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Make a Robot Cake               helpful: I liked how the author separated everything into parts.
unhelpful: picture is cool but it takes up too much space

Pumpkin Feeder
helpful: I like how the writer added tips and also, very clear instructions
unhelpful: the "what you need" is next to the title

How To Make Coffee
helpful: Very understandable instructions and materials
unhelpful:needs more colour

Magic 5 Minute Chocolate Mug Cake
Helpful: drawings and warning is funny
unhelpful: when it says mix dry ingredients into mug it should say mix 4 tbsp of flour another 4 tbsp of sugar and 2 tbsp of cocoa

Marionette
instructions are not clear and also they are very small and very hard to read

My Favorite provocation was make a robot cake

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Helpful :

1. Many Drawings

Not helpful :

1. Too much Text

2. Tiny words

3. No Date or name

4. No warning sign to tell if it is Dangerous or not

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Helpful:

1. Date and Name at the bottom

2. Funny Drawings

Not Helpful :

1. Too much text

2. Tiny Text

3. No Warning sign to tell if it is Dangerous or not

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Helpful :

1.  Big pictures

2. Tips

3. Name and date

4. What I need

5. Idea about project

Not Helpful :

1. Lot of text

2. less pictures

3. Tiny text

4.  Warning sign to tell if it is Dangerous or not

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helpful:I liked how the author made the instructions simple for everybody.
It helps you to be organised and prepared to start the cake.

not helpful:The pictures are not very clear and helpful to make the robot shape.

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Make a Robot cake:
Make a Robot cake: 1. It has what I'll need first so I can organise myself. 2. The drawing tells me where to put the icing. 3. THe picture is not very helpful demonstration.

Magic 5 minute chocolate mug cake. It has a purpose, ingredients and step by step, but it does not explain it clearly.

Pumpkin Feeder: The drawing shows what it should look like, but it does not say anything about what you need.

How to make a coffee: SImple Instructions, it has ingredients, what to do. Helpful to make for mum and dad.

Marionette: The instructions are not clear and very small as well. Not easy to read.

My favourite instructions are make a Robot cake, because it has most of what you need for a procedural text.

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Helpful shows ingredients , pictures, bullet points, and shows what it should look like. Unhelpful no colour

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Magic 5-min chocolate mug cake
Helpful
-The pictures show the ingredients
-The instructions give a lot of details and explain how to make it step by step
Unhelpful
-Yellow background behind the words make it hard to read

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Helpful
The instructions is very organized and neat
Unhelpful
The picture should be more practical

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Robot Cake

Helpful:
It has a title
ingredients
Steps to make the cake
The pictures looks nice

Unhelpful:
The words are too small
I want to see a real photo of the cake

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Marionette

Helpful:
Material pictures.

Unhelpful:
Needs more color, too small, too many pictures.

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Coffee

Helpful:
Photos of what needed to do, different paragraphs and different steps

Unhelpful:
The instructions being too confusing.

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Helpful:

1. drawing

2. warning sign

3. less text

4. Name and  Date

Not Helpful:

1.  Warning sign to tell if it is Dangerous or not

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Feeder

Helpful:
It shows a picture of what it really would look like, different steps in different paragraphs and they have tips on how to make it better.

Unhelpful:
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Five minute chocolate mug cake

Helpful:
The pictures of ingredients, the different paragraphs and amounts

Unhelpful:font  too small.

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Robot cake

Helpful:
Pictures of ingredients, the amounts and the titles

Unhelpful: having big pictures that are distracting and pictures that aren’t really the real cake.

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Josephine:) - Making a cup of coffee(with milk) 

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Josephine:) - Making a cup of coffee(with milk) 

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Most Helpful:
1.Real life pictures (for me and my mom to understand)
2.Easy steps

3.Name and  Date

Not Helpful:
1.Tiny text
2.Warning sign to tell if the coffee can be dangerous or not

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Marionette
Helpful
1.Instructions
Unhelpful
1.Test was SUPER small
2.No colour

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Making A cup of coffee (with milk)
Helpful
1. Instructions were clear
2. Nice pictures, go with instructions
Unhelpful
1.Needs . more colour

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Coffee (with milk)
Helpful:
1. Very exact instructions
2. Clear pictures
Unhelpful:
1. Needs more color
2.

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Pumpkin Feeder
Helpful:
1. Tips
2. Nice picture
3. Clear instructions
4. "What to do" and "What you need"
Nothing was unhelpful

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Magic 5-minute chocolate mug cake
Helpful:
1. Drawing
2. Nice amount of text
3. Funny warning
Nothing was unhelpful

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Pumpkin Feeder
Helpful
1.Tips
2.Finished picture
3.Things to help you just incase
Unhelpful
1.Needs more colour
2.More drawings or pictures

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Make a robot cake
Helpful
1.Clear instructions
2.Pictures
3.Titles to know where you are in the process
Unhelpful
Nothing was unhelpful

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Make a robot cake 🤖
Helpful:
1. Clear instructions
2. Nice pictures
Unhelpful:
1. Needs more color
2. Too much text

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I liked

Bullet points

Short Descriptions

Numbers

Lists

Color

I didn’t like

The long writing

No color

Little pictures

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Helpful:

Pictures, tips, step numbers, large words, clearly states what you need, template diagram clear, tips at the end, pictures not obstructing the words

Unhelpful:

Illustrations getting in the way, comments at the end of the text (Emails, contact information), tiny words that are hard to read, imperial system, no clear title

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Coffee ( with milk)
helpful
1)  very precise
2)  what i need
3)  nice picture
nothing was bad

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-Helpful
1). Instructions
-Unhelpful
1). Text was super small
2). No COLOUR
3). Non coloured pictures!

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Marionette
1) fun pictures
2) instructions
unhelpful
1) the words were to small
2) No COLOUR!!!!!!!!!!

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Helpful
1.detailed instructions
2.A lot of colour
3.Drawings are nice

Nothings unhelpful!

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Pumpkin Feeder
helpful
1) instructions
2) finished picture
unhelpful
nothing was unhelpful

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Robot cake
-Helpful
1. Pictures
2. Instructions
3. What you need
Nothing was bad

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marionette
helpful
1.numberings
unhelpful
1.too much text

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-Helpful
1). Drawings are really nice
2). A lot of colour
3). Very detailed instructions

NOTHING WAS BAD

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-Helpful
1. Real pictures

-Unhelpful
1. Needs more colour
2. More fun pictures

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Magic 5 minute chocolate mug cake
helpful
1) very colorful
2) instructions
3) what to do
unhelpful
1) It made me so hungry

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-Helpful
1. Picture of final product
2.Tips

-Unhelpful
1.Maybe a bit more colour
2. More pictures or drawings

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milk coffe
helpful
1.real life pictures
2.ingredients
unhelpful
1.not so specific

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-Helpful
1.Pictures
2.Colours
3. Titles(to see what you are making)
4.Instructions
5.Ingredients
Nothing was unhelpful!!!

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Pumkin Feeder
helpfull
1.numberings
2.tips
3.real pictures
unhelpful
nothing

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Chocolate Mug Cake
helpful
1.numberings
2. illustrations have labels
unhelpful
nothing

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Make A Robot Cake
helpful
1.Numberings
2.exact mesurment
unhelpful
1.too much illustration

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Robot cake
Helpful
1 tells how to cut the cake
2 says exactly how much you need
Unhelpful
1 doesn’t say how long to bake it for
2 doesn’t say how to decorate it

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-helpful
1. pictures
2. instructions
3. illustrater
-Not helpful
1.small words
2. too less images and too much text
3.too many instructions

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Helpful :
Tips
What to do/what you need

Un-helpful :
Pictures
Showing us links

Best:
My favourite one was the Pumpkin Feeder :3

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Lila  - Magic 5-minute chocolate mug cake

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Lila  - Magic 5-minute chocolate mug cake

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helpful:  Numbered steps to help understand the instructions

unhelpful:  The pictures do not help understand the instructions

Best: My favourite is the mug cake because it has a little warning at the end which was fun

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helpful:
-short text
-pictures/drawing
-Names and Date
-warning sign

Not helpful
-too much text
-hard questions
-rumbled words
-ugly drawing
-big words

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helpful:
Pictures

nothing bad

what was effective was the pictures.

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helpful:
What to do sign

not helpful
to much text
effective:
what was effective was the what to do sign.

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helpful:
warning sign
pictures

not helpful:
better drawings
bigger text

effective:
what was effective was the warning sign

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helpful:
organised
bullet points
tells you what you need/ingredients

not helpful:
The text is cramped up
more pictures

effective:
what was effective was the bullet points.

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Helpful : the numbers and the instructions.
non-helpful: pictures and no colour.

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Things that helped:
Bullet points
Pictures
Lots of words
Detailed ingredient list

Things that could be better:
Helping pictures
What to do with the ingredients
Less confusing words

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Nothing was bad

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Helpful but the feeder was the best one

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helpful: very detailed and just the right amount of pictures.

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helpful: saying the equipment i needed to make the thing
unhelpful: to many pictures.

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not that much detail
helpful: picture of the finished product.

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helpful:the quantities
unhelpful: to much writing.

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★Helpful:☆
•Lists
•Clear writing (Neat handwriting)
•Not to big or to small writing
•Pictures
•Daft (s)
•Credits or sources
•paragraphs

×Not HELPFUL×
•writing everywhere
•too small/big hand writing
•Hard-to-read-font
•too many pictures or icons
•no paragraphs

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Helpful
____________________
>Vibrant colours
>Clear instructions
>Pictures

>Unhelpful
____________________
>Too much writing
>In one of them there is too much graphics/Little pictures

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Helpful:
-Fun pictures
-Bullet points

Unhelpful:
-Lots of text
-Only one big picture

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Helpful:
-Exact and clear instructions
-End pictures
-Pictures showing what to do
-Tips
Unhelpful:
-grey pictures
-no indication where to get things in the instructions

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Helpful
- fun
- colourful
- list format

unhelpful

- not enough pictures to each step
- complicated instructions

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Helpful:
Detailed and clear instructions
Connected pictures
The instructions were organized
How the finished product looked like
Unhelpful:
Some unnecessary pictures or text
To many pictures taking up the space

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Helpful:
- Titles
-  Sketches of Final product
-  Short facts/words
- pictures to go with the text
Unhelpful:
-  Crowded Pictures/ writing
-  No colour
-  Long sentences
-  No website names (Plagiarism)

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Helpful:
colors
pictures
list
steps

Unhelpful:
alot of writting
very fant colors

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Helpful:
- Bullet Points
- Pictures
- Titles
- Sources
Unhelpful:
- Long sentences
- To much writing
- Some words are too
small

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I like:
~Lists
~Color
~Bullet points
~Numbers
~Short Descriptions
~Little pictures

I don’t like:
~Too long writing
~No color

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Helpful:
- shows numbered steps
- the warning was funny
- a real picture helped see what it should look like
Unhelpful:
- no real picture
- no specific amount ingredients
- putting paragraphs
- putting doodles was distracting
- tiny words make it hard to read

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Helpful:
instructions are in a list form
and short sentences
pictures
unhelpful
not so much space between the words

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How to make a robot cake
Helpful:
Clear instructions
Precise quantities
Organized
Unhelpful:
To many graphics

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Helpful:
What Finish product looks like
Good instructions
Very detailed
Unhelpful:
One picture very big takes up most of the page

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Helpful:
Enough detail
Way to do
Have conneted pictures
Unhelpful:
Some words are too small
No info about where to get it

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Helpful:
- Pictures
- Lots of details
- The information was organized
Unhelpful:
- So of the pictures were unnecessary and distracting.

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Helpful:
Headings
Bullet points
Ingredients
Unhelpful:
Sometimes the colours were to distracting

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Helpful:
1. Titles

Unhelpful:
1.no color