There was no mispelled words.

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3/4 purpose focus and organization. it was nicely organized but it went off topic a few times and was a little bit unclear
2/4 evidence/elaboration. I didn't see any citations from any texts, it made it seem like the author was making it all up
2/2 grammar/spelling. no visible spelling/grammar mistakes

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3/4 for purpose,focus,and organization it was very nicely organized although it went off topic and thesis was a bit unclear once i felt very informed
2/4 for evidence/elaboration because i see no citations so i don't know whether it's from a direct source or background knowledge
2/2 for grammar/spelling, i saw no spelling mistakes

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8/10
3/4 for Purpose, Focus, and Organization.
3/4 for Evidence and Elaboration.
2/2 for Conventions.
They did show good evidence. No grammatical errors.

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Purpose and organisation 3/4
went off topic very little
evidence and elaboration 3/4
final body paragraph was lacking in evidence
conventions 2/2
no spelling or grammatical errors.
8/10

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a score for Purpose, Focus, and Organization ( 4 of 4)  was very well organized and i had no trouble finding any of it
score for Evidence and Elaboration (3 of 4)   it very clearly but based on what i could see there wasn't much evidence cited, but i didn't have the text to compare
a score for Conventions (2of 2)
9/10

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Score: 7/10
Purpose, Focus, Organization: 3/4
- The essay was on topic and organized.

Evidence & Elaboration: 2/4
- There was no sources cited, but there was good elaboration

Conventions: 2/2
- There were no spelling errors.

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Purpose, Focus, and Organization: 2/4. The thesis was not very clear, and then the writer started giving me reasons why I should go there, this is supposed to be an informative essay. The writer talked directly to me multiple times and asked rhetorical questions.

Evidence and Elaboration: 2/4. There was hardly any elaboration and when there was all the elaboration said was that it looked great, and something that looks good is not a fact. No quotes or citations for the evidence. Said the world probably some, which makes the evidence much weaker.

Conventions: 1/4. I found a few spelling errors but nothing that would make the essay unreadable.

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Purpose, Focus, and Organization- 2/4 I thought that the essay was organized and the focus of the text was clear to me. But I didn't like all the rhetorical questions and the use of the word you
Evidence and Elaboration- 3/4 There was plenty of evidence and elaboration but there was no citing of sources. This sounded more like the writer knew the information on the top of their head instead of citing it from another passage.
Conventions- 2/2 There was no spelling errors that we very noticable.

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Purpose, Focus, and Organization- 3/4. The essay wasn't confusing at all to me. I understood what the essay was trying to explain because of how nicely the essay was organized. The essay made sure to stay focused on the topic of what the essay was talking about. Most words were used too many times and it got annoying to me.
Evidence and Elaboration- 2/4.
There was a lot of evidence used which really helped me understand the essay even more and there was a lot of it.  I really liked how the author used a lot of evidence. There was also a good amount of elaboration that was used, which i was really happy with. The only thing that kinda annoyed me was that there was no kind of citing. This affects the essay as a whole because i'm only seeing the authors feelings about the topic and i didn't really get to see if someone agrees with the author. I took away 2 points from this because i felt this has a big impact on the essay.
Conventions- 2/2 There weren't any spelling errors

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Purpose, Focus and Organization I give a 4 out of 4 it was on topic and I think the way it was laid out was good.
Evidence and Elaboration I give a 3/4 I didn't see a lot of sources
Conventions 2/2 I didn't see any spelling errors
Mackenzie

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Purpose, Focus, and Organization- I think a 4 out of 4  it had everything it needed and was very organized.

Evidence and Elaboration- 3 out of 4 it had evidence and elaboration but no evidence sited in it.

Conventions- 2 out of 2 it had no spelling error and it was really easy to read

I give it a 9 out of 10