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Why am I being sent away?
Trying to be the strong man of the house.
The cellar. Cold... Dark...
In fifteen minutes time he will be setting off to the station and in thirty minutes time mum will be home.

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Parenthesis
Ellipsis
?, !
Repetition
Relative Clauses
Semi Colons
Colons
Adverbs- Remember- Time, Reason, Manner, Place.
Speech- It is not a conversation
Formal/ Informal Language
- Changing to passive voice (By zombies- O, V, S)
-Contractions
-Idioms
-Similes
-Dialect- Mr Tom Yorkshire, Formal tone of Bruno, David (Young- informal thoughts and feelings)

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Believe
Friend
Billeting officer
Isolated
Evacuee
Memories
Realise

Things to remember:
- Use the text- If it isn't in the text then don't write about it.
- Go back through your books, use the word mats
- It is not a story i.e. Events
events, events, it is about thoughts and feelings

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- Thoughts about the home
-Thoughts about Mr Tom
-Why have I been sent here? - Describing the countryside.