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Restate the Main Points: People will kill the animals for their fur and to be wealthy. It is us that will effect the animals not the radiation. People are just being greedy to get wealthy.

Restate the Thesis Statement: I predict that the animals and plants are safe because no human will pollute the and won't kill the animals.

Conclusion: Please remember this, always think what you do and never be greedy to become wealthy.

People are trying to kill the animals for their fur and to become wealthy. Radiation doesn't effect the animals, we are the ones that are effecting the animals. I hope you are not like these kind of people.

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Restate the main points: Yogi was born to get MVP. He always tried to succeed. He also had very funny sayings.

Restate the Thesis Statement: If Yogi was still alive I bet he would wan't to teach baseball.

Conclusion: Please try to remember these sayings So Yogi lives on.

Yogi was born to get MVP. He always tried to succeed. He also had very funny sayings. If Yogi was still alive I bet he would wan't to teach baseball. Please try to remember his sayings So hishappiness lives on.

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1. Topic Sentence: Jim Smith said, " if there was people, people will start doing stuff a lot worse.

2. Example: For example, if there was people, we will start killing all the animals.

3. Opinion: It sees to me that the people lived there, then some of the animals will probably be extinct.

4. Facts and Statistics: Jim Smith also said, " It wasn't the radiation that was effecting the animals." Which means that radiation won't kill them, but it could be possible.

5. Concluding Sentence: As you can see it is not the radiation that will effect the animals, it is us that will effect the animals.

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Topic Sentence: He had very funny sayings.

Example: For instance, he made up "It ain't over till it's over.

Opinion: It sees to me that most of his sayings are trying to tell us to keep on trying.

Fact or Statistic: The quote "When the tough get going the going gets tough" means when it get's hard you can give up or you can be tough.

Concluding Sentence: As you can see he wanted people to succeed.

He had very funny sayings. For instance, he made up "It ain't over till it's over. It sees to me that most of his sayings are trying to tell us to keep on trying. The quote "When the tough get going the going gets tough" means when it get's hard you can give up or you can be tough. As you can see he wanted people to succeed.

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Topic Sentence: Yogi never gave up.

Example: To illustrate, he never quit baseball, he just found other teams.

Opinion: I believe he is very committed to baseball.

Anecdote: On one occasion, My dad went to a Yankees game. He bought some tickets to try to meet Yogi in person. While he was waiting Yogi Berra he watched him make 7 strikeouts, 2 of which he caught. Then in-between the game the announcer called the number to meet Yogi himself. My dad got lucky enough to win it! When he met Yogi he got his autograph and asked him if it was easy being a baseball player . He replied by saying "When the going gets tough the tough gets going."

Concluding Sentence: As you can see he never gave up.

Yogi never gave up. To illustrate, he never quit baseball, he just found other teams. I believe he is very committed to baseball. On one occasion, My dad went to a Yankees game. He bought some tickets to try to meet Yogi in person. While he was waiting Yogi Berra he watched him make 7 strikeouts, 2 of which he caught. Then in-between the game the announcer called the number to meet Yogi himself. My dad got lucky enough to win it! When he met Yogi he got his autograph and asked him if it was easy being a baseball player . He replied by saying "When the going gets tough the tough gets As you can see he never gave up.

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1. Give feeling: Dolphins are kind, strong and lovable animals like no other in the whole ocean.

2. Explain: If dauphins die out we won't have them to help us!

3. restate information: After you read this essay I hope you learned how special dolphins are, how you can protect dolphins and that dolphins are harmless to humans usually.

4. I also hope that dolphins can live a happy life beginning to their end so that can help us when we need them to

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1.Thesis Statement: Equally important, dolphin also protect and save humans from shark attacks.

2. Example: For example, these animals are very kind fast and strong.

3. Opinion: I think dolphins are very strong and can protect humans easily.

4. 1st fact: Based on the article " Dolphins Save Surfer From Becoming Shark Bait," it saids Surfer Todd Endris needed a miracle. The shark — a monster great white that came out of nowhere — had hit him three times, peeling the skin off his back and mauling his right leg to the bone. That’s when a pod of bottlenose dolphins intervened, forming a protective ring around Endris, allowing him to get to shore, where quick first aid provided by a friend saved his life. ( November 8, 2007)

5. Explain: This means when a surfer Todd Endris was being attacked by a great white, a pod of bottlenose dolphins appeared from nowhere and protected him to shore.

6. Opinion: I think humans and dolphins have some kind of relationship and these two animals will be very good partners.

2nd Fact: Also based on the article " Dolphins save drowning dog," it relates, "On Marco Island, Florida a group of dolphins came to the aid of a lost Dog that had fallen into a canal and couldn’t get out. The dolphins made so much noise, it attracted the attention of people living nearby, who then rescued the dog. The Dog was believed to have spent 15 hours in the canal water before he was pulled out by fire personnel and reunited with his owner. " ( March 16, 2013)

7. Explain: This means that dolphins are not only kind to humans but these animals are also kind to animals like dogs.

8. Opinion: In my opinion, I think dolphins are incredible creatures and will be good with lots of animals.

9. Conclusion: As you can see, dolphins can also save humans from shark attacks.

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1. The main points of this S.A. is that it is about how people can make the drones be better so they do not irritate the firefighters, or cause something worse.

2. The drones crashes are getting more major than before.  There needs to be something done about the drone crashes.

3. My S.A. is important because this S.A will help the world with the drones and firefighters more better.

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1. Thesis statement: Firefighters are starting to shoot down the drones that are in the firefighters way.

2.example: In explanation the drones are getting shot by a gun because they are getting in the firefighters way.

3. opinion: In my opinion I think that this is a good idea because the drones will not make the firefighters to do two things at a time.

4. fact or statistic: From the fire aviation they say that firefighters on wildland fires might keep this tactic in mind. If drones are spotted over these fires it is likely that firefighting helicopters and air tankers will be grounded since collisions with drones could be very serious.

5. concluding scentence: As you can see that shooting down drones can be one of the best situations to solve the problem.

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1.Thesis statement: Also dolphins can be trained to help the navy.

2. Example: Dolphins are trained in the navy to find and disable mines.

3. I think that Dolphins are very useful in the navy and save people's lives.

4. Anecdote: On one occasion, I was reading a book in my room early in the morning. After 5 minutes, my dad came and said that we could go to a dolphin navy show! I packed my camera, book, dolphin cap, some snacks and went into the car. It took us 1 hour to get their, but when we arrived, their was a stadium full of saltwater that was bigger than a baseball stadium! My dad and I got our tickets and went to our VIP seats. We waited 5 minutes and then 3 dolphins had risen on the water! After that some navy came and the show began. At the show the dolphins caught, fish in the air, did tricks and even found a shell underwater! But suddenly a time clock started going. I knew what was going on. There was a time mine underwater! The dolphins wasted no time. They dove to the area of the mine, pored the mine then they brought the mine up, then the navy disabled the bomb and now the mine had diffused!! Everyone applauded for the dolphin, and the best art begot to swim with them!!! After 2 hours, we left the dolphin show and went to a hotel.

5. Conclusion sentence: As you can see, dolphins can be trained to help the navy.

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1. Topic Sentence: People left the area 30 years ago, so the animals took over the area.

2. Example: If people don't come to Belarus, then there will be a bunch of animals and the population of animals will grow.

3. Opinion: I imagine that there will be 3 times as much as animals in Belarus in the year of 2017.

4. Anecdote: Once in chess club, my friend said, " if you get of it, then other people could steal it." I was running away with the chair from another friend that was trying to get me off of the chair. He almost made me get off the chair, but he didn't. I got off the chair to get a snack. But then my friend got the chair.

5. Concluding Sentence: As you can see, if nobody is controlling a place, then something or someone can take over.

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1. Topic Sentence: He was MVP three times.

2. Example: For example, he was one of the only two pitchers who got MVP.

3. Opinion: In my opinion, I think that Yogi Berra is a great player.

4. 2nd Reason:Yogi Berra was not lucky to get MVP.

5.Example: For Instance, He is one out of 9 baseball players to win three MVPs.

6.Opinion:I think that if he was still alive that people would ask him about how much he tried to get MVP.

7. Evidence Based Claim: According to Biography.com Editors Yogi was an outstanding player and coach.

8.Concluding sentence: Clearly, he was a really good player.

He was MVP three times. For example, he was one of the only two pitchers who got MVP. In my opinion, I think that Yogi Berra is a great player. Yogi Berra was not lucky to get MVP. For Instance, He is one out of 9 baseball players to win three MVPs. According to Biography.com Editors Yogi was an outstanding player and coach. Clearly, he was a really good player.

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1. Thesis statement:A great way for drones to not bother the firefighters when they are doing work is by asking the president to do something about the drones.

2. example: This means that the president will be talking or making a law so that the drones don't bother the firefighters.

3. opinion: In my opinion I think this will help the drones to stay out of trouble.

4. anedote:The other day I was talking in a meeting with a chief of a fire department and the president I thought that the president should make a law that said that you can not fly a drone near or in the area of a fire. The chief thought I was a genius but then the president said why bother than there will be bad guys that will fly the drone over the fire. He said it would just be a waist of time. I was about to give up my idea but then I got an idea in my head. I said that what the president said was not true because the robbers would not know where the fire was. Only if the robber could see the smoke, and there would probably some cops near the fire so my idea was great then the president was speechless after a minute or so he said that it was agreed.

5. concluding sentence:As you can see the president could be a big part in helping the firefighters.

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1. Topic Sentence: The number of animals grew in the wildlife of Belarus.

2. Example: In particular, if people aren't in a city or a town, then animals will take over the town or a city.

3. Opinion: It sees to me that the animals and the plants are living happily because no human will kill them.

4. 2nd Reason: No humans will try to kill the animals.

5. Example: For instance, people will use animals to get money.

6. Opinion: Not everyone will agree with me, but maybe there was no radiation, then maybe some animals will be extinct.

7. Evidence Claims: According to the text, it says " The study shows that the animals increased by a large amount." The text also says that "the animals increased because a Chernobyl Nuclear Power Plant exploded. So the people that were living in that area had to evacuate the area. The animal numbers were low when scientists counted in 1987. The population of animals grew after the humans evacuated the area.

8. Concluding Sentence: The animals will not worry because no human will kill them.

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1. 1st Reason: Dolphins are useful to humans because these animals can give therapy treatment.

2. Explain: For example, the doctor of a patient don’t have to waste their time because he or she can use a dolphin to help the patient.

3. Opinion: In my opinion it is a great idea to just let a dolphin take care of the patient.

4. 2 Reason: Based on the article Dolphins Helping Children in Panama Island states that, "The emotional impact of a dolphin encounter in his own environment combined with expressive art, massage, crainosacral therapy, and music can be a beneficial experience for emotionally challenged fragile children."

5. Explain 2nd Reason: This explains that dolphins are very playful, active, and fun, so they can be very helpful to children with emotion problems.

6. Opinion: I think dolphin will be very popular and will be used widely around the world.

7. According to the shallow waters of dolphin therapy claims it saids "Dolphins are some of the most charming, charismatic and entertaining animals in the ocean. Adding to their mystique, they have gained a reputation for their supposed healing powers over the last couple of decades." ( July 18, 2011)

8. Dolphin are very useful to humans in therapy.

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1. Hook: In the saltwater oasis, their are pretty dolphins gracefully swimming in the water.

2. Factual Information: For example, dolphins can help fisherman!

3.Explain Factual Information: This means we should protect dolphins so they can help us.

4. Opinion: In my opinion, dolphins are incredible animals and are smarter than humans.

5. Dolphins are useful to humans because these animals can give therapy treatment. Also dolphins can be trained to help the navy. Equally important, dolphins also protect and save humans from shark attacks

6.Explain 3 reasons: We should treat the environment healthy so the dolphins can live safely. If the water gets polluted and dolphins die out, we won't have them to help us in all the things that they can! This means that the world will become a more dangerous and difficult place.

7. Thesis Statement:

We have to protect dolphins so they can help us out.

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1. Thesis statement: If there is sensors on drones that would be a very big part of drones to not cause crashes.

2. Example: This means that the drones will have a device on the drones, and the device will let the drone know when it is near a object like a helicopter.

3. Opinion: In my opinion the sensor process is a great idea because the drone will know when it is going to crash into something.

4. 2nd reason: The drones will surely know when it is going to crash into a object.

5. explain: This will mean that the drones will sense a helicopter or a plane that is going to come too close to the drone and will move out of its way.

6. Opinion: In my opinion this will help lots and lots of people, or firefighters, pilots.

7. evedence based claim:SAN DIEGO, Calif. — Helicopter pilot Jason Thrasher was fighting a fire in California. All of a sudden, he saw what he thought was another helicopter battling the blaze. He realized the object was a remote-controlled airplane, called a drone. It was only 10 feet from his windshield. He had to turn the helicopter sharply to avoid hitting it, according to a report.

8. concluding scentence: clearly the sensors will help very much.

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1. Hook: Today was a loss of a great baseball player, Yogi Berra.

2. Factual Information: Yogi made many sayings that we admire today.

3. Explain Factual Information: A reporter once asked him if the season was over. His reply was "It ain't over till it's over."

4. 3 Reasons: For every World Series he competed in he put a ring on each finger.  He switched and switched jobs. He also had very funny sayings.

5. Thesis Statement: I bet if Yogi Berra was still alive that he would want to be a manager or coach.

Today was a loss of a great baseball player, Yogi Berra. Yogi made many sayings that we admire today. A reporter once asked him if the season was over. His reply was "It ain't over till it's over." For every World Series he competed in he put a ring on each finger.  He switched and switched jobs. He also had very funny sayings. I bet if Yogi Berra was still alive that he would want to be a manager or coach.

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1. hook: Small drones can cause very big trouble in bon fires. 2. Factaul information: The drones will approve if they have sensors on the drones so they do not crash into a helicopter that is trying to fight a fire.

3. explain factaul information: The cause of the sensor will be that the drones will not crash into a plane or a helicopter.

4. Opinion I think that the sensors will really help saving some trouble.

5. 3 reasons:

1. If there is sensors on drones that would be a very big part of drones to not cause crashes.

2. The presedants should do something about the drones.

3.Firefighters are starting to shoot down the drones when they are near fires.

6. Thesis statement: There needs to be something done about the drone crashes.

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1. Hook: Around 30 years ago, the Chernobyl Nuclear Power Plant exploded.

2. Factual Information: No one lives at the border of Belarus and the Ukraine because their is a high level of radiation from the explosion.

3. Explain factual information: Radiation is dangerous and can make people get sick and maybe die

4. 3 reasons: If people still live there, then they would probably die because everybody will get sick and no one will be able to cure you. Since everyone evacuated from the border of Belarus and the Ukraine, animals started moving in and they are happy. The number of animals and plants are getting larger because nobody will be able to kill them, unless somebody drops a type of bomb.

5. Thesis statement: I think the animals and plants are growing because nobody is polluting the area and nobody is going to kill them