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in this script it is very detailed and it makes the viewer who is reading it feels the emotion from th characters however there are a few spelling mistakes which need to be changed and you could add some more punctuation. i also think that you have used lots of conventions of the zombie genre and i also like how they lowered their voices when infected were nearby.

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This a very detailed script and the way you make the characters lower their voices when the zombies are near to them brings in a sense of suspense.
However, you need to look at your spelling.

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your intentions for the script to be suspenful has been shown and it is very detailled.  Need to go over spelling mistakes and grammar. i think that it is a very well written adn has lots of conventions of the zombie genre. i would improve the length of the script by making it shorter

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The script is very detailed and clearly makes the readers aware of what is happening within the scene due to many stage directions. We can clearly see that this is a zombie horror film, as it represents the genre clearly.

The only thing i can say is that it needs to be checked for spelling and grammar.

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The script is very detailed, max has paid lots of effort ensuring that the movie meets the genre of a zombie film. One improvement could be to make a smaller margin in speech, this is so the actor can easily see speech over stage direction.

you can really understand what the characters are like just looking at their seech.

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the idea of my script was that it was meant to be very suspenceful and scary for the audeice readng the scirpt and they are meant to feel the way the characters feel

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the idea of my script was that it was meant to be very suspenceful and scary for the audeice readng the scirpt and they are meant to feel the way the characters feel

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I like how you based the script in a forest as its very desilate so no help can get to the charachters, by this they have to use their knowledge to fight for survivial against the zombies

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this script is very detailed and is very good 

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this script is very detailed and is very good 