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Reviewers: Krissy Wall, Brenna Bonner, Danielle Witty, and Kathryn Kalaigian

Positives:
-Clearly organized
- Introduced their goal and what they want their kids to investigate
-The "turn to your partner and investigate" allows students to collaborate

Improvements:
- Facts here and there about plants
-Use your words instead of research hypothesis
-Words may be too big for second graders

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Reviewers: Micayla, Nicolette, Emily and Julia

Did well: very easy to interpret and follow, very animated and aesthetically pleasing as well

Can Improve: N/A we thought it was perfect!

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Reviewers: Krissy Wall, Brenna Bonner, Danielle Witty, and Kathryn Kalaigian

Positives:
-Colorful
-Video for auditory learners
-Fonts are good and large
-Easy to follow

Improvements:
-Add link to kahoot
-Instructions on how to use kahoot
-Specify the grade

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Reviewers: Callie, Megan W, Kate, Kira

Positives:
-nice graphics and a lot of information

Improvements:
-condense into a more creative and appealing document
-provide a step process
-clarify activites

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Reviewers: Callie, Megan W, Kate, Kira

Positives:
-super kid friendly
-fun colors
-awesome activity with dragging the alligators

Improvements:
-maybe try and relate it to something larger? how we can use this in others ways

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Reviewers: Callie, Megan W, Kira, Kate

Positives:
-it's really nice how you explained everything the lesson will include like providing an agenda.
-also we liked the post activity as well.

Improvements:
-maybe try to condense the information. it's a lot of information and can be hard for younger students to not get distracted

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Reviewers: Kousidis, et al.
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Reviewers: Cameron, Megan, Sydney, Catherine

Positives include...
-different ways for students to digest information
-colorful, appealing graphics
Areas that could improve include...
-clarifying the sequence of events
-make it more interactive
-narrowing your topic

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Reviewers: Micayla, Nicolette, Emily and Julia

Did well: very child friendly, and many interactive components (games, videos, activities)

Can Improve: condense onto one easy-to-read document

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Reviewers: Cameron Tallcouch, Megan Falvey, Sydney Bardsley, Catherine Santangelo

Positives include...
-interactive & engaging
-clear directions
-focused topic
-use of multimedia
Areas that could improve include...
-allowing multiple students to utilize the second slide at once
-another way to evaluate what they've learned
-a way for the teacher to collect the "game" results (second slide)

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Names of Reviewers: Micayla, Nicolette, Emily and Julia

Review of HyperDoc:

Did well: organized, appealing colors, video links, Kahoot game, google maps exploration (many multi-media interactive qualities),

Can Improve: there are a lot of words in the "plan" section, maybe add some more images

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Name of Reviewers: Krissy Wall, Brenna Bonner, Kathryn Kalaigian, Danielle Witty

Positives include:
- organized
- colorful
- Kahoot is the first and last thing they do, helps to show progress
- google maps exploration- can actually look at in a 3D setting. Helps relate to real life experience

Areas that they could improve include:
- More pictures of rural/ urban/ suburban communities