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The countless amount of drops of water in the ocean, including the deepest parts of the abyss, know how to respond to the mysterious forces that create the tide.

The new tone shows respect and reverence towards the tide

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The grand tide touches every corner of the ocean. The force  of the tide exceeds all others created.

The new tone provides praise for the tide while not downplaying anything else.

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"Every part of the ocean from east to west is moved by the tides and its power"

The way its written shows the deepness and importance of water. How strong and forceful it is, Like God or a Storm

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The vast amounts of water in the ocean, including the deepest parts of the abyss, know and respond to the mysterious forces that create the tide.

More clearly illustrates how it seems the ocean responds to even the smallest drop of water.

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The huge mass of water in the ocean works together to create one massive body that forms to make a tide.  Tides are the single most strongest forces in the sea. These tides are so strong that they can be felt more than on hundred fathoms bellow the surface.

The new tone gives it more of an informative.

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Every molecule of water in the ocean responds to the powerful and mysterious forces of the tide, from the deepest abyss to the gentle surface waves.

It provides a more clear term for how powerful the forces of the tide are without adding negative words or ideas.

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The amount of drops in the water in the ocean, especially the one in the deepest parts of the abyss, know and respond to the mysterious forces that create the tide.

The new tone shows appreciation to the tide without the negative effects.

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The many drops of water in the ocean, including the ones in the deepest parts of the abyss, know how to accurately respond to the mysterious forces that have created the tide.

Provides a clear term on how the drops of water can accurately respond to the creation of a tide without having negative ideas or words.

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In the deepest part of the abyss, the drop of water know and respond to the mysterious forces in the ocean that creates the tide.

The tone makes the tide and the ocean not have a negative perspective.

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The abundant amount of water in the ocean, inclusive of the deepest parts of the abyss, that clearly know and respond to the mysterious forces that create the tide.
the new wording makes the abbyss part of the ocean and it makes the water in ocean seem welcoming.

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"The numerous water droplets from the mysterious depths to the  calm of the surface collectively react to the mighty forces of nature that create the tide."

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"Every drop of water works together, from the deepest abyss, to form the forces of the tide.

The negative tone makes the tide seem invincible because the negative words make subjects seem weak.

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The water droplets in the ocean, including the deepest part of the abyss, know and respond to the mysterious forces that create the tide.

The new wording gives the effect of a clear and formal response of how the water responding to the creation of the tide is positive.

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All the water in the ocean, even the deepest abyss, knows and responds to...

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All the water in the ocean, even the deepest abyss, knows and responds to...

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This new wording creates a more inclusive tone for the different levels of the ocean: from the shallowest to the deepest, like a family.