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choke and die i hope u burn in hell

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It would be sensible to say external, but I think every one faces internal issues in their life. All of the characters, at least, have other faces they hide. Real people all have emotions and issues too.

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It affects how you picture everything. The description of settings can affect how you empathize with characters. If you hear a character live in a post apoctalyptic world and that their life sucks, you'll probably feel bad for them. If a character is described as living in a beautiful city with a beautiful life, you may feel more hopeful.

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i aint looking forward to nothin lol

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I try to use as much evidence that I can. Analyze it and pick it apart. Make all the connections I can. Use my rhetorical triangle.

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I hope to get some scholarships. I'd like to get my associated at pellissippi or a community college. Then i may go to ETSU. I am not picky in terms of school, i wanted to go to SC for college but I don't think I'll do that anymore. I hope to pursue something with animals or plants, like ecology. Doing research in the field sounds ideal.

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obv wouldnt eat children. but i get his point. its disgusting the way the poor and women were thought of back then. viewed like pigs for breeding. i mean quite literally its not a good idea to eat the poor, maybe eat the rich.

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People use slurs because they're ignorant and understand its a way to put someone down for anything based on how they look. It's a historically derived cover-all curse. People who use those words aren't afraid of how truly ugly they are.

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Not much. Sometimes when I've been shopping, I do realize that what I'm buying is probably coming out of a poor environment but I decide to buy it anyways because I'm not really a good person. I try not to do that though, like giving up shopping on Amazon or Shein.

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Yes, I think that everyone believes that child labor is bad. However, I do appreciate having to consider alternatives to directly outlawing it. I never really considered the other hand of child labor, that some need it. America is blind to cultural differences that cause these awful cycles, that there is something worse than the abuse we're aware of. I still think that there is a way to eliminate child labor without letting poor children fall into the cracks.

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The last time I lied was saying I had a good day when I didn't. I also lied when I told my friend I liked the music he reccomended me when I didn't, it was mid. I didn't feel like starting something with my parents about why i wasn't feeling good because it was easier to say that I just did. Most times I lie because I just don't feel like starting something that I don't wanna get into.

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My brain feels fuzzy right now. I lowkey hate my life but it's also going alright. I've stayed pretty true to all my New Years resolutions so far. I want to start going to the gym, too, i just have to get my membership set up. I also need to get my debit card fixed because the bank put a block on it for some reason and I've been living off of a starbucks gift card for the last two days at work.

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technically, no one can meet perfectionism no matter their sex. i don't know whether this question asks about my preferred "type" or perfect people in any sense. I hope I am answering this correctly. Someone who is not clingy and does not look for a real relationship, who wants something loosely connected and just wants to have fun sounds ideal. Outside of that in an ideal situation in the future, all I ask is for someone who loves me in all senses, someone who will not fall into that stereotype of married people who hate eachother.

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I would tell them not to date seniors if they're a freshman because the seniors who prey on freshmen are weird and they will just chew you up and spit you out. I would also tell them that you need service hours for the Hope or TN Promise scholarships because I didn't know that until middle of my junior year. I would tell them which teacher I liked and didn't, and what they needed to know about them. I would also try to explain the different groups in the school (I don't want to say cliques because i don't think that's right) and how they're socially interconnected.

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The fact that it's still hard when its supposed to be easier. What i mean is that I dislike the limits of meaning and craft, like I'm not good at making it as concise and literal as it needs to be and communicating everything correctly. I guess I also struggle with tone. I just really don't like doing it sometimes. You can't have fun with it without it costing you it seems, it lacks creative style.

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My bedroom is clean, the walls are a light grey color and are covered in posters, tapestries, and dream catchers. All the dressers and desks are covered in knick-knacks and trinkets. My bed is made up, except my heated blanket is semi-neatly wadded up in the corner of the bed, and my work clothes are laid out for me to change into when I get home. I have a pink rug that my cat is most likely laying on right now with his toy mouse, unless he is creating mischief elsewhere. The black dresser next to my bed has a leaky wax melter on it, some houseplants and candles, a container of crystals, all of my jewlery in their own bowls, a lava lamp, and more trinkets. My mirror has a cover-up draped over it, holding necklaces, a crochet bag holding masks, the top of the mirror is coated in stickers and polaroid photos. My tv and ps4 sits neatly on my desk with candles, plants and an iHome in the corner, with trinkets and records and books stacked on the lower level. Under the TV is my old printer, my amp (guitar next to the desk) and my record player. My window holds the majority of my houseplants, and some old cups rotting on the wildowsill.

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I believe that "homeless" was one of the most effective, as well as "fish cheeks". "Homeless" is the most effective in my opinion because of how strong it is in all of its elements, especially the ethos and pathos, and the use of example to develop those feelings. The claim to simple things being key to a "home" and what home owning has meant before vs what it means now. Little things creating a home adds more to the meaning of "homeless" and how straining and lonely it must feel to be without those things. Fish cheeks was also strong in those elements and its narrative nature laid out a direct message for positivity and for change for the audience

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My om's boyfriend, James, is very clingy, but loving. He always flatters me for no reason, but how consistent it is is very aggravating. He is always all over me and trying to be kind, and i find it both charming and annoying. My mom also loses everything and can destroy a deep-cleaned house in two days without even trying. Also aggravating, but quirky. I actually like to make jokes about it with my family. The clinginess isn't funny, though.

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I have to take my road test today. I went through a drivers course over the summer and completed it in September, but I still have to go to the DMV. I took a road test and was supposed to get my drivers license through the course, but the only piece of paperwork required was lost and they refuse to make us a copy. So, I took the course for nothing and now i have to go get my permit renewed and take a road test again. I hope they just give me my license so this nightmare is over. I am nervous even though the test is supposed to be easy and I have been driving for a year.

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Yes. The first person perspective gives us an upfront look at the feelings, reasoning, and thoughts of a person

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I don't know if it's anything about my heritage that really affects me. The most I feel people could assume about my heritage is that I'm a normal southern Christian white girl because I'm just white. I am part polish, but nobody really knows that. The other side of the family is more polish because they live up north and go the polish last name of the family (Wisnewski).

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I am most interested in the smackdowns, even through I am not competitive. I am sure everyone will enjoy them.

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Somewhat, considering I just wrote a rhetorical analysis. I'm not perfect at it, but I think I understand it well enough. I can identify the rhetorical approaches of a text. If you mean publicly speaking, then most likely not.

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Not at the moment. I think I'll have to write one again before I develop new questions.

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I am least confident in finding appropriate evidence of ethos. I mean, seeing someone make a point with pathos or logos can be identified a lot easier. I know what ethos is, but sometimes talking about it is hard. I know i struggled with it on my Outliers paper. I was super lucky to find a way to use the covers and index to my advantage. Sometimes it's also not really so obvious or stated what the author has done to make them credible. I guess i also find it difficult to create my own text to go with the evidence I've found, truly explaining it.

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I feel like garbage today. I had been feeling sick (NOT CONTAGIOUS) yesterday and i still don't feel great. I should make some lifestyle changes to take better care of myself. Like eat healthy and exercise again. Or start a planner to remember things. I slept so much yesterday but I'm still tired. I should be the one to make this year better than it has been.

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I am least confident in finding appropriate evidence of ethos. I mean, seeing someone make a point with pathos or logos can be identified a lot easier. I know what ethos is, but sometimes talking about it is hard. I know i struggled with it on my Outliers paper. I was super lucky to find a way to use the covers and index to my advantage. Sometimes it's also not really so obvious or stated what the author has done to make them credible.

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I like to write long, pretty sentences. I like being able to dig into a subject and use nice words. I like being able to dress of sentences with flowery prose. I often write short, poorly written sentences in an assignment because I don't feel like trying and I don't really care. I'd say I'm probably just a mediocre writer.

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pt 3
"fuzzy feeling as you disassociate more and more out of your own world

and a darkness that lurks even in the brightest light

and enjoying the little things,

and the nostalgia you try to revisit through the passing cars on the way home,

and that one acoustic playlist that you mindlessly enjoy on your daily commute or

curl up to at rock bottom-

is always there.

the chilly winds that warn of the coming cold remind me that all my friends are blowing away like the leaves

and reveal the barren frame on the inside like the trees who have been stripped of their foliage.

for fall is not a memory or a time, truly, but a friend, or an acquaintance maybe,

not one that’s ever really there or tells you good things,

but tells you how things really are and provides you the opportunity to resonate with yourself more than with them.

it lets me know how the time is passing and how i have begun to fade away from the people and the places

like the color draining from the earth as summer slowly dies,

surrendering itself dormant to a new unforgiving wilderness

with nothing but the chill of the sleeping earth."

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Yes, it is very effective. It is very dark and heavy that it would be difficult to remain unfazed by his message.

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Yesterday was fine, a basic day. I felt bored most of the day. I had a math test that I was very nervous about taking. However, I got home and finished taking it, and did very well.

Yesterday was as average as a girl in white slip-on vans sneakers. I was wearing a wool sweater and a zip up hoodie, and still froze while sitting in the cafeteria. The city is turning kids into icecickles with the thermometers so low. I'd imagine that even when I'm older, the schools will be cold eternally. They'll only turn it up when hell has frozen over, too.

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pt 2
"i was only once a girl who was lost in the leaves and enchanted by the seasons, innocent and kind with good intention,

wandering through a unforgiving wilderness.

i will remain in a realm of white brick walls and sunshine breaking through halfway covered windowpanes,

and fluorescent light flickering over the sounds of video lectures and brand new shoes scuffing the tile floors,

as the latest school shooting is being seen on a snapchat story.

i will never once truly touch the outside world, nor be apart of it.

i believe i died a long time ago and was left to haunt one of those spoiled summers or wistful winters,

when there is nothing more than the bitter sun outside and the absence of yourself

in a room with filthy sheets and succulents sleeping in the sun the creeps through the window, where the buzz of the tv never seems to end.

however much i may hate the forbidden frost that glazes the windows from late fall to early spring,

or the violent rays that roast the grass dead,

autumn holds a special place within.

there has always been silently slipping through the cracks and nice clothes

and friends who weave through your circle

and fading interests

and the way i find myself gripping my bedding at night as i try to hold on to the threads of myself while i do my daily unraveling quietly in the night."

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This may be entirely true for some people, but I think those people would be cold and dead inside. Everyone had different levels of sensitivity, but there are some people who could say things to you that would cause damage, even if you're the man with the thickest skin in the world.

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Both can be true. We especially use euphemisms to make others feel better. That's where we get them from to make ourselves feel better in return. We sugarcoat things for other even when they truly screw up, and then we can do the same for ourselves. It's more frequently used for others though. Some people have different ways of managing how they take things, but we understand ourselves and how we process difficult information, so we don't always have to use them for ourselves.

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I liked all of the funny ones. I can't remember specific ones, but I think the cleaning supply and perfume categories were my favorites.

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pt. 1
"i lie awake in this dim room at night, gently bathed in yellow light, searching for a song that feels like the roaches that crawl through my brain.

i scavenge for something that compares to the way i feel like i bake in this sickness,

like when the heat of summer stews you into a sense of confusion and contamination, when you’re only here and there and the only thing you ever really know is that the sun is too bright and the grass is too green and you are going absolutely nowhere.

this feeling of fall is confusing to me,

as it’s a strange blend between the sickening scorch of the summer and the forlorn freeze of winter.

fall is a million memories and a complete blur in my mind, the pieces put in wrong places where i’m not sure what’s what.

it is heartbreak and happiness and a hidden aching i can find on the inside somewhere when i pass by all the spooky decorated houses framed with mitch matched trees and lost leaves scattered on the ground.

sheet ghosts and indie rock dances through my head as i wonder what all is really left to pick apart in my mind.

i can’t say i know what to think, for i don’t believe i was ever really there at all.

all i know is i was there once and i never will be again."

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Figurative language is a great stylistic tool. It's versatile and can portray so many versatile identities and ideas.

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I like pumpkin spice (funny question to ask, as I am drinking pumpkin spice coffee right now). It smells good AND tastes good.

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I LOVE using flowery prose when I write. Since a lot of what I write is poetry, flowery prose comes naturally to me. I like digging deeper into elements of pathos, really uncover the deeper meaning. I don't really like getting straight to the point because i feel like it's never enough and that I need to explore more into the text. Being able t use good reasoning is also nice. But I especially appreciate having freedom and creativity given to me when writing. Direct instruction and guidelines can be useful, but it's constricting at times. Basically, my writing style is everything you don't want in this type of class.

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My clothing style is definitley influenced by 90's and 2000's nostalgia. I like pairing oversized items with smaller ones. I also like pairing chunky shoes with those items as well (sometimes). I could say I dress on how I'm feeling, or even what kind of music i'm feeling that day. I could say my dress style is maximalist (don't worry about doing too much). An essential item for my clothing style is a cardigan. I guess I would describe it as a mix of feminine, grungy, and comfy clothes. Moody, but not too much.

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i don't really have anything I feel like saying here, so I am just going to copy and paste a poem from an author/poet I've been reading a lot of lately.
"The beautiful plate I cracked in half as I wrapped it in tissue paper—

as if the worship of a thing might be the thing that breaks it.

This river, which is life, which is wayfaring. This river,

which is also sky. This dipper, full of mind, which is

not only the hysterical giggling of girls, but the trembling

of the elderly. Not only

the scales, beaks, and teeth of creatures, but also

their imaginative names (elephant, peacock) and their

love of one another, the excited

preparations they sometimes make

for their own deaths.

It is as if some graceful goddess, wandering in the dark, desperate with thirst, bent down and dropped that dipper

clumsily in this river. It floated away. Consciousness, memory, sensory information, the historians and their glorious war . . .

The pineal gland, tiny pinecone in the forehead, our third eye:   Of course

it will happen here. No doubt. Someday, here,

in this little house,

they will lay the wounded side by side. The blood

will run into the basement through the boards. Their ghosts are already here, along

with the cracked plate wrapped in old paper in the attic,

and the woman who will turn one day at the window to see

a long strange line of vehicles traveling slowly toward her door, which

she opens (what choice does she have?) although she has not yet been born."

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argument and purpose are linked because the style of argument and types of rhetoric and correlate to the purpose. If the purpose is a moral issue, it would most likely be argued with pathos and ethos. Id it's a scientific issue, it's more likely to be argued with logos and ethos. the tone can also correlate with the purpose as well. again, more emotional issues may make the tone more emotional. less emotional issues may make the author sound cold or detatched.

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Pajama day, because it's really low effort. I am excited to put no effort into my clothes tomorrow. I can make low top converse and pajama pants look great. However, this day is okay because I am technically dressed for the occasion almost every day. I walk into class and see people walk in dressed like I regularly do (to fit into the mathlete theme). I am a nerd, but not a mathlete, as I will probably do poorly on my math test next period. Friday sounds easy too, because all I have to do is wear blue.

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I am taking a drivers test on Wednesday and I think I am gonna fail. I just don't believe I am exactly ready yet, but I couldn't get it moved, so I hope that it goes well. I feel like sometimes a part of my brain just stops and all I hear is the old dial-up phone noise when I'm trying to do something new. The instructor also usually gets on my nerves, because they talk the entire time and I can't take it all in. I also feel like they expect me to know EXACTLY what I'm doing when I'm doing something new. Some days I just feel like my driving skills are equivalent to Cher Horowitz's from Clueless. I mean, I can drive the few roads I know just fine, but I don't really know why its so important for me to know how to use the interstate perfectly yet. I understand its your only driver's test and you need to know everything, but still, what 16 year old needs to know how to use complicated roads?

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A little bit has changed. I now realize the historical details in an argument that affect the perspective.

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An argument is a point the author wants to prove in a text. The argument can seem implied in the text, but most times the argument can be found in the thesis. If it's a character with an argument, they may state their argument in dialogue or just in text. The argument will need to be backed up by evidence. The argument needs to be proven by evidence or reasoning, or else there really isn't a point in making an empty claim.

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I believe the Mona Lisa did the best job, because feeling can be seen not only in the expression but in the body language and colors as well.

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Sometimes I can. You can see emotion in the imagery, colors, or style. Brighter colors could represent heavy emotion, especially positive ones, while more dull colors can represent a numb or bleak feeling. Scratchy, messy line work could represent anger and rough feelings. Satire can also be used in art to represent opinion, with exaggerations or messages. Symbolism is also an important tool in representing emotion or opinion within artwork. Pieces in an art piece that look really weird or out of place often represent something bigger under the surface. There is so much to be analyzed and taken in when observing art, it is an amazing way of communicating many parts of the human (or non human) experience.

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I really don't know what to talk about. I would talk about school but I am tired of thinking about school. I think I'm just in work mode. I can't wait until fall break when that won't be a concern anymore. Fall break is probably 5 or so weeks away, though. I think I'll go to the beach or go up north to visit family. I used to really like going up north to Ohio, but I haven't been in awhile. It's nicest in the fall. I mean, I probably just think that because that' the only time I've ever been.

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Tone is how the author's words are affected by emotion. Tone is important because it helps the audience figure out how the author feels about the subject in ways other than what he is explicitly saying. The choice in words or prose can indicate that a speaker disagrees with a topic. It also indicates how an author is feeling, or how a character is feeling. Tone can especially help shape characters and their opinions.

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This weekend, I finally got to be sociable and spend time with friends. Saturday was boring, but I don't mind, it was restful. I mostly did chores and run errands. I went to my friends house on Sunday and spent the night there. We mostly just watched movies and chatted. On Monday, I had people over to the pool. It's the most people I've been able to have over in years. I'm starting to integrate both of my friend groups now, and I'm really happy with that. I think I also ate the most I have in a while yesterday. Some solitude will be nice when I get home.

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This labor day weekend I was supposed to go to Bonnaroo in Manchester. Two artists I like would be headlining: Tyler, the Creator and Foo Fighters. I had VIP passes to go with my mom and her boyfriend. However, the rains from the hurricanes rained everyone out and it was canceled for the whole year. So to make up for it, my mom and her boyfriend are taking me to see Stone Temple Pilots in Chattanooga this September or October. I do wish i was able to go to Bonnaroo because I've never had backstage passes to see anyone before, and I've barely gone to any concerts. I'd never been to a rock festival either. I was also supposed to see Foo Fighters last spring in 2020, but obviously that didn't happen. I ALSO had tickets to the Hella Mega Tour with Weezer, Fall Out Boy, and Green Day, but those were also refunded due to COVID. Hopefully this upcoming concert will be fun, and I'll enjoy downtown Chattanooga with my family.

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I feel like I would be more likely to be persuaded by pathos, seeing that I am an emotional person. Logic is important, too.

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I feel like with the type of person I am, I would be more likely to appeal to emotion. I would say I'm an emotionally intelligent person, and I definitely pick up on emotional stimuli, so arguments with emotion can strongly affect me.  I feel that it's like arguing with a brick wall when the opposing side can't be swayed with the betterment of humanity and the struggle of the people. Of course, with those groups, I would then go with logic. Though I respond to emotion, there are somethings that seem obvious and don't need pathos-based reasoning. Logic is an overall better stance for reasoning that will appeal to more people when used. To refute claims, I could see myself using their credibility to dismantle their claim if it's a ridiculous claim from  a biased person.

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yes, because the author's purpose in writing and how they demonstrate that is harder to find. its more obvious in nonfiction in the way information is presented.

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Yes, the author and narrator can work towards different purposes. The author may believe one thing, but the narrator may be working to do something else that the narrator doesn't agree with. They can make mistakes to enhance a plot or for character development. The author can also be making a satirical work with a narrator vastly different from the author. The narrator can also be a neutral force that simply tells a story rather than leaning one way or another, when the author's purpose differs. They can act a certain way so that the audience realizes that the opposite is correct.

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I was going to write about how tired I am and that I wish i could do nothing but sleep, watch tv, and read books for a week, however I just learned something that made me laugh and feel better. I just found out that Keith Ablow lost his medical license and became a Fox News TV personality instead. I think that says plenty about his work. Not only is there already tons of controversy surrounding his opinions, but the fact that a medical doctor can screw up so bad that he becomes a common character in an infamously ridiculous news source is honestly humorous.  I mean, I would think that a medical doctor is more meant for a source such as Associated Press or Reuters, seeing that they are more professional. Not that I'm trying to seem like a crappy person for laughing at someone's downfall, but this persons downfall is just too ridiculous (I guess it also has to do with the fact that I already just don't like him). Insensitive middle-aged white men are normally just too perfect for jobs like that. He looks like he belongs there. I know I sound really cruel and immature, but I don't guess I care right now.

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It provides more to analyze. The rhetorical triangle only analyzes the author, purpose, and audience, while SOAPSTone analyzes those features as well as others.

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It matters what was occuring in the world when a text was written because it highly affects how opinions worked then. For example, there are many extraordinary men who are revered in history that can be seen as problematic today. Let's take Ghandi for example. He was a very important man, especially for India, who helped liberate India from Britain. However, now he can be seen as problematic, considering remarks on other races that seems to contradict what he stands for, his hypocritical and strained relationship with his sickly wife, and the reported inappropriate relationships with younger women in his group. Now that the issues he fought are no longer a concern, and the world's values have changed, people are now looking into these relationships concerning the treatment of minorities and women and evaluating them. Some of these opinions or treatments may have been norms then, so they get included into various works of literature and are represented in older minds.

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The most important thing in a rhetorical analysis is considering the rhetorical devices. Identifying how the speaker uses rhetoric through ethos, logos, pathos, and other devices is the whole point of the analysis. Failing to identify these defeats the purpose. Even if you screw up some other part of the writing, having those elements is crucial. The thesis is also very important. It also makes up a great part of the paper.

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yes, because now I understand that there is more to the rhetorical triangle and people related to it, whether it be the author or audience. There is also more to the purpose than one would think.

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My issue was with the writing part. I need to stop writing unnecessary stuff and write about whats there.

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I struggled with trying to find enough rhetorical devices to argue. I thought I had to do logos, pathos, and ethos because I didn't think of any other forms. I know a flaw in my essay was that I argued that the speaker DIDN'T use ethos well when I should have argued for a different device that he DID use well. I guess it's also just weird doing this n such a short period of time with such little information to write about. I know that I will improve at rhetorical analysis with time, though.