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It was very upbeat, I like it.

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I liked the imagery with the leaves and describing the food as an "overcooked lump."

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i loved the variety of vocabulary and the conversation was flowing well

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Very clear and good descriptions, really added to the story.

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Love the story, and how you used the words very diferently

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I like how all it took was to trip him.

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I liked the imagery and description

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Chilling! I like how the cultural meal in the crockpot was the children's parents.

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that was such a plot twist but it was very interesting i think you should just add more specific details.

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I love the way this built up, right down to the ending. It was very unnerving.

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The end had me shooketh lol I really liked it.

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I like how it took a different turn than it was in the beginning.

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I like the story going wrong .

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i enjoyed the build up and imgery

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The attempted murder made me laugh. I've never heard of a crockpot as a murder weapon.

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I love the sibling relationship between the two. It's so realistic.

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I love the light comedy having a strong hold in the story! It really shows the dynamic of the family.

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i like the realistic argument between the siblings but i think this could lead to a longer story and understanding why she doesnt like clowns

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The story was very intense, and the dialogue definitely added to it.

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It was interesting and intense

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i think that was such a specific and unique scene and i liked the exposition leading up to it.

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What were the odds of two people using the crockpot as a weapon? I loved the description.

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I liked the use of the crockpot as the weapon. It reminds me of the short story "Lamb to the Slaughter" where a piece of food was the murder weapon.

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it was funny, descriptive, a little creepy

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I love how the detective isn't as disturbed by the crime scene as you think he'd be!

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The sequencing was a bit confusing, but the chilling reoccurrence of events kept was really freaky. The last sentence made the piece. It shaped the entire story from one thing to another. I like that.

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I love how it was a family event with pictures, then there was a creepy clown photobombing them. Well done!

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I love the instant visual loneliness! Great plot twist!

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I love the story idea

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i loved the descriptions, imagery and diction

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I like how the night was going good, everybody was having fun. Then it was just that eerie feeling at the end because nobody noticed the clown figure all night. good work i like this story.

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The vast amount of descriptions and word choices were wonderful!

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I liked clown as an insult. I thought about using that. Nice job!

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This story is told very simply, I like it

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it felt nostalgic, it reminded me of my childhood. I like that the siblings were opposites.

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I liked when the characters kept calling each other clowns

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The way you used the word choices was very unique, good job!

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I liked the description of a bully and his friends as the devil and his disciples. or is that what it was?

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"herd of demons" really stuck with me but i like that you made it easy to feel sympathetic for the narrator

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I think it's interesting how their names kind of represent the personalities of the characters.

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I like the comparison you use in this story especially the strong words.

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Are the names of the characters nicknames?

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This was very well done, I felt so bad for the narrator and the tone was very somber.

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I like how you word your stories. This was a simple story but your description in it  is so unique and intriguing. Good work!

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Very interesting I could see this being an actual book

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I like how it was funny but creepy at the same time.