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Today I learned about how Space X and how they are going to launch 2 people to go to the moon. I think this will make a provoking impact on the community. The reason why I think this is because we could find new land and new life. Once people start going to Mars, more people will go it will not just make a big impact on the community, but in the whole world and in our timeline. People will want to go more in the future, but some people can't afford it. I think that once a lot of people go and explore, Space X should make the trip cheaper. I think people would love that it will be cheaper, so other people that don't have that much money, could also explore. Space X and NASA will make a provoking impact on Earth for better or worse.

In my opinion, this topic gives me many predictions that NASA and Space X will change Earth's future for all people. My first prediction for this topic is that Space X will achieve this and we will find lots of land and life. My second and last prediction for this topic is that only the people that went there get to go and other people don't get to. I have not read any recent news about Space X. This article really gave me a good idea of understanding about how 2 people are going to the moon.

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Today, I read about 'Two people bought seats on mission to Space'' from Associate Press. Two people were going to the moon by riding a spaceship from SpaceX in 2018. The spaceship was called Dragon crew spaceship. I think this spaceship will impact on the     community, because making normal people go to the space with safety and a lot of training could make community's technology.Also, this project could help people think deeper about space. So I think this article was compelling and riveting story.

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In my opinion I think that this article 'Two people have paid Space X to fly them to moon ' is riveting.  This has an important impact on the community because what if all this discovery, researching, and experience one day will all be combined and could create a safe and useful travel system? Then probably a lot of people would suggest that traveling to Mars could be a great vacation plan.This impact could make history but on the other hand, it might make other countries to suffer. Because, each country has more than 1,000 visitor and that mostly makes the government to get money. And when Mars became the best place for vacation, other country might suffer. I think commercial space travel is  very compelling.

18/20 Will work on language use and flow of sentences. Great Questions!

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Today I read an article about how Space X will launch two people into Space.  I think that this topic will have a very thought provoking impact on the community because if we ever do get people to land on Mars, SAFELY, then maybe, many more people may want to space travel to Mars to see it for themselves.  In my opinion, space traveling will change Earth's future because, what if all this research, and discovery lead to a useful space traveling system.  People could travel from one planet/world to the other.  Any people could just travel in space.  That is if we create a SAFE space traveling system.  Many people may be excited or worried that we are going to launch another contraption to the moon.  This has not been done since 1972.  But whatever happens Space X and NASA will change Earth hopefully for the good.

20/20 Includes strong sentence structure and conclusion.

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This week I read about SpaceX sending a rocket to the moon.  SpaceX will fly 2 ordinary  people around the moon in 2018.  The flight will be produced by a Dragon crew space craft and a Falcon heavy rocket.  This  will for sure impact the community because you were not allowed to travel to the moon for sure.  Before you explored the moon and looked and tried to find life.  This can be a very important time in life.

The last time some one went to the moon was in 1972.  This will change the future because people have not gone to the moon for fun they went to explore and find new life they never went to have fun.  I've read on New York times that they have to go up and down stairs a lot of times and also go in a machine that spins you around a lot of times. They do this because in space there are a lot of risks and deaths.  they don't want people to get sick on the way to the moon.  They haven't told how much it would be to go to the moon and back, but the article wrote that it will take 240,00 miles to go to the moon and back.  This was a riveting and compelling story.

17/20 Good connection to previously read text. How will commercial space travel affect the community?

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This after noon we read that a compony named SpaceX is sending two strangers into space. SpaceX will pay for all their supplies to make a rocket ship.There will always be Nasa and the other commponies that the goverment will have to fund but if SpaceX is now out of the funding community we will have more money.  If SpaceX is launching two random people into space they better have a good amount of money to build a safe rocket ship.
Their travel system might be lower tech because what if their  money supply is getting lower and lower each hour they will be out of money. Their high tech equipment will be gone. The travel system will die and go the heaven. We wont get to travel the 96 percent of space we did not discover. The kids that want to be astronauts that are dying to see the outside world will not be able to live their dreams. Try being in their mind when all the spacecrafts are gone and you lose your thought-provoking dream.
I have not seen any other articles about SpaceX but i hope to next time.

15/20 - This response lacks connection to the article. Try not to stray from the original prompt and article.

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MY response is
I learned that in the middle of 2018 a rocket/red dragon
will circle around mars.Elan musk is not allowed to say the names of the two civilian pasinger .Elan musk will give them traning .
The  company is called space x  nasa is in this to / helping on the tests .
I think this is shocking space travel is at our finger tips!
Our  engurneir  are going the wrong way they will lead man kind
to war think of super solders with acid rays and stinging hands. They wont be microscopic cause those aliens will have to be way lager to float we have searched
for micro aliens. Also astronauts don't known what aliens need
so why are we searching for aliens on only planets with water.
in other thought provoking words nasa  is compelling
people in the wrong way.fling to random places could mean invading
alien tertory. They could be reptiels,huge crabs or trolls.In
other words a known that space x will make  a rocket by 2018

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Today I read about SpaceX launching two people into space. This will have a big impact by letting people travel to the moon which is really rare. SpaceX is letting  people go to the Mars in 2020. I think people will go to Mars and might live there. Right now they are building the spacecraft that is going to the moon. SpaceX  is building two spacecrafts a the same time. SpaceX has not done anything like this in 50 years and now they have a big improvement. This a big chance to go and it is really exspensive. Only rich people will be able to go. This will be very dangerous but I would take the opprutunity. This is a really big thing because it will be weird to say I'm going to mars. The trip will be long and scary it is 400,000 miles away. This is what I read about and it is very learnable from.

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Today i read about Space X and how they will launch 2 people into space. Space X could have an effect on our community by launching ordinary people into space and maybe affecting the world! Also it will probably be one of the most growing businesses around the world!. I have a prediction about space travel. I think maybe it could lead to space expansion like moving to other planets. When you think about it you Astronauts would need to go through years of training But these people will only go through 1 year of training. I have a few questions here I go I would like to know where and how they train. Where would the space craft launch. And what if the system fails. All of these think Statistics are thought provoking and scary. The rocket shape and size is compelling and the riveting flight to and from earth and the space around them. I hope people will try to do this I would like to try this when i am older.

19/20 Great job experimenting with new vocabulary, watch for punctuation

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Today I read about SpaceX and how they will send two? into space. The impact it will give to our community is that it will make people more what to do it . In the future  research, discovery,  experiance, and the project can become more advanced and compelling every time they do it. I have not read anything realated to this before. I would want to do this when I am older.

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Today I read an article about Space-X. I think this article will have big impact on are community because people want to go to space and explore all around the world. When they read the article they will realize this is there chance to go to space.In the future I think this will change are world because if everyone wants to go to space they will be wasting there money on space but not but not important resources.These opinions really make me want to be an astronaut  when I grow up

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In this article NASA and Space X are trying to sent 2 people into space.This space situation impacts the community by if Space X or NASA sends people to mars and there is a habitable zone then people might go to mars to live there.
Also if Space X upgrades the heavy falcon rocket and the dragon capsule then more people or astronauts will be compelling into going into space. I think in the future for space that NASA will launch much more people then they are right now in 2017.
I also think that maybe they can make a rocket so more then 5 people can go into space at once I haven't seen or saw Space X in other articles. Actually this is the first time I have ever heard of this station. But, I do know what an international space station.
I hope the 2 people who go into Mars succeed what there dream was or to make history.

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I feel a wave of different feelings, but I mainly feel the idea that Space X is sending real random rich people around the moon is revolutionary. Since some ordinary rich people can go around the moon in such a short time, it makes me ponder how long it will take to visit other planets farther away. I think more people should take this trip. I feel it is a mighty nice coincidence that two different companies had the same idea.For the travelers, I bet it's exciting but it'll require a lot of hard work. I would not want to go around the moon. It could be very dangerous, even if you have been trained. But then again, since they are being trained it makes it more safer. This wold be a very long 300-400,000 mile trip. I think Elon Musk ( The person who started the Space X company) is very happy. He is getting a lot of money, and he will be the starter of the first company to launch ordinary people in a long amount of time. I wonder why the people won't go to the moon, since it is only a little farther away. The fact that the spacecraft will be tested before the people board the aircraft makes me confident that the passengers will safely return. I believe it is a compelling idea that random rich people will go to outer space.

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I think it's cool that SpaceX and NASA are working to send real people into space. People being able to go into space will put an impact to our world. People will be able to actually be going to space for a vacation and not hawaii or not some normal place. In my opinion I wouldn't like to go to space because, there is a lot of danger. While coming back to earth, and when you cross the oxygen barrier, there is a high chance that something could malfunction. Such as the heat shield on the rocket coming loose and the ship ends up exploding. Although this chance is pretty slim it could happen. But at the same time I think it would be really cool to go to space and me able to look past what we see through our windows at home. To be able to see the stars and planets. I think it's compelling that people may one day go into space.

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I think that it is not good that 2 random people are going to space because it will be very dangerous. First they are not trained so if they get into an accident and they don't no what to do they could die. Second they can't steer the ship so another person has to go to the small dragon crew spacecraft to steer it. The dragon crew spacecraft is a small space craft that can fit 3,700 pounds of cargo for NASA. Last if they do get trained, it can take about 2-3 years, and by that time they could have better technology and they have to train again for that spacecraft for 2-3 years. This is why it is not good for 2 random people to go to space.

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Today, I read "Two people have bought seats on a mission to the moon next year"by Associate Press. I think that sending two people to space might affect the community because other people will want to go to space like movie and music stars. I predict this beacuse previously, some movie and music stars have said that they want to go to space. Also, people might go to space as a vacation in the future because they might want to expereince space. But, I recently I haven't read any articles about SpaceX ,so I don't much about other things SpaceX is doing. Overall, this is what I think of "Two people have bought seats on a mission to the moon next year."

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SpaceX might not suceed in launching 2 people to the moon. I think they wont be an impact because they are not that prepared. Unlike Nasa they have sent very many spacecrafts and spaceships but, SpaceX haven't sent many spacecrafts and they might not be preoared for such a mission. Unlike NASA they are sending it in 2018 a year ealier then nasa which might not be safe since there could be more devolpment of new proceceers because it will got faster and it will be more powerful so then it will last longer and people will be more safe and riveting beacause NASA can upgrade and can make better material that will last in space. They can also make better intel proccesers for the spacecraft in 2019. Thats why SpaceX will might not suceed in sending two people to the moon.

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This article is about NASA spacecraft and about SpaceX.I think it is cool that they are setting 2 people in to space.I am kind of scared to go to space because something wrong myt hapin .It a wrilly cool article.              I do not want to go to mars.That would be werid if a person  will say "I am going to mars.

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This article I read today was 2 people paid SpaceX to put them in space. In my opinion this will kind of impact the community. It will impact the community because lots of other richer people will want to go to space. But it will not affect the average person in this case. But the average person I think will be interested in that soon people might orbit Mars and might even land on it. In my personal opinion is that   I think it is cool that NASA is building a megarocket to one day send people to Mars. SpaceX is building a Red Dragon to orbit Mars and land on it. Recently i read about another SpaceX article That was about Falcon 9 launches from historical NASA pad and sticks a landing. I hope those 2 people make it to space and come back!

20/20 Exciting conclusion!

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I think this will impact the community with rivement. But the thing  that everyone would be exited about is the Dragon spacecraft that can send you around the moon. It will do this  because in 2018 or 2019 when SpaceX creates a spaceship for ''ordinary'' people. And since this is Beverly Hills,  everyone will be even more compelling . It will send you acrose the moon . It will impact the community with rivement.

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I read about SpaceX and how two typical people are being launched into space. Two people payed paid a fortune to go around the moon in SpaceX spaceship. I think commercial space travel will impact on the community. It will make people thought provoking in space traveling. Many people would want to go to space and people that had no interest in space will maybe become very fond of space. They will have to pay SpaceX and SpaceX will get rich. With that money, they could get new equipment and space traveling will become safer with their new space equipment. I predict that in the future if SpaceX or any space company becomes wealthy, then space traveling will become something that will happen more often. Also, people will get more used to having people go to space. This might effect the business of space. That's what SpaceX is doing to get two people around the moon for the lack of television.

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Today I read an article about two people who paid payed to go to space. They were paying for commercial space traveling that will be in 2018.1. Commercial space travel has an affect on our community, because people will leave for space more often because it is thought-provoking and many people will talk about it. 2. Space travel will change in the future by there will be better technology and advanced space crafts. There will also be new equipment to use. I have read an article about space, but it was not about people going to space, it was about a ninth planet in our solar system. I thought this article was riveting and I might go to space in the future.

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