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positive:
Most of the grammar is correct
The argument is supported by evidence
improvements:
Did not answer all the questions
Insufficient in-text references and bibliography

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Positive:
1 Includes introduction, body text , and conclusion.
2 Text word count met.
Improvement
1 insuffcient academic sources
2 unclear logic

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2 positive aspect of my work:
the structure is clear
Word count of 500 to 750 excluding bibliography

2 areas that I need improvements:
add more connectives
not enough references

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2 positive and 2 negative and reasons for the rise, aspects of my work:
I used 6 sources and developed a good logical structure
4 areas that I need improvement:
Less reference
The formats need to be strengthened above
Can't use to ensure sentences are grammatically correct and sufficiently clear.
No scholar cited

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2 positive aspect of my work:
The essay has a clear structure
Academic use of words
2 areas that I need to improvements:
Not enough references
Need to develop clear paragraphs

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2 positive
1. the essay is clear.
2. The essay is organised.

2negative
1.The references can be improved.
2.Citation can be searched more than 8 to put them correctly.

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Positive:
I have included an introduction, a body and a conclusion.
My observations range from 500 to 750 words, not including the bibliography.
Not enough:
I just use 6 kinds of reference.
My sentences may not be clear enough.

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positive:
1.I did a clear structure.  2. Most of the sentences using the correctly grammar.
improvements: 1.did not put the bibliography into the article.
2.use some connected words to improve the sentences.

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positive:
I have a complete essay structures, including introduction and conclusion and so on.
Most sentences are grammatically correct.
improvement:
I just use 2 kinds of references.
The coverage of the article is not very extensive.

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2 positive aspect of my work:
To use in-text referencing appropriately/a clear structure
2 areas that I need improvements:
Not enough references/not respond all question

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2 positive aspect of my work:
I wrote a lot of informations in my essay and put a bibliography list at the end of the article.(and I really tried my best).

2 areas that I need improvements:
the essay structure is little bit messy, some grammatical errors and the content of the article is not very comprehensive

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Positive:
I used formal language and had complete article structure.
Improvements :
not enough 8 sources( not APA )/ did not answer the question clearly and completely.

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I did a clear structure on essay.
I mentioned what is supposed to appear in the text.
I didn't use any sources to show the results.
It wasn't linked to classical sociological theories much.

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strength:
Clear essay structure
Appropriate words count
Weakness
Did not use 8 academic sources
Did not use many in-text citation

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Positive aspects of my work:
The essay has clear ideas. I used four sources. Besides, I made a perfect summary.
2 areas that I need improvements:
I did not use PEE (Point, evidence, explanation) logic to sort out the article. There are too few related words between sentences.

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2 positive aspect of my work:
I used 8 sources and developed a good logical structure
2 areas that I need improvements:
Lots of spelling errors/ did not answer the question clearly.