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Wow, all four friends stared at the roller coaster. It was probably the biggest thing any of them had ever seen. It made them shiver of excitement just seeing the big sign that said TWGR (The World's Greatest Rocket). Well one of them wasn’t really paying attention to the rocket for a long time, Arielle was staring at something different. Even though she would want to look at the roller coaster for a little longer she couldn’t help but to notice all the people who had gone in line while they were just standing there!
“Guys! The line is getting a lot bigger then I expected” They looked down at the line and it was so long it went all the way to the “pop the ballon game” that was almost 19 feet away from them. The excitement they had felt was almost gone as quickly as they had rushed to the rocket.
“Well, we have to ride it!” Aston said. The friends looked at each other, they slowly and sadly walked to the end of the line. As they were standing there, probably 40 feet away from the rocket, it felt like 1000 for Arielle. She was very disappointed, she had been watching more then 50 annoying kids, washing dogs that never listened, and she had been smelling like wet grass for months just because she wanted to go on the roller coaster so bad. Now, she has to stand in a 232 minute line until she can actually feel good about the money she had spent with her friends.  As Arielle was standing with her face down at the ground she heard a whisper. Kyle and Caren were looking at something as they started pointing at a mom, a daughter, a dad, and a son.
“Yes, but they have a fast passes on” Caren whispered as Arielle looked at Aston. He slowly walked towards Arielle and smiled.
“We think their leaving. We might be able to get their fast passes if we take the chance.” Arielle looked at Kyle and Caren.
“I’ll go!” Arielle said as she rushed to the mom who seemed super generous. Arielle was pretty sure she was getting their fast passes. As she stopped right in front of the lady the kid started complaining .
“Mama let’s go!!!” The boy said as the mother with crystal blue eyes smiled at Arielle.
“Can I help you?”
“Yes, you can help me and my friends.” Arielle said as the boy looked at his mom.
“Let’s go mama! Take my fast pass I don’t need it.”  The lady took of her fast pass and grabbed the boys hand and told him something. It looked like she said stop it or something but she looked so nice Arielle didn’t believe she would say anything to her son who seemed to be about 4 years old. She took her son’s and daughter’s fast passes and gave it to her husband.
“NO!” Arielle said as all four looked at her. “I mean please don’t give it back” Arielle looked at the lady with a guilty face as the dad looked at her and smiled.
“You want our passes don’t you?” Arielle smiled and the nice man handed her their fast passes that would make Arielle excited again.
“Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!” Arielle said as she ran over to her friends.
“You got them!” Aston said as he smiled. Arielle handed out their fast passes as they ran over to the fast pass line. As they walked through the line very fast they all stopped with a glance.
“Wow” They all said very quietly. It was a big sign that said “We dare you to enter” They all looked at each other as they passed the big sign that actually made them a little nervous. It was all black, they couldn’t see anything. As the door shut closed behind them a red light turned on.
“You may now enter the vehicle” A voice said as Kyle bent over to Caren.
“Where is the vehicle?” He asked as the voice turned on again.
“Right here…..” The room started shaking and there it was the rocket! It came very fast but that was not what neither one of them were thinking about. They waited until a women told them the could go inside the big rockets. The one Kyle and Arielle was sitting in had a kind of grayish color and red smoke coming out of it, there were 10 vans and two people sat in each rocket. Arielle looked at Kyle who was standing right in front of her when the door to the rocket opened.
“It is finally happening” Arielle said as she sat down. Inside of the rocket they sat in red chairs that looked like the ones in rockets. There was a bunch of buttons that said different things like ‘Fire’ and ‘speed’. Kyle and Arielle both knew neither buttons worked but it was still very cool. There was a big window in front of them but it was black inside the rocket so it was very hard to see. Kyle and Arielle put their belts on and heard a beep the ride had finally started. Slowly it went for probably 30 seconds as it started going faster faster faster and faster! Kyle, Caren, Aston, and Arielle were finally riding the world’s greatest roller coaster!

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Oh - My - God. It was one of the tallest  roller  coasters  in the world.

They were so amazed by the sight of it they all froze. The friends were staring at the 70 foot roller coaster. They were all so exited... well for the most part. “I’m so nervous I think I’m go to hurl !!; Im so afraid of drops.” Careen shouted. “Also I for got to tell you it has a drop at a 86 dagree angle. ”kyle said   “Are you kidding me thats almost a straight down.”Troy shouted out with glee. “ it’s so Glorious  I think I want to hurl ” Kyle wispered to him self. The friends rushed into the line without knowing the wait time of the ride. “ TWO HOURS !?! Come on, we have to just to get on  5 minute ride. No way am  standing in line for two whole  hours.” Troy tried to exit the line, but their were to many people behind them.

they were forced to wait in line taking one step, after one step,after one step, every minute. Careen started to worry. she was thinking of all the possibale thing that could go wrong. “ what if somebody pukes all over me... (gasp) or wores i could chip a nail ”. kyle was thinking about bragging to all of his friends when they got to school on monday. “my friends are going to be so jellous  ”  troy was thinking about getting out of the line “i just want to go is that too much to ask”

they waited and waited and waited and finaly they got too the front to the line.

they got on and by the drop they had totaly regreated getting in line becuase careen barfed all overe them.

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   When The Beautiful red light of the roller coaster past they quickly ran to the line then Caren asked “ How long to get on the ride “ 	Then the said “ 2:00 long “ 	Then they all said “ THAT IS A LOT”. 	After 1:30 Kyle was so scared And  said “ I can’t get on this ride”  	They were walking up and Kyle got a peace of wood in his finger and he started to cry after Caren looked at it was a little big. It took here half an hour too take it out but she still bleeding. Then They got on the ride and they had the best day of there lifeDaniel

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   When The Beautiful red light of the roller coaster past they quickly ran to the line then Caren asked “ How long to get on the ride “ 	Then the said “ 2:00 long “ 	Then they all said “ THAT IS A LOT”. 	After 1:30 Kyle was so scared And  said “ I can’t get on this ride”  	They were walking up and Kyle got a peace of wood in his finger and he started to cry after Caren looked at it was a little big. It took here half an hour too take it out but she still bleeding. Then They got on the ride and they had the best day of there lifeDaniel

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by Jayme
A blur appeared  in front of their face Caren said “it looked close to a baby blue color , and a  fox orange”.we have been waiting almost all summer to get on this ride, and to be this close is amazing.
Maybe they were dreaming ,their eyes some how got stuck on the very top of the roller coaster. Although they still weren't on the roller coaster they felt their stomach drop, maybe it was anything since breakfast, but they thought it was because of the 98ft rocket standing right there , 5ft in front  of my trembling body. Kyle and Martina walked straight towards the rocket saving Caren a spot in front of them.As they grew closer to the roller because they haven't eaten coaster a man in a gray and blue jumpsuit came out from a closet with a sign that was scratching on the floor behind his  ripped shoes.
They were so exhilarated to get on the ride, but then a black signal appeared in there minds and Kyle said “ We've been waiting for almost year to get on this thriller of a ride, and now we can’t get on because of kids barfing everywhere.

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                   The Rocket                                                      	                  The track was red and both Caren and Kyle heard screams of joy. As the children got closer the Rocket seemed to grow. 	“Please keep hands in the vehicle at all times.” A voice over the loudspeaker said.	 Caren gulped, she now had second thoughts of this “Rocket” “Come on Caren!” yelled Kyle jumping up and down excitedly “ We gotta’ get in line!” The two children got into the huge line and soon became bored. 	“The line!” moaned Caren “It’s so long!!!” 	“It’s not worth the wait either” said someone behind Caren.  	 “Caren!” yelled the voice behind her. 	“Aiee!” screeched Caren. 	She turned around to see one of Kyle’s friends from school, Bill. He had dark blue eyes, freckles around his face, and a pair of glasses perched on his nose. He laughed when he saw Caren’s face.	“Bill! Why are you here and why isn’t this line worth the wait?” 	“I’m here to ride the coaster because my dad said I had to toughen up and this line isn’t worth the wait because of all the incidents!”  		“What incid…”	“Bill! My man!” yelled Kyle “Watcha’ talking about?”	“I was telling your friend Caren about the roller coaster incidents.” Bill told the pair about the time in Tokyo when a Roller Coaster caught fire until Caren stopped him.	“How do you know all this stuff?” she asked	“ My mom is a lawyer, she just knows this stuff” Bill answered. He went on and on until he didn't have any more stories then said “I bet this roller coaster is going to explode!” The three kids finally got to the end of the line. Bill smiled at the man who helped them onto the platform. Caren and Kyle were terrified. Could this become another case of the blown up coaster? The seats were black and hard, the bar cold, and the floor was plastic someone e you could see where people had cleaned up vomit. Kyle and Caren looked around. There was a tunnel they had to go though and a huge drop near the exit. The cart started moving and then, right when the whole cart started falling it stopped. 	“Uh, what’s happening?” asked Kyle nervously.	“The roller coaster is probably gonna explode!” Screamed Bill. Once everyone heard him they started screaming, too. Suddenly the cart jolted forward, sparks flying everywhere. OMG OMG! IS THIS REALLY THE END? I NEED TO GET OFF!!! Thought Caren. She struggled to get off“AAAAAAAAAAAH!” Screamed everyone on the cart.	“I think Im gonna be sick” Caren moaned	 “I told you this was going to happen!!!” yelled Bill. The cart eventually stopped at the exit. 	“Thanks for riding the Rocket” said a ride attendant lifting up the bar so the three could hop out. Kyle looked at Caren and then the two glared at Bill.	“Billllll!” they yelled. Bill snorted.	 “My dad owns the park. I tried to scare you so you didn't think the part in the tunnel was a ride but a problem with the Roller Coaster” He smiled	“Oh” Kyle and Caren said in unison. Bill winked and then walked of to scare a family of four. 	“Well,” said Kyle “let’s go get the ice pop.”	-Charlotte

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                   The Rocket                                                      	                  The track was red and both Caren and Kyle heard screams of joy. As the children got closer the Rocket seemed to grow. 	“Please keep hands in the vehicle at all times.” A voice over the loudspeaker said.	 Caren gulped, she now had second thoughts of this “Rocket” “Come on Caren!” yelled Kyle jumping up and down excitedly “ We gotta’ get in line!” The two children got into the huge line and soon became bored. 	“The line!” moaned Caren “It’s so long!!!” 	“It’s not worth the wait either” said someone behind Caren.  	 “Caren!” yelled the voice behind her. 	“Aiee!” screeched Caren. 	She turned around to see one of Kyle’s friends from school, Bill. He had dark blue eyes, freckles around his face, and a pair of glasses perched on his nose. He laughed when he saw Caren’s face.	“Bill! Why are you here and why isn’t this line worth the wait?” 	“I’m here to ride the coaster because my dad said I had to toughen up and this line isn’t worth the wait because of all the incidents!”  		“What incid…”	“Bill! My man!” yelled Kyle “Watcha’ talking about?”	“I was telling your friend Caren about the roller coaster incidents.” Bill told the pair about the time in Tokyo when a Roller Coaster caught fire until Caren stopped him.	“How do you know all this stuff?” she asked	“ My mom is a lawyer, she just knows this stuff” Bill answered. He went on and on until he didn't have any more stories then said “I bet this roller coaster is going to explode!” The three kids finally got to the end of the line. Bill smiled at the man who helped them onto the platform. Caren and Kyle were terrified. Could this become another case of the blown up coaster? The seats were black and hard, the bar cold, and the floor was plastic someone e you could see where people had cleaned up vomit. Kyle and Caren looked around. There was a tunnel they had to go though and a huge drop near the exit. The cart started moving and then, right when the whole cart started falling it stopped. 	“Uh, what’s happening?” asked Kyle nervously.	“The roller coaster is probably gonna explode!” Screamed Bill. Once everyone heard him they started screaming, too. Suddenly the cart jolted forward, sparks flying everywhere. OMG OMG! IS THIS REALLY THE END? I NEED TO GET OFF!!! Thought Caren. She struggled to get off“AAAAAAAAAAAH!” Screamed everyone on the cart.	“I think Im gonna be sick” Caren moaned	 “I told you this was going to happen!!!” yelled Bill. The cart eventually stopped at the exit. 	“Thanks for riding the Rocket” said a ride attendant lifting up the bar so the three could hop out. Kyle looked at Caren and then the two glared at Bill.	“Billllll!” they yelled. Bill snorted.	 “My dad owns the park. I tried to scare you so you didn't think the part in the tunnel was a ride but a problem with the Roller Coaster” He smiled	“Oh” Kyle and Caren said in unison. Bill winked and then walked of to scare a family of four. 	“Well,” said Kyle “let’s go get the ice pop.”	-Charlotte

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Sam Lavagnino	The bright blue of the tracks shimmered in the morning sunlight. Streaks of purple lined the rollercoaster as it raced along the horizon. As the trio walked forward, they clearly saw the space shuttle-shaped car, trailing as fast as a dashing tiger. It was truly a massive rollercoaster.	“We gotta go now!” Drake exclaimed, already speeding towards the coaster. “I can’t wait another minute!”	“Oh, no.” Caren said, a sense of disappointment in the tone of her voice. “The lines are super long.”	“We’ll never get through.” Drake quietly said, kicking rocks as he walked around in circles.	“Guess what guys?” Kyle said as if he was a host on a reality tv show. “At the front booth, I got us fastPasses! Now, we can skip the ultra-long line!”	“Seriously?” Drake yelled. “Thank You!”	“You’re welcome!” answered Kyle, laughing.		The party felt good and immediately raced to the fastPass line, which had nobody else in it.	“This is so good!” Caren exclaimed with 100% joy.  	“Next!” the fastPass attendant at the ride said. “You kids can go through.”	And finally, after several days, weeks, and months of hard money-raising work, the kids passed through, climbed up the ladders and stairs, and plopped down inside of the covered space shuttle, painted blue with stripes of bright purple that really caught your eye. Super excited and pumped-up, The kids started the amazing ride.

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Sam Lavagnino	The bright blue of the tracks shimmered in the morning sunlight. Streaks of purple lined the rollercoaster as it raced along the horizon. As the trio walked forward, they clearly saw the space shuttle-shaped car, trailing as fast as a dashing tiger. It was truly a massive rollercoaster.	“We gotta go now!” Drake exclaimed, already speeding towards the coaster. “I can’t wait another minute!”	“Oh, no.” Caren said, a sense of disappointment in the tone of her voice. “The lines are super long.”	“We’ll never get through.” Drake quietly said, kicking rocks as he walked around in circles.	“Guess what guys?” Kyle said as if he was a host on a reality tv show. “At the front booth, I got us fastPasses! Now, we can skip the ultra-long line!”	“Seriously?” Drake yelled. “Thank You!”	“You’re welcome!” answered Kyle, laughing.		The party felt good and immediately raced to the fastPass line, which had nobody else in it.	“This is so good!” Caren exclaimed with 100% joy.  	“Next!” the fastPass attendant at the ride said. “You kids can go through.”	And finally, after several days, weeks, and months of hard money-raising work, the kids passed through, climbed up the ladders and stairs, and plopped down inside of the covered space shuttle, painted blue with stripes of bright purple that really caught your eye. Super excited and pumped-up, The kids started the amazing ride.

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“Wow! It’s cooler than I imagined!”,Kyle shouted. “Look at that spiral part! And that green paint!”
“Uh, I’m pretty sure that’s not paint.”, Caren said in disgust crossing her arms and blocking her nose with her hand.
“Stop talking, let’s just go!”,Caren yelled while she pulled Kyle towards the roller coaster.
“Great, there’s a huge line of people. It will take ages to get on there.”, Kyle said while he threw his arms up in anger.
“Hey, it’s worth it! After all we will get to go on the world’s greatest roller coaster!”, Caren said. They ran toward the long line off people leading to the roller coaster.
“Finally we’re in line!”, Kyle yelled.
“Kyle watch out!”, Caren yelled. But it was to late.
“Hey! What do you think you’re doing! Get off of me!”, a rude guy said.
“Sorry! I didn’t see you.”, Kyle apologized in fear.
“Wow that guy was not nice at all.”
“I know. Let’s get away from him.”
“But if we walk away we will loose our spot in line! We can’t leave now.”
“You’re right. We can’t leave.” All day they would have to put up with this guy, and they were not to happy about that. It was about an hour that they were standing in line, when it was Kyle and Caren’s turn to go on the coaster in about 5 minutes. Caren’s stomach growled loudly. “I’m really hungry! Can you just save our spot so I can go get something to eat? Please?”
“Ok, fine but I’m warning you, if you eat right now you will be sick during the ride.”
“Oh whatever, I’ll be fine.” Caren ran over to the food truck, and waited for something to eat. Kyle almost sat on the ground when he saw a guy handing out free sodas. Well I am very thirsty, he thought to himself. “I want one!”, he yelled as he ran towards the guy. He totally forgot about the line, and lost their spot.
“Kyle? Where ware you?” Caren yelled as she came back to the line. “Oh no! He lost our spot in line! But we waited so long!” She ran over to their spot.
“Excuse me, but we were here in line for a long time, and we lost our spot. Can we please go back to our spot?”, Caren asked nicely to the person behind them.
“Sorry kid, but I was here. You out your spot, well to bad for you. Maybe next time.”
“But Sir!”, Caren yelled.
“I said no little kid, now run off!” So, Caren and Kyle went off and left the place. They never got to go on The Rocket after all.
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As they approached the rollercoaster Caren saw a sign. “Need to be 4ft to ride the rocket”
“Caren! Is Hannah going to be tall enough to ride the rollercoaster mom said she has to come on whatever ride we go on!”said Kyle.
Hannah is a 5th Grade nobody, she has long brown hair that is always in braids, she also always wears dresses.”Your right”said Caren.
They both threw Hannah against the sign. “Thank god Hannah is tall enough’’ said Caren
Kyle stood next to Hannah in line and Caren stood behind them both as they walked in line Caren looked at the big,red,fast rollercoaster,and she looked at the big carts that looked like rockets with flames that passed over her head.ANSLEY

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it made all of the friends stop in there tracks “look at that shiny red finish ant that silver lighting bolt” “Wow” Quinn was stunned by the coster’s beauty “ well what are we waiting for lets go!”. The friends ran to the line “But look at that line it is an hour and thirty minutes and I am still hungry” Caren yelled over the rushing cart on the tracks “So what the line is just getting longer by the minute.” Caren rolled her blue eyes “fine.” so they squeezed in the line. “ I told you we should of gotten the fast pass” snapped Kyle “Hay I said that,” Caren wined “Quit winning” Kyle said “STOP FIGHTING” Quinn yelled she stopped and became hushed that was the loudest she had ever been.  Kyle and Caren looked at Quinn she was hunched over and had her hands over her mouth and looked like she was about to cry. then when they finally were the first people on line there was an announcement a man with a rough voice said “the park will now close please make a safe exit out out the park.

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And there it was, the Rocket, the worlds greatest roller coaster! The only problem was that there was a huge line, and the Rocket was huge and it was cooler than they imagined. It was red, gold, and black, but the only thing is that it looked like the scariest ride they have ever seen. They were sweating, getting hot, and trying not to bail out. Before they went on the ride, they went to the bathroom because by the time they got to the front of the line or on the roller coaster, they would probably have to go to the bathroom. The “Crazy Critters” were all over the floor and their stomachs started to grumble even more.
Kyle jumped up and said “We have to get out there and get in line so we don’t have to wait any longer then we have to now.” “Lets go!” answered Caren. When they got in line they started talking to people, and they luckily happened to ride this roller coaster. They’re names were Charlie and Julie. Julie asked “Hey. Have you guys ridden this ride yet?” “We’ve been on it so many times.” Charlie said. “This is our first time and we’re very nervous.” Caren said. “Just relax and have fun.” Charlie said. “There’s nothing to be scared of. This ride is fun” Julie suggested. When they got on, they were having the best time of their lives.

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Everyone was watching in amazement of how awesome the rollercoaster was.
“Wow!” said Kyle and Caren. Kyle and Caren have never been on a rollercoaster this awesome before. Kyle and Caren only remembered riding little kid rollercoasters. Now, they were going to go on the Rocket. Kyle and Caren were totally excited, but what didn’t make them excited was the long line ahead. At the back of the line, where Caren and Kyle were, it seems like a big, squiggly snake. More and more people kept adding to the line behind them. Kyle had a flashback of the time when she was only a young toddler and she had to wait in a long line for her favorite ice cream. It was so long, she had to wait for 3 hours and she still didn’t get the ice cream because the shop closed. Kyle got worried that the amusement park would close down as well.
“What if the park shuts down Caren?” said Kyle.
“Nonsense! The park won’t shut down until evening probably.” said Caren.
“I had a flashback though! I was a toddler and my favorite ice cream shop closed and I couldn’t get the ice cream!” shouted Kyle.
“Still, Kyle, that is probably a dream.” replied Caren.
Both of the friends waited and waited, getting closer and closer. The sight was also getting better and better. Seeing the Rocket getting closer made them jump with so much excitement. The Rocket was a rollercoaster with the colors like the NASA Endeavor. Black and white. With the colors of the rocket, the ride had the shape of the NASA Endeavor also. They could already feel the air swoosh pass them when the “Rockets” took off.

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Both Kyle and Caren’s mouths dropped at just the sight of it. Sure of course they had seen the pictures of it online and everything, but this was even more spectacular than they had expected.
“Hey guys over here! I’m here! Sorry I’m late!” They both turned around to see Heather running faster than the Rocket moves. Well, not faster than the Rocket, but still pretty fast.
“Hey! We’re glad you could make it! Come on we got to get in line before it get’s too…” Kyle started, but then realized they were too late. The line looked like it could be even more than an hour long!
Heather hadn’t taken a look at the rocket yet, but once she did she couldn’t stop talking. “Omg! Guys this is like totally crazy! It’s the tallest thing I’ve ever seen! The blue dotted stripes and the orange and red flames painted on! How shiny silver it is. Look at the top of it! I hope no bird lands on that pointy…”
“Come on Heather! We have to get in line!” Kyle shouts so loud you might think all of Crazy Critters amusement park heard him.
“Gosh sorry!” She yelled back.
“I just get so excited about these kinds of things.” They rushed towards the line. It really sucks to be the last ones in line! Caren thought to herself. Now we’re going to have to wait forever! By the time we get to the front of the line I’ll be so starving that I won’t even be able to enjoy the ride!
“Come on guys this line isn’t moving anytime soon. Why don’t we just quickly go get a blue ice pop. It will take no time at all. I’ll even pay for it!” She said.
“Caren I told you we need to wait in line. We can not go back. Look there’s already people lining up behind us,” Kyle said. Caren looked behind her to see a bunch of people in a scattered line behind them. Caren decided to give up on the blue ice pops. She would just have to wait. Surprisingly as time passed by the line did move a bit quicker. Heather started to think back to her fist rollercoaster. She was absolutely terrified thinking there was a chance she could die. Of course she wouldn’t though. Once she got to the front of the line and stepped into the seat she had the time of her life. Now she looked back at this ride. It was a big rocket shaped thing that stood on top of a bunch of fake firing flames. This was certainly going to be the best ride.

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By:Amberlee

Caren was still hungry but Kyle and Emma would’t let her have anything until they got off the ride. They rounded around the corner and there it was hey worlds greatest roller coaster. They were in shock. The roller coaster was 70ft it was amazing it went really fast they can hear everyone screaming having a great time but there was one thing they were all really nervous.
Emma said “ We have been waiting for this moment for a long time and we had worked so hard we can’t just go”. Everyone looked at each other and they said okay we are going to do this as they walked slowly to the line and looking at the roller coaster they stopped the line was huge they were going to have to wait a long time.
Kyle said “ Don’t worry guys it’s not that it just looks like we are going to have to wait maybe a half an hour or so”.
Emma told  Kyle “ Look at this you have to be at least 5ft tall to go on the ride what are we going to do Caren is still 4ft she can’t go on the ride.
Caren said Emma “ I have bad news I am really sorry I know you have been waiting for this your whole life but you have to be 5ft tall to go on the ride and your only 4ft tall so that means you can’t go on it. Caren was in shock she couldn’t believe it she was about to go on the worlds greatest roller coaster with her best friends but now she can’t because she is not tall enough.
Emma told Caren “ I know you are sad but I am really sorry but hey now you get  go play other game and eat that delicious blue pop you wanted.
Yeah said Caren “But it’s not going to be the same thing without you guys. As Caren was about to leave line Kyle shouted there names.
“Look I have amazing news Caren you get to go on the ride. The three friends got on the roller coaster and had the best time of their lives and they will never forget this moment.

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By: Rya

Caren, Kyle, and Sadie all looked up at the 100 ft tall with a loop, blazing lights flashing so bright it could blind you.  The friend had no words.  They all looked down the line… was a 30 minute wait.  They rushed over to get a spot in line with They hopes all up.  Once they got in the long line Sadie noticed that Caren and Kyle had a frowns, and both let out a big SIGH.
“ You know, somebody is probably going to get behind us.  And we won’t be last.”  Sadie said trying to cheer them up.  It worked, the friends laughed, looked behind them, and laughed for hours (3 minutes).  Growl, Caren was still hungry,
“ Hey guys can I go get some food us all, I mean, well I’m really hungry, and it is the prefect time” the others nodded, and she dashed off.  When she came back she only had blue pops, blue soda, blue ice cream, and so on blue.  She ate all of it and then Kyle saw something flash, in his mind he saw his past.  Going on the smallest rollercoaster in the world, his older sister she ate so much and by the time they were going home she threw up all over him.  Kyle had a cold shiver go down his back, he started to breath heavy watching Caren devour each thing of blue.  Now was his time, nothing can ruin it, they were at the front of the line!  They gave their tickets, found three spots together and wait a the loud speaker started to count down, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, BALST OFF!  They zoomed left, right, left, right, left, right, then up 100ft, they could almost see their neighborhood.  It had stopped a the top, then with no warning they all zoomed straight down so fast tears came out.
Once they got off the Rocket they felt woozy, Caren somehow managed to make her way over to the trash can by the bench.  She threw up blue goo all over the trash can and sat down.  Sadie tumbled as fast a she could to comfort Caren so did Kyle.  The gave a good laugh and Caren joked “Warn me next time not to eat that much!” They all laughed to much.  They tried to warn the janitor “ Don't do that, NO, NO, NO,NO, EWW!” He had touched the blue puke, and didn't even notice…

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By: Kaydence Labissiere
“Yes we are here now does everyone have their fast passes.” Kyle said as they were walking to the line.
“Umm about that” said Caren looking around her neck.
Kyle started to get made because the wait was almost three hours, but then someone shouted out Kyle and Caren.It was Kasie, and she looked like shed been standing for a straight hour now.
“It’s almost our turn get up there before someone tries  to steals our spot!” She said under the dying sweat on her face.
“We’re coming up” Caren as she secretly put the fast pass on her neck.
Caren and Kyle were right next to Kasie in the dying heat, but then she heard someone say
“Umm lets see… you three youngsters come up to the front you not old enough to be there in the hot heat.” a kind man said as he pulled them up to the front of the roller coaster.
The roller coaster was pulling up and most of the kids and adults were puking.
“YAY” Kyle said as he was walking to the sliver and green roller coaster that had the aroma of barf as soon as you sit.
“Okay so I’m going to let you two go on the ride with out me” Caren said was the barf smell hit her noes.
“Oh no you are going on this ride I spent 50 dollars just to get on this ride with all of you and now you want to leave” Kyle said with a mean face.
“Yes” Caren said as she tried to walk away but Kyle pulled there in.
“Oh no!” Caren said sadly as the shield closed around them.

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                                                                                           There it was the star of Crazy Critters! “Can we please go eat, I am starving” Said Caren! Her stomach rumbled over and over again.  “ The rides line will slow down, do you really want to wait 60 minuets” Caren continued! “ Fine, but if you ruin this” Kyle shouted! How could I possibly ruin this we've been saving all summer, I wont mess this up” Caren Said. “ Let’s eat at Riley’s Burgers , it looks delicious” Caren said! “ Caren look at the wait, 45 minuets” Kyle Responded!  When they walked by Caren couldn’t take her blue eyes off of someone else’s burger and fries, but before she took her second step her stomach rumbled over 5 times. “Let’s just get a churro Caren’ Kyle suggested. “Fine” Caren wined. It was as if she couldn’t truly agree with any words that came out of his mouth that day. When the brown sugared churro was in Caren’s hands it was gone like that! “ Now it’s time to go to The Rocket” Kyle Shouted with excitement! The red and yellow, shiny, and polished cart was beautiful! It looked just like Kyle’s truck from when he was five! “ Do we have to go on the ride, Kyle i’m so tired from all this walking” Caren wined! “ What are you talking about i’ve been waiting all summer for this, and you aren’t going to ruin this” Kyle shouted! Caren stomped over to the line acting like a baby and not evan caring what others think about her and sat down on the dirty cracked cement! Caren attempted to close her eyes, but the roller coaster dropped over the brown ceiling right above Caren’s red haired head. “This is the worst day ever” Caren shouted for everyone to hear. “ Caren, you are causing a scene” Kyle said very disappointed. Hours went by, Caren was wrong that sugar, calorie filled churro was a waste of time. There is was right in front of our face “Closed”! The Rocket was closed, the amusement park was closed. “ Why” Kyle teared. “ All summer for a churro” Kyle pointed out. Bye

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                                                                                           There it was the star of Crazy Critters! “Can we please go eat, I am starving” Said Caren! Her stomach rumbled over and over again.  “ The rides line will slow down, do you really want to wait 60 minuets” Caren continued! “ Fine, but if you ruin this” Kyle shouted! How could I possibly ruin this we've been saving all summer, I wont mess this up” Caren Said. “ Let’s eat at Riley’s Burgers , it looks delicious” Caren said! “ Caren look at the wait, 45 minuets” Kyle Responded!  When they walked by Caren couldn’t take her blue eyes off of someone else’s burger and fries, but before she took her second step her stomach rumbled over 5 times. “Let’s just get a churro Caren’ Kyle suggested. “Fine” Caren wined. It was as if she couldn’t truly agree with any words that came out of his mouth that day. When the brown sugared churro was in Caren’s hands it was gone like that! “ Now it’s time to go to The Rocket” Kyle Shouted with excitement! The red and yellow, shiny, and polished cart was beautiful! It looked just like Kyle’s truck from when he was five! “ Do we have to go on the ride, Kyle i’m so tired from all this walking” Caren wined! “ What are you talking about i’ve been waiting all summer for this, and you aren’t going to ruin this” Kyle shouted! Caren stomped over to the line acting like a baby and not evan caring what others think about her and sat down on the dirty cracked cement! Caren attempted to close her eyes, but the roller coaster dropped over the brown ceiling right above Caren’s red haired head. “This is the worst day ever” Caren shouted for everyone to hear. “ Caren, you are causing a scene” Kyle said very disappointed. Hours went by, Caren was wrong that sugar, calorie filled churro was a waste of time. There is was right in front of our face “Closed”! The Rocket was closed, the amusement park was closed. “ Why” Kyle teared. “ All summer for a churro” Kyle pointed out. Bye

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Eloise Estevez

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Caren and Kyle ran up to the giant rollercoaster to find out that it was VIP only. They walked up to the employee who was manning the ride and Kyle said, “Why is it only VIP access?” The person turned around and said with a calm, voice, “Someone is famous here, and my boss told me that no immature kids should be allowed on this ride.” For some reason the man there kept staring at the lion prize over where the “pop the balloon game” was. Caren asked him, “Do you like lions?”
“Yeah, I’d do anything for one of those lion toys.” Then Kyle blurted out, “I have an idea!” He ran all the way to the mini game “Pop the Balloon.” The man said “One dollar please!” We gave him a dollar and we did the game winning nothing. “Let’s do it again!” Kyle said. “But this is our last dollar, then we’ll never be able to pay for the roller coaster!” Caren said. “Trust me.” Kyle said. He gave the man another dollar and paid for the game. Kyle actually won that time! He quickly grabbed the giant toy and ran back over to the ride. The man looked bewildered. Kyle knew he really wanted that toy. “You got it for me?” The man said at the roller coaster. “Yes, but only if you let us in.” Kyle said. The man thought about it and he said, “Errrr, I shouldn’t do it… but fine!” Kyle handed the toy over and the man manning the roller coaster looked left and right, and let the two children in.
“Man this roller coaster is huge!!!” Kyle said. Looking up noticing the huge loop-de-loop.
“This will be fun!” Then Kyle remembered the reason he came. He was never allowed to go on this ride because he wasn’t tall enough, and now he is. “The detail work on the ride is incredible!? Kyle said, as he walked up the stairs to the ride. When he got to the top, he saw the roller coaster shooting off at 80 miles per hour! This, was a fast ride. A few minutes later they were right at the middle gate of the ride. Number 6. The Coaster came up. The two sat in the coaster, and they shot off at unimaginable speed.

-Mason