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Hi Bowen, I really like how you made the viewer guilty/ feel bad to persuade the viewers. I like how you showed clear images that relates to your topic. I just wish that you can elaborate more about why these items are relevant in this progam. Besides that I enjoyed your effort, keep up the great work!

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Hi Viraaj,
I love how you have put in the effort to make your post stand out and be different which really interests me. I wonder though if you can make the information a bit more clearer.

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hey Zoe, this poster is incredibly good. I like how kept a theme of teal throughout your poster. you also had really good persuasive text in order for us to understand why we should donate, i also enjoy the photos that you captured for your poster to make it more vibrant. overall this poster is great!

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Cleo, I really love the work you did on this poster you did a really good job on this. I like how it is also aesthetically pleasing so it catches peoples attention. I like how you included real-life examples of why we need to donate as well as a description of what St Vinnie's is about and what they do. I also like the images that you used although I think you could maybe fix the layout of the text and images so it looks more cleaner. As for the layout of the text and images maybe lay it out better and not just randomly put it somewhere on the page. Overall the effort you put into the poster already still looks lovely, it's a lovely poster and I love it.

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Hey Cleo love your incredible hard work you have put into this poster love how you have included images that let us know what it is for especially the donate one and the information you have included for example the questions that constantly remind us of others and this really is persuasive and makes me really want to help. I wonder if you could leave it how it is because it has everything needed. love it!!

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Thank you Hendrix and Thomas for putting your hard work into such an amazing poster, I really like how your text is very persuasive and eye-catching to donate. I wonder if your could and more pictures of what to bring in. Remember Santa is always watching if you have bean naughty or ice.

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Tanvika I want to thank you for the catchy poster and all your har work on this excellent poster. I really like the Christmas-related images and the green background, they stand out with text. I wonder if you adjust the images so we can see the text a bit more clearly.

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Cleo, good work! I love the background because it is very eye-capturing. I like the amount and use of images because it makes the poster very engaging. I love how in the first text, you mentioned how some kids don't have anything to eat on Christmas, it makes me feel very empathetic and it makes me want to donate. I can't really think of any wishes which means you did a good job! Thank you for your hard work!

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Hi Edna your work here is really amazing! You've made a really good poster for Vinnies Appeal. I really like the good use of images and drawings to help give us an idea of whats hdppening. Maybe next time try changing the yellow text to another colour so that it'd be even more easier to read :). Overall it's really amazing and fun to see how much you've put!

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Great Job Bowen, i love how your poster is simple and gets straight to the point , i also like how you are using persuasive language. one thing that i would improve on is just  adding the date that the items are due but other then that keep up your hard work !
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I really like your choice of imagery, it definitely makes the poster more engaging! I also like how you've used empathy as a tool in your text. I wonder if you could organise your text boxes to make it a little more neater and easier to read.

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thankyou so much Aiden and Miguel for this fantastic poster that really calls out what this event is for with that big colorful word saying donate picture, I also love that you have included the team Vinnie's logo and what we have to bring. however I wonder if you could arrange your texts boxes to be in there own section and also nicely big and visible to see and also I would like to add about the clothing donation box, we are not necessarily donating to that so it will make people confused so maybe replace that image with a hamper. All in all love the colors included and information.

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Thank you Aiden and Miguel for your hardwork making this poster for Vinnies Appeal! I reallu like how you've used an eye catching "donate" poster to catch our attention and also giving us a description to how we can participate.

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Harshehzad, very good work! I like how you drew your own logo because it shows that you love to draw and you're very good at it! I love the persuasive language at the bottom highlighted in blue. I just wish there was more persuasive texts in your poster so I feel more persuaded to donate more. I also wish I could see the full poster because I can't see everything you wrote on the left. Overall, you did a very fantastic job! Thank you for your hard work!

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Hi Aiden and Miguel, I really like the background and the image choices. I was wondering however if you could rearrange the text so that everything flows smoothly, if you could, that would be epic! Maybe you can add the St. Luke's logo too! great job ,!

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First of all well done on your excellent poster ! I love you poster and how it shows all the key information . but one thing i would do is tidy up the pictures and the lines of the boxes to make them straight but I definitely  love you poster and how in the title t tells you what stage you are targeting :)

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Thank you Harshehzad for your amazing work to creating this Vinnies appeal! I really liked the good use of colours and eye catching features to help get our attention. It's really amazing how you've drawn this yourself!!  Your "you can help" sign is really good but maybe try taking another attempt at it so that you can finish it up :). Overall I really fascinated by it.

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Great job Kailen and Chantelle for the effort that was put into creating this poster. I really like the flowers you had placed in the background and the fact that there was a lot of persuasive language. I think you could make this poster better by organising the text more neatly rather than the text all being squished up together and change the background to something that will make the text easier to read but overall fantastic work.

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Cyan and Kyril,
Thank you for you your creativity and hard work.
Your poster is eye catching with contrasting colours.
I like how main questions have been answered, in a easy and simple way.
I would love to see pictures so it would bring your poster alive, and a title about the Christmas Hamper Appeal, so we know what the donation is about.

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Tanvika, I really like how the green background pops. I like how you said who the audience you were aiming for was noted in the poster. I like how you have sectioned parts of the text. I wonder if you could have added some more photos of the food.

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I really love the bright colours and all the pictures you have put on your poster. I also love that in your writing you are addressing the audience which is a great skill. I wonder if you could have the text or the background as a darker colour, it will make it easier to read. I wonder if you could also talk about the stage this poster is for. But except for that you have done a marvelous job.

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This was a really nice poster, I like how you went for the Christmas theme and added pictures related to Christmas. I like how you explained everything in sections. I wonder if you maybe could spread the images around instead of putting it all in one space?

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Cullen, Indigo, Isabella and Maeli, you have done an amazing work, I love it!. I really like how you brought the spirit of Christmas into your piece of work. I also like how you made it persuasive and convincing to your audience. I wonder if you could add more detail on what to bring. After all this is snow joke!

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I like how your poster is colourful. Students will like your poster. The pictures are detailed. People know what they can donate. I think it look good with more even more snowflakes and some Christmas lights.

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Lara and Abigail great job on adding big photos making it more clearer for Stage 1 so they know what to bring, i love the persuasive devices you used. I wonder if you can make the background pop out more. Overall good job and i love the colours of the text you used to make it pop out, good job

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I like your poster because it has a lot of information that can help peaple see why they need to donate. The information is valuable, because it shows the need of thos people in need of the hampers.

I like the images that you put in because it shows that St Lukes are trying to help and showing that anything is good with the image of the chips in the poster.

It would be better to change the color of the writing or the background because its hard to read.

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Cullen, Indigo, Isabella, and Maeli, this poster is very good, I like how you used persuasive writing to draw in the reader into bringing in these food products to school. I love that you stated why we should donate, i also like how you included the Christmas sprit into your poster to show that its always good to give

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You have done amazing work in notifying people of the st vinnies Christmas appeal. The centre of the poster clearly shows the general idea of this whole project, which is definitely a very good and eye-catching way to draw your audience's attention. I believe your word selection is very good, as it makes the reader feel for the people in need. However, I think you should have elaborated more on what is actually happening for the Christmas appeal.  In terms of design, I love the hand-drawn tea art, but I think you could have been more careful with the font selection and colour, which would definitely encourage the reader to read more about the Christmas appeal. I Think The background of this poster could also have been selected a little more carefully, maybe a plainer background, because the poster is very busy, making it less easy to read. However, I really love this poster as it shows what the people in need are missing out on, and I would definitely love to see more hand-drawn art

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Lara and Abigail thank you for your amazing hard work at making this poster. I really like the catchy logo of the lion's den and St Luke's. I also like the some pictures of donation they have to bring: Stage 1 needed to bring milo, baked beans, tea, coffee and chips. I wonder if you add a bit more detail into when we have to donate, why we need to donate them and who do we donate to.

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Thank you so much for you hard work !
the big lego really catches my I and its telling me to donate so well done on that.the text and the bottom possibly need to be a more bold colour and bigger so others know what stage, the items they need to bring and also the date but other that that good job on your work and keep working hard :)

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Hey Cullen, Indigo, Isabela and Maeli, I love how you have included all the prompts and told us why we should donate which really intreged me as a reader. I like the cute images you guys added also explained to us what Vinnies appeal is for and what they do. I love the technique that you used in the second paragraph where you used imagery to really intreged and persuade the reader.

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Cullen, Indigo, Isabella and Maeli, the poster you all have made with your hard work is really amazing! I really like the good use of images, glitter effects and colour for the template, and I also like how you've clearly displayed the Christmas Hamper Appeal+ provided us a description to why we should participate. Next time maybe try telling us the date, stage and items needed so that it'd be even more easier to know how we should participate? Overall I am still amazed with the poster you've created to shows us all.

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hi guys, I really love how you festively decorated your poster is and how much you show that you care about those who aren't lucky as we are. The pictures and descriptive language is so amazing. However, to make the readers more drawn in is to make the poster a bit more of a coloured background and also be more persuadive to donate. But overall amazing work!!

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Woww!! Adhvik, Jasmin and Maddie, I really like your creativity and your use of color on your poster, I really like how this poster includes the information for who it is for, what we need to bring and why we should. This poster is a good eye catcher poster but one thing I would have loved to see would be for yous to add more of the things yous would like us to bring and when. But overall this was a fantastic poster, plus I love the pink.

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Joshil, I think your poster was really good, the blue with the white dots caught my eye. I like the use of emojis to convey more emotion to the audience. I think what would make this poster even better would be the use of more pictures to allow the audience to have a better picture in mind of what you want to achieve.

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Zoe, thank you for your hard effort in making this poster. I really like the blue candy cane photos you used. I like the way you described the candy canes making it more persuasive. I wonder if you can make it more colourful and explain who is this for, overall i really like how you made the poster very neat. Great work

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Hi Zoe, I really like how intriguing you wrote your slogans and how persuasive your poster was. I like the colour theme of the poster, it is very simple yet pleasing to the eye. It is also easy to read. I just wished you added more context about the St. Vinnies Appeal. However you did a great job!

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Isaac and Miroslav you have done a very good job adding a lot of pictures on your poster. I also love that you have kept the background as the St Luke's green. I wonder if you could have a bit more information on what year groups you are focusing on, I also wonder if you could add a bit more information on the date.

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Noah i really like how you added clear pictures to show your text. you have added a good amount of text but i think that it showed be split up and in seperate boxes. i would also change the colour of you text because it is a bit hard to read but it is still detailed and your images support the text and it helps add detail to it

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Kailen and Chantelle, I like how you have highlighted key notes and used different colours to point out what is needed. I also really like the background, the flowers make the poster look positive. The pictures that you have drawn are beautiful I like the colours and the fact that you even drew some steam coming off from the drinks. I wonder if you could have added who you were aiming the poster for.

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Isaac and Miroslav, this is a very good poster and I really like it. I like the use of persuasive writing and how you added pictures of the things you want your audience to donate. I like how you used poor people and poor families as a reason why we should donate to St Vinnies, it makes me feel empathetic for people who don't have money and it makes me want to donate. I like the whole BEANZ joke however, some people (who are slow at getting jokes) can be a bit confused to what you are trying to say. But overall, this is a very great poster! Very persuasive, very engaging, and a little humorous! Thank you for your hard work!

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Zoe, I really like on how you focused on the blue colours all throughout the poster. It makes it very nice to look at. I like how you added different texts focusing on different parts of the St. Vinnies Appeal. I wonder if you could maybe add more detail like little icons. It would be also nice if you add more text for more detail about the St. Vinnies Appeal. Overall great work!

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I like how you add in all of the information and the images. But I think you could maybe work on making the poster more colourful.

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Well done Indi and Panthini. Your poster very pretty and I also love how well you explained how and were the donation would go and who it would support.
I love how the poster has a nice colour theme but next time you should try to colour the words different from the colour theme to make it easier to read. I also really liked how you put lots of different photos that represented donation and empathy for those who need it. I also like the short positive messages you put in the background like 'Send help' and 'Donate'. Next time, you should add some catchy sentences to your poster.

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Thank you Issac and Miroslav for you excellent work, I really like all the persuasive  language as well as the hook really catches my eye ! but i was wondering if you could put some key information like what stage that needs to bring the items as well as what date . Great job on the poster and continue on with your hard work :)

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Hi Edna

Your work looks amazing and i really love so here are things i love about it and something you could do to improve it!

I love the color in the poster it make it pop out a lot

I also love that you included pictures

one more thing I like is that big question at the bottom saying "don't you want to help"

But maybe spread out the sentences and make them bigger because I cant read it that well

I also love how much information you have within the sentences

The work and effort in this is amazing and me as a year 8 couldn't do a better job as i would to the same thing. This poster is amazing and I love the red and green at the top.

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Joshil, good on you for putting all this hard work in and creating this beautiful poster. I am really amazed by the colours which sooth my mind and brain. The small extra details such as the stars really make it intriguing.  I love how you played around with the words but i wonder if you could add more details on what to bring and where etc. In general, i like how you used encouraging words but some extra information would be appreciated.

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Adhvik, Jasmine and Maddie, I really like how it's set out and theres a mix of text and pictures. I also think the colours used really suits the theme. Theres also not too much words nor too less. Maybe you could add a section wheres it stands more out with what you need to bring.

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Hi Noah this piece of work caught my eye because of how short the sentence but you put in a lot of deep wording. I also like the pictures you put on the screen  they are very nice I am now hungry.

Now a wish from me you you just maybe but in a image of the logo for vines appeal and vines helping the people.

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Hendrix and Thomas, thank you for your incredibly hard work making this poster. I really like the blue background that catches my eye. The persuasive devices is so clever! I wonder if you can change the colour of key details like the audience (Stage 1) and a list of items that they need to bring. Overall I love the play on words! It's never to Latte to make a difference. Great work