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ms fran´s article is much better than mine because it has retorichal questions and she is much smarter.

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My and ms Fran`s article are very different .As she is a teacher she has more experience additionally she gave more details.
MS Fran made it like a real newspaper

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Mrs. Fran's text is a lot different than mine. Firstly she used figurative language in the beggining of the text. Secondly she put caption. She is a teacher so she has much more experience than me.

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Mine and Ms. Fran's writing didn't combine so much. She used many interesting features I didn't use like rhetorical questions, witnesses, speaches, etc. She used alliteration and a really catchy tittle different than mine. Her writing was very creative and realist. I didn't use adverbs either adjectives, things that she used.

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This text is much better than mine.Because this text has subtitile and it have retorichal questions.

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I think that ms Fran´s article is much better than my.

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Mine and Ms. Fran's writing didn't combine so much. She used many interesting features I didn't use like rhetorical questions, witnesses, speaches, etc.

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ms Fran´s text was awesome and was much better than my text.She has alliteration and on my text don't have alliteration and have much more adjetives and was much more creative.

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Ms Fran's newspaper article was very different from my .Se has more experience than me .Ms Fran adds speech marks.

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Me and ms. Fran did not write so much things in common.She used alliteration whilst she was writing her title which made it eye catching and interesting.She made a great caption and lots of things that made it astonishing.Ms. Fran gave me some great ideas to my next writing by reading h

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ms fran's newspaper text was better than mine because I wrote a story and she wrote a newspaper report about king midas. my newspaper report didn't make many sense but ms fran's did

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Ms Fran`s newspaper had more newspaper features than mine.My newspaper report was a little  bit shorter than Ms Fran`s.I identify my report didan`t have powerful verbs and adjective.

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I think  my text was to little  and my title was not really i changing.My text had no retorical questions at all.I cooled have in proved my text in many different ways.

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The newspaper text was very different than mine.Fran´s newspaper had much more adjectives than mine,my had 3 or 4 adjectives and Ms Fran's had lots.Fran´s report´s title was more interesting than mine,it had alliteration!And mine didn´t had anything.My subtitle was horrible and Ms Fran´s was eye caching.My report looked like a story in the other hand Ms Fran´s could go to Globo news.My picture didn´t had a capion!And Fran´s had.My´n was horrible!

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Mrs. Fran's text is a lot different than mine. Firstly she used figurative language in the beggining of the text.

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In my text I could use rhetorical questions,but I didn't in "Midas Makes Mega Mistakes"  text it use rhetorical questions.
However,my text didn't got as good as "Midas Makes Mega Mistakes" text I think I used a lot of quotes and on the other text it used only to quotes,but on the other hand I used some question marks,exclamation marks,etc.But i thought I explained more than Ms.Fran.But for sure her is better than mine because she used more connectives and adjectives.

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Ms Fran`s your text was amazing your title had alliteration and was creative.You added a picture and a caption in my text i did not add a picture and not a caption until now because i still did not finish my text.you used rhetorical questions and your text was very detailed. your text was short but you could summarise everything.your text was very good.

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In Ms Fran text she put alliteration and i did not put alliteration .However I used rhetorical question in my text.But in my opinion ms France text was beter.

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In Ms.Fran amazing text is much better then my poor text.Her text had much more describing words and it was much more intresting .
Her text was better with some alliteration and rhetorical questions. I have to adimite my was worste then Ms.Fran.

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In miss Fran text,had alliteration although in my did not have put.But in my text I had placed punctuation and other things but I had to some mistakes through the text.

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Dear miss Fran and C3D  by righting  that text I see that you can write very well.I just loved it.First I did not put a alliteration in the title.And I totaly forgot to put witness said.Plus my text looked like a story.Miss Fran you are relly good in writing a news paper report.

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In the text ‘king Midas makes Mega mistake’,we can seethat  the author (ms. Fran), used fuguarative language right at the beginning. Ms. Fran used alliteration in the title. She resumed the story while Imade almost every detail. The author used journalistic writing instead of writing a whole text

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The author used speech marks and I didn’t.i also didn’t youse rhetorical question

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In my taxt I didn’t put alliteration📝but in the other text they put.the other text they put a foto 📷but in my i didn’t put a foto.📰📰📰✏️✏️✏️📝📝📝📜📜📜📋📋📋🗞🗞🗞📇📇📇

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The newspaper text had many difference than mine. Firstly, I wrote a story and not a newspaper text so finding similarities will be quite hard (if there are any). I did like the newspaper’s title because it had alliteration and it was much more eye-catching than mine. I did enjoy the fact that the writer Fran Talavera used witnesses and I used the characters. The text was full of rhetorical questions and I put none. I think the newspaper text was certainly better than mine. I could not spot one similarity between my text and Talavera’s text because we wrote it in different ways.

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In my text I didn’t add paragraphs and in the Midas makes mega mistake they did
However, in my text I added alliteration in the title and in the Midas makes mega mistake they did too❤️
nother similarity is, I put the nowadays date and they put the long ago date.
I was planning to add a picture but I didn’t have time and underneath the picture they have the caption (I think the name is caption,I’m not sure)that I wasn’t planning to add, however is a exquisite idea.👍🏻

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So in my text have different words as : fabulous avaricious and on the other text have words as: atrocious forehead so some words are different and powerful . Is written in a different style and all author have style which some of that style is very famous. Am doing a story and the other text is doing a newspaper.

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The author who ho wrote this text puts alliteration as his title and I put the normal title of midas and the golden touch  and his article text the author has much  more features than a newspaper text and my text has not as much features he included in his text and my pictures are smaller than his pictures.And my text doesn’t have the improvement she added in here text.

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While in the Midas made mega mistake text had a newspaper article, mine had a normal way to write. Personally, it doesn’t mind however it might for other people.

Similarities: My text had alliteration just like the other one, unfortunately, the other one was written approximately two thousand years ago ! I know it sounds really weird but it’s TRUE!

The Midas Made Mega Mistake text, had subtitles and newspaper stuff and mine is basically a story.

Look both did a really good job, and that’s why the both are better in different ways. Mine is better as a story and the other one is better as a newspaper. Therefore, in this case none of them are better. So it’s literally just your opinion on judging it !

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In the  text “Midas Makes Mega Mistake” uses witness to approve his discoveries,  while in my text I didn’t use witness
In my text I explained how Midas gained his power while in the text I read it didn’t explain, Also in my text I put al th 5 W’s but in the text I read they were all there
In that persons text they didn’t tell the daughters name (Marigold) while in my text I mention
In my text I didn’t use a relative clause the text I read used

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The article the person wrote had much more features of a newspaper text.
My text is not well written and the picture is minuscule.
Moreover, my writing did not have many openers or quotes.
Also, my text had no figurative language to improve it.
My writing did not have many paragraphs which are essential to any text.
The person who wrote the article made a very good job writing the article. It is very convincing to be real
It truly makes it look like a real article with all the witnesses
At least my text shows some things like how things happened like how the king got the golden touch and about him loving gold more than anything and the article didn’t.
The title of the article is catchy to make the reader want to read it.
My picture didn’t have a caption so even I don’t know what its about.

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The person who rote the text put alliteration in the title. She rote Yesterday morning in the begging. She told that the king ruled the kingdom. Half of text explained what happens and the other half explains what is happening now. She put the date besides the text and I put it on the text. She new what was the name of the angle or fairy. She rote a sub title and I didn’t. I draw a drawing and the person got a picture from the internet and put it on the article 👨‍💻.