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Good afternoon,

With the completion of the activity number 10 this virtual course is over. I hope this blog and platform have been very useful to you and I would like to encourage you to continue improving your knowledge in English. As you know, speaking a second language has many advantages not only when finding a job but also in your personal life. This will open many opportunities to you in the near future, so do not waste this knowledge acquired!

Continue practicing!

Good Luck,

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All right, Checked!

You are doing it well. Keep going on the lessons. We almost finish the course and the final exam is just right on the corner.
Try to do the activities proposed on my resources section; there you will find different kind of excersices to practice different skill.

Best regards,

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Hi,

In terms of English your comment is well written in terms of punctuation, spelling, coherence, and cohesion. However, you have some problems when you write in past because you do not conjugate the verbs in past. Please take that into accout for the exam or will will get problems when you face the writing task.

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-I went to see a movie "The fast and furious 8", with my girlfriend and my friends.
-I went to play soccer with my friends from work, we won 8-5.
-I was seeing in NETFLIX "13 reasons why", a series that talks about the problems of adolescents in the world
-I worked too much all week, I worked on a software project for the client "Nueva EPS", at work I spend most of the time of the week, 8 hours a day, to go to work I'm on a motorcycle, In the motorcycle i go all over the city.
-Rest in the nights
-With some friends we had some beers, we also danced.
-The best thing I do in the week is to go walking with my girlfriend, with her we talk about many things, our dreams, to seek a better future for both of us, we have been through very difficult times and we try to find solutions for our problems.
-The worst thing is to have to see the news, the problems related to Venezuela worry me a lot because I have a lot of family there, they have suffered a lot, they have been very hungry, because of Nicolas Maduro.
As for things without finishing I have a software that I am developing, from the 20 years I work on the idea, I spend time in my spare time ... improving the design, performance and other things, I want to create my own company that sells This software, I have a lot of faith to things that can happen.

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Actividad abril

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-IFTysdH3f3LXlUdVZwT3RseGc/view?usp=drivesdk
https://goo.gl/photos/PM4Jqmgh83ueFYxs5

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Hi,

Well done. This is an approach to the success. You are doing it pretty well. Your curriculum followed the steps and it included relevant information about you and the things you did or do in each one of the jobs. You used grammar and vocabulary properly.  Just a few mistakes:

-Organized ----- Tiddy
- to meet customer requirements.
- Leading a small team --- Better say manage, run, supervise
-  clients’ briefs. --- Expectations
-Maintaining KEEPING the stability of all systems
- to  Until delivery

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Hi!

The participation in the second task is well written in terms of punctuation and sequency. However it is not difficult to know that you used a translator to do the activity because there are many coherence, cohesion problems and also some wrong sentences traduced from Spanish to English. Next activities be careful and check several times what you write. I also hope you try to write by yourself your ideas.
Here some mistakes:

- On 05 March 2017, I bought  a Chicken??? What kind of chicken?
- Your product I disappointED me amazingly because IT does not DIDN'T taste good.
- We do not want to discard USE ANOTHER WORD the restaurant forever

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Calle 31 sur #4-52 este
Bogota, Cundinamarca
svictorino0@gmail.com

05/03/2017

Santiago Victorino Cano
Terrible service restaurant complaint
La Golondrina
Calle 123 # 4-1
Street Address
Bogota,Colombia

Dear Administrator "La Golondrina Restaurant"

On 05 March 2017, I bought  a Chicken at "La Golondrina Restaurant"

Unfortunately, Your product I disappoint me amazingly because does not taste good. I am disappointed because everyone recommended the restaurant food

To solve the problem, I would appreciate your attention, if you can recommend another menu. We do not want to discard the restaurant forever

I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem and will wait until in less than a week before looking for another restaurant in this town.
Please contact me at the above address.

Sincerely,

SANTIAGO VICTORINO CANO

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Thanks for the video you created. You know how to share personal information and talk about yourself your family and future plans. However, it was a bit difficult to understand because there were some grammar and cohesion mistakes. You also need to focus on pronunciation because you are pronouncing exactly as you read. Study the sounds SH, CH, TH, INITIAL S AND Z for know.

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-IFTysdH3f3SUF1QVVPczg3eGM/view?usp=drivesdk