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From Rylie, Reese, Shaelin, and Mackenzie #GroupGoals

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From Rylie, Reese, Shaelin, and Mackenzie #GroupGoals

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It needs a hook and that there's too many period breaks, and not enough commas.

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You need to reorganize the paragraph.

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the introduction can't say "I think". it needs a hook, and less periods.

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The introduction needs a quote, interesting fact or something else, that hooks he reader.

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the introduction needs a hook and less periods.

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Needs a hook, they should use commas instead of some of those periods.

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there are to many periods. they need commas and conjunctions

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Give a hook and background information

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Needs a hook and a comma.

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It needs a hook

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It needs a hook and there are to many periods and no commas

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It needs a hook and there are to many periods and no commas

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By hayden

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Needs hook and background information

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It needs a hook and less periods. It should have commas

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It needs a hook and less periods. It should have commas

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Hayden

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Give it a hook, some background information, and add some commas.

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it doesn’t have background knowledge.

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It needs a better hook and more information.

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They could add a hook.

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It needs a hook to make the reader want to keep on reading.

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-who studied homework
-it needs a hook
-claim needs to be the last (first change it to the last)

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Add different types of sentences