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GCSE Photography - Year 11 Project - Project Three

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I feel like I have done everything in my project and done the work to my best ability. However, if I was to improve my work I would want to make sure that I have glued everything straight into my book. I would also want to improve in how I set my pages out and make them look more professional.

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I feel like I have done everything in my project and done the work to my best ability. However, if I was to improve my work I would want to make sure that I have glued everything straight into my book. I would also want to improve in how I set my pages out and make them look more professional.

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I agree,  in future I should try and make the borders more even and make sure the photos are the same size and consistent throughout.  I think I have a good amount of annotations with my photos, but I still need to upload my mock-up and flow logo pages.

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I need to print more of my work but I’m happy with how it’s all come out so far

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I feel like my work has been very consistent with the layout and analysis. However I think I could try to edit my images better by putting more filters onto the photo.

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i agree that i have presented my work out neatly and have added some annotations.

however i don't agree that all my images should be the same size and that i like them the size that they are

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I completely agree with this. I am proud of the work I have uploaded so far and I like the way I presented it in my sketchbook. However, I do need to get up to date on my work and print all of the work that I have completed out and stick it into my sketchbook.

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You have completed all of the work and presented it well. I really like your Michael Chase and Minor White responses and experiments. You have also created a range of mock ups which look really sophisticated. In our next project you could make sure the border size is consistent throughout your work.

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I feel like I have done some good experiments and responses but I also feel like there are things I could improve on in my next project. I need to make sure I have made the presentation better by making sure my photos and titles are straight. I also need to make sure I have less glue marks on the pages to make the presentation even better.

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I agree i like how i have laid out my work and i have produced multiple designs and tried to experiment and be creative in my work.

I need to get the last few pages printed out and stuck in and upload the photos of my sketchbook pages onto here.

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I will make sure I print out all my work

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i agree with the criticisms, but its mostly powerpoints fault

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I will now make more mock-ups and upload them here. I will also make sure I have annotated everything.

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I agree with your feedback and that I could make photos bigger to show my favourites and smaller photos to show ones I like less.

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i agree that my writing fonts vary, that was due to photoshop. i also agree that my double backing changes so i need to make sure i keep it the same all the way through the topic / sketchbook.

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Thank you for your feedback i do agree but, i'm presenting my work in a portfolio so its in and easy to print out, i think that i could for improvement to add more different and creative mock-ups to my project.

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i agree that

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So far your work is nearly presented and is organised, and you have a good amount of annotations with your photos, your response look very effective. You have your work up to date with the checklist.

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With Lily’s work, I like the presentation in her sketch book, I can tell she has focused on her writing and has put in in detail. She still needs to upload more images on to padlet

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You’ve produced detailed and well laid out pages of work. You’ve thought in a lot of detail how to make you’re work creative, you’ve annotated your work well and produced multiple different designs for your flow logos.

I think the next step for a higher grade would be to present your mock ups onto a page and ready to go in the sketchbook

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Your work seems fairly decent, with lots of writing and photos. I especially like your flow logos as they are very vibrant and colourful.

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you have done a very good amount of work and they are all very good
I cannot see anything you need to improve on. Your work is of a very high standard, the edits look really good and you have a lot of work.

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Your work so far is well presented and you have added a lot of annotations and writing. Maybe for the future you could make all the photos the same size so your sketchbook pages look more consistent and more organised throughout.

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Your work has been laid out neatly. Your text is effective and explains your photos well, I think you could improve on using bigger photos and smaller photos to show contrast.

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You have annotated your sheets in detail and have laid out well, you could edit or put more photos on your sheet.

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You have a good presentation, layout and I like your flow logo photos. You could maybe make your borders on your photos more even.

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With your artists I like how there  is a descriptive amount of detail On the artist . With the edited artist it goes into detail on what you do and don’t like and how you would do it again and with your flow logos and how you edited them it goes into detail on how you edited them and what app you used to get the outcome

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I think you’ve thought really creatively with you analysis and research of the artists and you have really thought about their work and how it links to the topic of pigment.

To get a higher grade I think you could take your own photos inspired by these artists that you have researched and experiment with them using the apps snapseed and photomosg. By experimenting with your photos and taking your own photos inspired by these artists you have researched you will be able to get a higher grade. Another way you could improve your grade is by using photos that you have taken and use them in your flow logos instead of using photos you have gotten online.

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i like the layout of your work and annotations are well done. the responses are also very good.

however i think you are missing prior work and some mock-ups have no edits

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With Nayan’s work I like the amount of Time he has put into the edits because some of his flow logos look great. However when Nayan writes his analysis he needs to try and give more detail about his edits and what filters he has used because then that will help the viewer know what he has done to get some of these image because they look great.

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Your work looks appealing and professional, maybe you could make sure your photos are even and the borders are well cut so it looks a bit neater.

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Good photos, well Presented
Need to print more out

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The work you have completed so far is presented well and is layed out nicely, you have written a good amount and your Photos are good as well. You have completed a lot but still need to complete work and be up to date. But so far really good work.

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The work you have completed is well presented and well shown and the flow logos background are very well laid out, make sure you have got your mock up and the rest of your research on here because it looks like you haven’t done them and keep it up to date.

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I like the way you have layered out your pages. You could put all your flow logos together and write about them

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i like the variety of flow logos and  mock ups also research pages, you have provided good annotations with your work.

to improve fill up the white spaces on your page with annotations or more photos and also make your titles bigger on the pages that you haven't done that.

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you have laid your work out well and have written detailed responses. your images are well edited and you have included good experiments with your flow logos, just make sure you have stuck all your work in your sketchbook.

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I like the photos you have used in your flow logos, i also like how you have edited them. You have a different variety of good mock ups. I also like the layout of your research pages.

Make sure to print out all your work and put it in your presentation folder and upload photos of the pages onto here.

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Your presentation is neat and well organised. You have a range of photos and annotations on each page. You could ensure that you have everything you have done uploaded/stuck in.

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You have produced lots of good artist research pages and artist response pages in detail with good annotations. The flow logos look really good but you should present them onto a page to make them look better on a page. The next step after that is to produce another page with Mock-Ups

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the work that you have done so far is very good but i think that you could make your pages a bit neater

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You have completed all the work and your images look really effective and clean. Your presentation of the research, responses and experiments for each artist is neat and organised. The annotations on each page is in depth and you have written exactly what is going on in each photo. What you could apply in your next project is keeping the font the same and trimming the double backing edge more neatly.

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You have used/put lots of different images in your project. And you have also experimented lots of different ways with your responses. However, you need to add information onto your research pages. For example, what do like about the artist and what do you dislike? The next step of the project needs to be completed, which is 10 mock ups. You have completed the work with your full potential however, you need to work on your presentation. For example, make sure everything is straight and you have trimmed the edges of pictures, titles and information.