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- I was able to get feedback on my writing and also got to see how others wrote as well.
- I fixed my grammar mistakes.
- I reached my goal by using the feedback my peers gave me.

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I learned that not only myself but everyone writes in very different ways, and sometimes giving feedback was a struggle when they didn’t really understand what I was trying to tell them. Although some of my group mates gave good feedback and opinions on my writing that I didn’t really noticed till it was mentioned.

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this activity helped me make sure that my evidence and analysis is relevant to my claim. we were able to get through everything and give each other feedback.

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They said my quotes needed more context 💀

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1. It made me think I do have things to work on with many of my essays but I do also have some strong points in my work.
2. Helped improve each other’s work

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I was able to get a grammar check so that’s good

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1.) I learned that myself and everyone thinks differently and we can have different opinions that we can argue about productively
2.) I got guidance on how transition better and what a topic sentence really is

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The writing workshop helped me as a thinker and learner because it helped me think about the feedback that I was given and reflect on it in order to make my essay even better.

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I think we all improved with our transition words because we all had good ones

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I think we all improved with our transition words because we all had good ones

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We were able to learn from our mistakes through a different perspective. It helped improve the way we saw mistakes and corrected those mistakes as a writer

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I liked getting everyone’s opinion on my story because it pointed out my mistakes and vibes able to is them.

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1) I learned how much more I can improve from others perspectives. When you teach yourself you often miss a lot of details
2) All of us were able to work on our essays and realize what we could improve on. Many people saw what they did wrong and why.

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I think we all did well and improved each other’s essays

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I was amazed to learn how differently we all thought. I also found some success: we agreed on something!

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1. How did our writing workshop experience impact your understanding of yourself as a writer, thinker, or learner?
2. Share 1-2 successes or wins from your peer group's collaboration and workshop.