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I referenced every quote correctly.

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I believe I will do well in this assessment because I listened in class, sent a draft to my teacher, and went to English Help after school.

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I need to practise identifying and analysing a broader range of conventions.

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I feel I did relatively well in this assesment because I made my essay comprehensive, read Marxist theory beforehand, and checked early forms of my essay with my teacher.

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I think I did alright, because I prepped a week before, but had other assessments at the time - so I couldn't fully devote all my time to writing it. Jen

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i didnt manage my time very well, therefore i ended up not being able to finish my assessment to the best of my abilities

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i didnt manage my time very well, therefore i ended up not being able to finish my assessment to the best of my abilities

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I believe I will do okay in this essay. I was prepaid for the essay, and understood the task

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I think I will do alright in this assessment as I did prepare well and also put quite a bit of effort into it, but it still properly wasn't my best essay

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i believe that i wont perform very well because it was rushed, i have done well in the past but there wasnt enough effort put in to it

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I think I did decent in this essay because I spent a lot of time working on it, researching and editing afterwards. jorja

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I believe I will achieve a mark of 70-75% as I understood the topic thoroughly, but completed it last minute which would decrease my mark.

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I believe I will achieve a mark of 70-75% as I understood the topic thoroughly, but completed it last minute which would decrease my mark.

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i was good at using examples from the text and finding meaning in dialo and different events that occurred

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I believe I did well because I worked very hard on my work and took the time to look over it.

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I think I will get a solid 75% as I put in the effort and it's relatively the same as my past performances and assessments

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I hope i did well in the essay as i put a reasonable amount of time in, and emailed a copy to mrs den hann to check before handing it in.

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i think that i did okay in the essay, but I'm not sure that i included enough critical reading quotes. and also i could've prepared earlier.

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i think i did alright becuase i did it to the best of my ability and prepared enough

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I think I would have done relatively well, because I spent time on it, and listened to my teachers advice.

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I think I did fine in this bc I started early and did it in time Stella

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I was good at explaining my examples and quotes, and I feel like I elaborated my argument well

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I think I will do alright in this assessment because I prepared a lot for it, however I may lose marks because I exceeded the word limit.

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I believe that I will perform well as I prepared in class and at home for the assessment and I put effort and time into it.

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i think i did alright however i have done very well it past assessments, so hopefully i wont be too disappointed. i wish i spent more time on it

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I could've used a few more quotes

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I used a lot of scholarly references in my work, and a lot of evidence to support my ideas. jorja

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I think I’ll do alright, I listened and wrote some plans, thought I expressed my ideas pretty well, somewhere in the 70s

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I think that I did alright in the assessment because I spent a long time on it and prepared a lot. I usually do well in essays so I hope I did good. Hannah

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I wrote my paragraphs well and used lots of different terminology. jen

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I feel I did ok, nothing outstanding or terrible probably somewhere in the middle. I could have definately put in more time and effort into my essay

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I demonstrated my understanding of the novel and the reading lens and provided evidence.

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to maybe manage my time more and procrastinate less. jorja

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next time I need to use a range of quotes - meaning critical readings and quotes from the book. jen

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I went into detail and did lots of research

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I used a good source of quotes and information and TEEEL structure.

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I used a good source of quotes and information and TEEEL structure.

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I think I used my sources and quotes really well and integrated them into sentences.
Sarah

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time management

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most of it. make a good point and have good structure

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Used effective essay form

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meanignful quotes

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I needed to link my ideas about the reading lens back to the text a bit better and put brackets around my references and quote makers. Daniel

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the paragraphs about disempowerment were good

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I had a really good understanding of my lens and was able to integrate old and new ideas into the essay

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Next time I should make sure I structure my essay better

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Some areas I can improve on are developing ideas of my thesis more thoroughly in the introduction, and lead in to quotes to make the essay flow better

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Some areas I can improve on are developing ideas of my thesis more thoroughly in the introduction, and lead in to quotes to make the essay flow better

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work on my teel structure more and quote more things

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I did a different approach to my thesis which was clear and referred back to it throughout my essay

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I think I should've have focused on utilising the language techniques better and created a more in depth argument
sarah

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Topic sentences

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I did lots of research, and included evidence.

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I quoted sources well and used good structure.

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Establishing a better link

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I can improve how I engage with the question

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I feel I was good at communicating my argument to the reader and the form of my essay.

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I could improve making my essays more complex and better grammar and punctuation