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Have you ever had an enemy well in the story Enemy Pie the main character was happy at first then he got angry because Jeremy Rose moved in the neighborhood then he created an enemy list which he never had. No matter what book you read characters change from the beginning to the end.In the beginning of the story the boy thought “it should have been a good summer” because he was on the best baseball team. He and his dad made a treehouse and his sister is in camp, until Jeremy Rose moved in the neighborhood.When Jeremy Rose moved in the neighborhood the boy had an enemy because he didn’t invite him to his party and laughed at him when he lost in baseball. He told his dad and he made enemy pie. The boy was happy when the enemy pie was done but then he was sad because he had spent one day with Jeramy Rose so the enemy pie can work.In the end when the boy was playing with Jeremy Rose he started liking him “he was not being a good enemy” he said. When it was time for lunch he thought “maybe we should just forget about enemy pie”. The boy said to his dad “it’s nice having a new friend in town” but he just nodded. He gave everyone a big slice the boy was panicking. He didn't want Jeremy to eat the pie stopped Jeremy and said “don't eat  that i think it is poisonous or something”. Jeramy stopped the fork reaching his mouth he said “if it's so bad why has your dad eaten half of it”.If you ever have a enemy that is not a bully, become friends with him.

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Have you ever had an enemy well in the story Enemy Pie the main character was happy at first then he got angry because Jeremy Rose moved in the neighborhood then he created an enemy list which he never had. No matter what book you read characters change from the beginning to the end.In the beginning of the story the boy thought “it should have been a good summer” because he was on the best baseball team. He and his dad made a treehouse and his sister is in camp, until Jeremy Rose moved in the neighborhood.When Jeremy Rose moved in the neighborhood the boy had an enemy because he didn’t invite him to his party and laughed at him when he lost in baseball. He told his dad and he made enemy pie. The boy was happy when the enemy pie was done but then he was sad because he had spent one day with Jeramy Rose so the enemy pie can work.In the end when the boy was playing with Jeremy Rose he started liking him “he was not being a good enemy” he said. When it was time for lunch he thought “maybe we should just forget about enemy pie”. The boy said to his dad “it’s nice having a new friend in town” but he just nodded. He gave everyone a big slice the boy was panicking. He didn't want Jeremy to eat the pie stopped Jeremy and said “don't eat  that i think it is poisonous or something”. Jeramy stopped the fork reaching his mouth he said “if it's so bad why has your dad eaten half of it”.If you ever have a enemy that is not a bully, become friends with him.

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Character change literary essay draft enemy pie

The main character from Enemy Pie changed from the beginning of the story to the end because at the start he did not like his enemy, Jeremy Ross. He hated him because he wasn’t invited to his party on a trampoline, I know that because in the text it states “ He had a party on his trampoline, and I wasn’t invited. “ which caused him to make his enemy list on his Tree House.

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Today I read a book called Enemy Pie by Derek Munson . It’s about the relationship between two boys and how the main character changed during the story. In the beginning of the story the boy was feeling mean and angry because he thought that Jeremy the new neighbor was his enemy. Jeremy laughed at the boy when he struck him out and also didn’t invite him to jump on the trampoline. At the end of the story the two boys became close and began friendship. They got to spend more time together and got to know each other. The boy changed his mind about Jeremy.

In the beginning the boy wanted to make Jeremy feel bad. For example he asked his father to help him how to make Jeremy feel this way. The dad offered to make Enemy Pie so the boy could feed Jeremy. The boy kept asking his dad if he needed disgusting ingredients like weeds and earthworms to put into pie. The text says that the boy's dad did not need that but he told him to spend a day with Jeremy and also be nice to him.

At first the boy was nervous to ask Jeremy to play with him. Jeremy asked his mom and agreed to play together. Jeremy invited him to jump on a trampoline and both boys had a good time. This is important because the boy opposite to what he thought before was actually enjoying his enemy’s company.

The boy's dad invited Jeremy and his son to have Enemy pie he cooked. The text says the boy tried to tell his dad that Jeremy was no longer his enemy. The boy tried to alert Jeremy by shouting “Jeremy, don’t eat the pie”.  This is important because he tried to save his enemy from being hurt. Jeremy is now his good friend. Dad laughed at all of this. After all, they had a good time eating delicious pie together. Jeremy invited him to his trampoline in the morning.

In the end the boy was happy because he didn’t think of Jeremy as an enemy any more. He learned that you can not judge other people from what they are doing and how they look before you actually spend time with them and get to know them.

The boy now has a new good friend. He no longer wants revenge on Jeremy.  By spending time together the boy understood that Jeremy is a good boy and they can be friends.

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 Introduction                         In the book enemy pie by dereck munson, a boy is unhappy because he had enemies. his enemy is jeremy Ross The boy did not like him. In the middle of the story the boy felt  that Jeremy was not as bad as the boy thought because he got to  know his enemy better and the boy thinks that Jeremy is not that bad at all .In the end the boy was happier because  his enemy is now his best friend. all it took is to spend time with your enemy that will make your enemy become your best friend just like what happened to jeremy and the boy. The boy changed from unhappy to happy in the end. In the beginning of the story the boy was not happy because he had 1 enemy. The enemy’s name was Jeremy Ross. He was the boy’s enemy because  Jeremy Ross laughed when he struck the boy out. He had a party on his trampoline, and the boy wasn’t invited.one day the boy told his father that he had an enemy and his father knew what to get rid of the enemy because in the text it says his dad told him he could make the pie. The dad said for the pie to work you need to spend a day with your enemy. To make the pie work.So the boy went and did what his father said he went to Jeremy Ross's househe knocked on the door to see if anybody was home. Then somebody answered the door and Jeremy answered it and the boy asked if he could play with jeremy. Jeremy asked his mom she said yes so jeremy and the boy played with jeremy for the whole afternoon they played many games at jeremy house then later.they went to the boy’s house jeremy taught the boy to shoot a bumerang when the boy tried it the bumerang it went in to the back yard when they climbed the fence the first thing jeremy saw was the tree house then when they got to the back yard jeremy asked the boy if they can go in it the boy said ya but he said wait the boy went up then ripped it off the wall then crumbled it up then through to the other side then the boy said to jeremy you can come up.They played until the boy dad called them down to eat dinner.They had macaroni and cheese it was jeremy’s favorite too. The boy said Maybe Jeremy Ross wasn’t so bad after all. I was beginning to think that we should just forget about Enemy Pie. After dinner the boy’s dad brought out the enemy pie then the boy got worried. The boy was scared because in the text it says ‘“Wow!” Jeremy said. “My dad never makes pies like this. Suddenly The boy panicked.  I didn’t want Jeremy to eat Enemy Pie! He was my friend!“Jeremy, don’t eat it! I think it’s poisonous or something!” Jeremy crumbled his eyebrows and looked at me funny. I felt relieved I had saved his life. I was a hero.“If it’s so bad,” Jeremy asked, “why has your dad already eaten half of it?” I looked at my dad. He was eating Enemy Pie!“Good stuff,” was all Dad said. I watched them eat Enemy Pie. Dad was laughing. Jeremy was happily eating. And neither of them was losing any hair! It seemed safe enough so I took a tiny taste. EnemyPie was delicious!                                            Conclusion                             In conclusion the character changed from the beginning  to the end you saw how the character changed multiple times throughout  the story.in the begging he was not very happy you saw why he was not happy in the middle he was feeling better because he got to know his enemy better and in the end the boy thought jeremy was not bad the only way hehe found that out was to spend some time with your enemy than he won’t be that bad at all he won’t feel that bad at all.thank you for reading my story hope you had enjoyed it as much as I had writing this story for you guys to read to what I did to write the story    

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 Introduction                         In the book enemy pie by dereck munson, a boy is unhappy because he had enemies. his enemy is jeremy Ross The boy did not like him. In the middle of the story the boy felt  that Jeremy was not as bad as the boy thought because he got to  know his enemy better and the boy thinks that Jeremy is not that bad at all .In the end the boy was happier because  his enemy is now his best friend. all it took is to spend time with your enemy that will make your enemy become your best friend just like what happened to jeremy and the boy. The boy changed from unhappy to happy in the end. In the beginning of the story the boy was not happy because he had 1 enemy. The enemy’s name was Jeremy Ross. He was the boy’s enemy because  Jeremy Ross laughed when he struck the boy out. He had a party on his trampoline, and the boy wasn’t invited.one day the boy told his father that he had an enemy and his father knew what to get rid of the enemy because in the text it says his dad told him he could make the pie. The dad said for the pie to work you need to spend a day with your enemy. To make the pie work.So the boy went and did what his father said he went to Jeremy Ross's househe knocked on the door to see if anybody was home. Then somebody answered the door and Jeremy answered it and the boy asked if he could play with jeremy. Jeremy asked his mom she said yes so jeremy and the boy played with jeremy for the whole afternoon they played many games at jeremy house then later.they went to the boy’s house jeremy taught the boy to shoot a bumerang when the boy tried it the bumerang it went in to the back yard when they climbed the fence the first thing jeremy saw was the tree house then when they got to the back yard jeremy asked the boy if they can go in it the boy said ya but he said wait the boy went up then ripped it off the wall then crumbled it up then through to the other side then the boy said to jeremy you can come up.They played until the boy dad called them down to eat dinner.They had macaroni and cheese it was jeremy’s favorite too. The boy said Maybe Jeremy Ross wasn’t so bad after all. I was beginning to think that we should just forget about Enemy Pie. After dinner the boy’s dad brought out the enemy pie then the boy got worried. The boy was scared because in the text it says ‘“Wow!” Jeremy said. “My dad never makes pies like this. Suddenly The boy panicked.  I didn’t want Jeremy to eat Enemy Pie! He was my friend!“Jeremy, don’t eat it! I think it’s poisonous or something!” Jeremy crumbled his eyebrows and looked at me funny. I felt relieved I had saved his life. I was a hero.“If it’s so bad,” Jeremy asked, “why has your dad already eaten half of it?” I looked at my dad. He was eating Enemy Pie!“Good stuff,” was all Dad said. I watched them eat Enemy Pie. Dad was laughing. Jeremy was happily eating. And neither of them was losing any hair! It seemed safe enough so I took a tiny taste. EnemyPie was delicious!                                            Conclusion                             In conclusion the character changed from the beginning  to the end you saw how the character changed multiple times throughout  the story.in the begging he was not very happy you saw why he was not happy in the middle he was feeling better because he got to know his enemy better and in the end the boy thought jeremy was not bad the only way hehe found that out was to spend some time with your enemy than he won’t be that bad at all he won’t feel that bad at all.thank you for reading my story hope you had enjoyed it as much as I had writing this story for you guys to read to what I did to write the story    

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 A little boy is hurt when a neighbour strikes  him out in a baseball game and then has a party to celebrate.when he tells his father about  it his father makes an enemy pie  that is   guaranteed  to get rid of enemies but only if the boy spends full day with his enemy                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               .                                                                                                                                                          in the beginning  he was happy  excited    because his fother  build a treehouse his sister was in camp and he was a bets team of baseball  he was happy and excited because he was having the best summer of ever.                                                                                                                                                                                                                        .                                                                                                                                                                                           in the middle  the charter changed from happy to mad and angry  because Jeremy moved in. but  Jeremy laughed when he struck him  out  and he had a party on his trampoline  and  he was not  invited   and he was mad.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      .                                                                                                                                                                                          And in the end  he was happy he had  fun because they play together’ and he changed from happy to mad into happy and friendly   and he disliked  Jeremy because he thought he was   mean  but playing weight Jeremy  changed him  the character learned not to judge someone how he was .   

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 A little boy is hurt when a neighbour strikes  him out in a baseball game and then has a party to celebrate.when he tells his father about  it his father makes an enemy pie  that is   guaranteed  to get rid of enemies but only if the boy spends full day with his enemy                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               .                                                                                                                                                          in the beginning  he was happy  excited    because his fother  build a treehouse his sister was in camp and he was a bets team of baseball  he was happy and excited because he was having the best summer of ever.                                                                                                                                                                                                                        .                                                                                                                                                                                           in the middle  the charter changed from happy to mad and angry  because Jeremy moved in. but  Jeremy laughed when he struck him  out  and he had a party on his trampoline  and  he was not  invited   and he was mad.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      .                                                                                                                                                                                          And in the end  he was happy he had  fun because they play together’ and he changed from happy to mad into happy and friendly   and he disliked  Jeremy because he thought he was   mean  but playing weight Jeremy  changed him  the character learned not to judge someone how he was .   

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but you need to finish

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Andrew I think I can give you a 1 because you are missing parts of the essay. I have 1 question, did he hate Jeremy or did he just of him as an enemy?

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 scarlett i like it  on the beginning middle and end  and i like how you write a  lot  it relly good 

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 scarlett i like it  on the beginning middle and end  and i like how you write a  lot  it relly good 

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I like that you have bold words in your writing

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Daniel Kalinin : I learned that you need to spend time with your enemies before you judge them

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It has 5 paragraphs and had great punctuation and spelling

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 scarlett i like how  you tell how he change in the story  and i like your beginning of the story  

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 scarlett i like how  you tell how he change in the story  and i like your beginning of the story  

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do you mean pie when you wrote cake? and your bold words express alot of expresions

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Your introduction, I really like it. You asked a lot of questions.

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i like how you write the main character as a little boy       

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i like how you write the main character as a little boy       

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and i love it:) leo

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I like your writing piece you used text evidence but i still will perfer more text evidence and in the beggining the boy acctually wasn't mad he was having a fun time your punctuation is good though I loved the story though

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I like your Punctuation spelling in your writing and your lead maid me want to read a lot more of your writing to find out what happened next

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Andrew you are missing 4 paragraph you only did one .

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scarlett it relly good how you tell the  character  how it change  

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scarlett it relly good how you tell the  character  how it change  

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Spelling and punctuation is good and there is 5 paragraphs and has text evidence

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LOVEEEEEE IT! I like your punctuation I also like your introduction you put a little to much deatails on some of the paraghrahs great information i think your missing a pharaghraph though so i would perfer to add another paragrah is you can but i love it i love the deatils. And i think if you added like some questions on the intro it would be great :D

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I like your Punctuation and grammar. It makes me wanna read more.

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I  liked your introduction but I want more text evidence from the story

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Mrs. Mahoney               Xiyang your essay is very well organized.  Your text evidence is directly related to your ideas. 

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Mrs. Mahoney               Xiyang your essay is very well organized.  Your text evidence is directly related to your ideas. 

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Jace i like your writing but next time try to organize your writing it hard for me to know were the beginning and the end is at .

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I like in the begging you asked a question and you know when it is the time to put punctuation when needed and your spelling is also good

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your introduction is really good i like it and i like how you add big word to your writing and i like how you ask lot of Questions it make me want to read more .
Good Job Umut ! :D

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i think it is really good, and the evidence is really good too. you can turn this to a life lesson. :)Leo weng(:

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i think it is really good, and the evidence is really good too. you can turn this to a life lesson. :)Leo weng(:

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Mrs. Mahoney                Cindy, I like your introduction.  You used examples from the text to back up your ideas. 

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Mrs. Mahoney                Cindy, I like your introduction.  You used examples from the text to back up your ideas. 

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Mrs. Mahoney                             Fiona, you have a good conclusion, summing up your entire essay.  Please check for capitalization, Enemy Pie, Jeremy Ross.  Remember we are not retelling the story, so you don't have to put all of those details in.

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Mrs. Mahoney                             Fiona, you have a good conclusion, summing up your entire essay.  Please check for capitalization, Enemy Pie, Jeremy Ross.  Remember we are not retelling the story, so you don't have to put all of those details in.

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you only put one paragraph but in the paragrah you put good quotation marks in the writing

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I like how you described the boy's feelings in the introduction and added details

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Xiyang i like how your essay is very oranized :D

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Omggggg! I love your writing you put a lot of text evidence which is great just i would add a little bit more to your conclusion but over all i loved it :D good job!!

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Mrs. Mahoney             Yuyang, remember to introduce your writing  you want to use a good lead, one that maybe asks a questions or uses humor.  You want to grab your audiences' attention.

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Mrs. Mahoney             Yuyang, remember to introduce your writing  you want to use a good lead, one that maybe asks a questions or uses humor.  You want to grab your audiences' attention.

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i like your middle part and introduction and i like how you said the boy was caring at the end. :)Leo weng(;

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i like your middle part and introduction and i like how you said the boy was caring at the end. :)Leo weng(;

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wow i like how you put it so organized and your grammer perfect and punctuation great!!

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You did it good but add more details and paragraphs

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WOWWW!! i love how you add lot of text evidence to your Essay .

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FIONA                                  love it!!!!!! the great words and you put big words in your writing   

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FIONA                                  love it!!!!!! the great words and you put big words in your writing   

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ilke your essay but i think your need to add more text evidence.

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Great JOB!!!!!! love it like your punctuation but alot of deatails its organized but if i were you i would add more on pharagraph 3 and 5 loveit tho great job it shows me you added so much effort :)

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Character change literary essay  enemy pie

By- ANDREW TEYTELMAN

The main character from “Enemy Pie” by Derek Munson, changed from the beginning of the story to the end. The main character was not on good terms with Jeremy Ross since he moved into the neighborhood, this all changes when the main character gets to knows Jeremy Ross better. At the start, he was displeased with his enemy, Jeremy Ross. However, in the end, He was spent a whole day with his ex-enemy and was delighted and joyful with him.

At the beginning of the story, the main character was displeased with his enemy. In fact, the main character never even had an enemy list before Jeremy Ross moved into the neighborhood. The main character was displeased because he was not invited to Jeremy Ross’ trampoline party. This outraged him and led him to create an enemy list with Jeremy’s name on it which he stuck on his treehouse door, forbidding him to come in. Another reason why he was displeased was that Jeremy struck him out of the baseball game and laughed. This led the main character to seek help from his father by making an Enemy pie.

At the end of the story, the main character spent a whole day with his ex-enemy and was delighted and joyful with him. His father prepared a delicious pie for Jeremy to bring the two boys closer together. This helped the boys form a friendship together and not oppose each other. He joyful because he made a new friend that day and he got to jump on the trampoline which he wanted. “ After dessert, Jeremy rode his bike back home, but not before inviting me to play on his trampoline the next morning. He said he is going to teach me how to flip.” This shows that Jeremy and the main character are now friends with each other and don’t hate one another since they play and hang out with one another.

In conclusion, you can see how the main character changed from the beginning to the end. In the beginning, he was displeased and did not get along with Jeremy. Finally, in the end, he shows that he formed a friendship between Jeremy and him being an enemy was all in the past. The father helped the two boys out and made sure enemy pie formulated their friendship, they both got to know each other better and ended up being friends.

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