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tell dont show
hi

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show dont tell

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more description

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Explain why you think something

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make sure that you dont be mean when giving advice an dmake sure its useful

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make sure that you dont be mean when giving advice an dmake sure its useful

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JA

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tell them what does or doesn't make sense and why

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Check your grammar and make sure you use the right words. Also when commenting on someones writing be nice and helpful don´t be mean.

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be nice and make sure it makes snece an d its interesting

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don't be rude when you are giving them revisions

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don't be rude when you are giving them revisions

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You could tell them to add for detail

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ja

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1) Thing you liked
2) Constructive criticism
3) Correct spelling error
4) Correct grammar errors

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Give suggestions on how to fix it

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puntuation

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Help them out if they are wrong, be positive when critiquing. 

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Help them out if they are wrong, be positive when critiquing. 

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dont be mean but be nice because it will make them feel good

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dont be mean but be nice because it will make them feel good

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check grammar as well as everything else

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Things that you liked and maybe somethings that dont make sense

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Things that you liked and maybe somethings that dont make sense

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what they liked and what I should change. Also tell me if I am missing anything.

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Stronger dialogue

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Things you like and things that could be better.

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How they think my writing would be more interesting to them or to others.

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How they think my writing would be more interesting to them or to others.

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Go in depth of why someone needs to correct it
Say where they think you could go more in depth

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Things you enjoyed about their story
suggestions
NO CAPS BECAUSE THAT IS RUDE
^^^sorry
Remember to consider that this person might be offended by your words so don't be mean

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2) What they liked
3) what thing they could work on fixing
4) constructive criticisum

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what you thought could be better

suggesting better word choices

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spelling or help them with their dialoge 

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spelling or help them with their dialoge 

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- what they liked

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1. Give thoughtful comments and things that will benefit the narrative. 

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1. Give thoughtful comments and things that will benefit the narrative. 

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2. correct spelling errors, punctuation, and replace words that make the story more fluent.

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Don't talk to the person like their stupid 

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Don't talk to the person like their stupid 

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1) What they liked
2)Word suggestions
3)Suggestions for more interest
4)Any errors

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1.) Don't just check it once, check it multiple times.
2.) If you want to, you can have someone else read it aloud.
3.) Check with the rubrics
4.) Read and make sure there aren't spelling errors.

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- Say why you thought that
- Also say something you like
-Spelling errors
- Dialogue errors
- Transition errors
- use rubric to check