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The point of view in "Theo's Song" is 3rd person because the narrator is not involved in the story and there is no "I" or "me".

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This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

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1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 

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1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 

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The point of veiw is in first person and the main character Mich is telling the story

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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What are the universal human rights? - Benedetta Berti

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Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 

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Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 

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The setting is in the smithy and we think it may have been medivel times.

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What do you have to do for this assignment?

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2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 

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2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 

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My story takes  place boston Massatusats, and it takes place around 2002. The stories unjust because if you state your opinion you could be killed. This is a huge bomb zone that Mich and Ruby are trying to escape and so its very hot/ humid.

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How to recognize a dystopia - Alex Gendler

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The two main characters are Theo a 13 year old blacksmith and Neema.

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Student Model for the Writing Prompt

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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Narrator/ Main character #1 Mich
- 15 yrs old
-6'1
-loves to hang out with friends
- has a very strong opioion about the society and its problems
Main character #2 Ruby
- 16 yrs old
-girl
-met mich trying to escape and they instantly became friends and stick together through out everything in the story
- 5'5
-She also is very nice with a strong opioion

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Government is assigning jobs to people without their choice. Theo is told to be a blacksmith when he wants to be a musician. The government gave people jobs they didnt want because people are easier to control when there unhappy.

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How will you be graded for this writing?

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4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 

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4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 

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They both had the same opinion about what was happening and they wanted state them but they didn't want to risk dieing.

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Event #:2 The blacksmiths are working in the smithy.
Event #:1 Theo is taken from the nursery pod and given him his assignment.
Event #:3 Neema explains how the autorities assign people to jobs they hate.
Event #:4 theo made a resolution that will change his life forever
Event # (Climax):Theo sings against the authorities permission.
Event #:Theo gets taken by the authorities and gets punished.
Event #:Neema takes a stand with the blacksmiths and sang
Event #(Resolution): The government relized they cant stop this so they let people pick their jobs.

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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Mich and Ruby both state their opinions and then everyone starts yelling their opinions and they hold a protest and the authorities have nothing they can do to stop all the city so everyone over rides the authorities.

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To not let anyone else control you and this is the theme because when theo and neema and all the other blacksmiths did what they stood up for they got what they wanted rather then letting the government control them

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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They both get more anymore mature and become super close with each other and they finally take a stand for what they want

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What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write.

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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when Mich and Ruby finally take a stand and stand for what they believe in and then everyone joins in starts a protest then they get their way

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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To always stick for what you  have to say and to always say in matter the consequence because you never know what may happen.

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Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you.

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Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you.