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Most significant challenges I faced during IFP

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Significant challenges I faced during IFP

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Significant challenges I faced during IFP

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APPLIED ACADEMIC SKILLS
After receiving feedback about my academic writing, I realized that I have made mistakes in my writing which made me score 21 and O in the two writings
respectively, they are reasons for this though.
Firstly, in my first task which I scored 21 I tried to balance the introduction paragraph but it did not turn out well because I did not a proper thesis
statement, I did not give a proper outline of the essay in the paragraph and I did not give a well-developed paragraph. In the body paragraph of the essay I
got 76% match overview because I did not properly paraphrase the copied information I got from the internet, in the concluding paragraph the essay the
paragraph did not link with the thesis statement in the introduction paragraph, and finally I did not give Reference to the citations used in entire essay.
Secondly, in the writing task 2 which I believe I did better in than the first was not submitted, I submitted the wrong PDF file which made me
score a 0 mark and a reply from the tutor saying *You have submitted your Applied Academic Skills Task 2 - not your Writing Task 2. Get more
organized."
To improve on iny writing I have to write a well-balanced introduction paragraph, paraphrase the information I get from the internet and also give a
reference list at the end of the writing and I also need to be more organized next time when submitting my course work.
Finally, giving a balanced introduction, body and concluding paragraph will help me score higher marks and it will also help me in Research Project
work

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My progress in my IFP mid-course assessment!

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My progress in my IFP mid-course assessment!