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The only thing that will make people stop is they’re own willpower to stop

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The government spends 1.5 billion dollars a year on what they refer to as public relations. This money goes to a bunch of different departments in the United States government but it always is for the same basic things in each of the departments.  They use it for public relations which is just a polite words for propaganda.

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Technological advances are improving the amount of fatal accidents due to drunk driving.

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War Bonds were a major part of what helped America Become victorious in war.

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People aren’t going to stop what they’re doing if it's convenient for them, or that they think they will be okay for doing these things.

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Organized by subject meaning I go from focusing on North Korea and then transitioning to discuss the the United States.

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“Over 85 million Americans bought over $185.7 billion dollars worth of War Bonds which added up to more than 2,000 dollars per person. If we didn’t have this kind of effort from so many Americans buying War Bonds, we could have had a very different outcome of WW2.”

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“What others do not know is that secondhand smoke is actually as harmful as smoking a cigarette itself. Both people are inhaling cancer causing chemicals. And lots of parents all over the world are smoking cigarettes around their own children without knowing the risks they are putting their children in“.

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North Korea’s propaganda is effective in manipulating the minds of their own people, however, render ineffective to outsiders in other countries such as the United State

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Show an example of a paragraph that would be improved by the inclusion of more source material.

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Name the order (Chronological? By subject type? By problem and potential solution? Something else?) Does this order make the best use of your material?

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Show an example of a paragraph that successfully combines secondary and primary source material.

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Which of your sentences really get your point across? Post an example of an idea that you presented well in your paper (or in your presentation).

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Post a thesis, claim or sentence in need of revision.

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What concrete action could someone take in response to your information ?