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To:darren@gmail.com

Subject:Science Museum

Dear Darren,

I hope you are in the pink.I can't wait to share with you about a science museum.The trip is on Saturday and at Taman Ria Community Hall.The activies is very exited because can see more histotical relics.I hope you can come.

Regards,

Varick

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Dear Darren,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I can’t wait to share with you about our trip to a science museum. The trip will be held on Saturday at Taman Ria Community Hall.

The activities are very exciting because we will get to see many historical relics. I really hope you can come and join us!

Best regards,
Varick

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Part 6: 9/10 To: darren@gmail.com From: leeann@gmail.com Dear Darren, How are you? I can't wait to share with you that my school is organizing a trip to a science museum. It's near the BP Mall and the trip is held at 1 October 2025. I am excited to see the interesting experiments. It's a golden opportunity to learn and grow. Come and join me in this beneficial activity, becaouse you won't want to miss it! Ok, that's all from me. Hope to receive a positive reply from you. Regards, Lee Ann

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Dear Darren,

How are you? I can’t wait to share with you that my school is organizing a trip to a science museum. It’s located near BP Mall, and the trip will be held on 1st October 2025.

I’m so excited to explore the fascinating experiments and exhibits there. It’s a golden opportunity to learn and grow, and I’m sure it will be an unforgettable experience. Come and join me in this beneficial and educational activity, because you definitely won’t want to miss it!

That’s all from me. I hope to receive a positive reply from you soon.

Best regards,

Part 7: 14/15 Dear Sister, How are you? I spotted a notice about a swimming would like to invite you to join this course with me. It is held at Bukit Indah Public Pool, on 1 August 2025, every Saturday, from 10.00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. It is RM 100 for 4 lessons and it's really cheap and affordable. It doesn't mind that you are a beginner because you are taught by certified coach, Mr Qi Han. If you are interested, you can register by 012-77788990. Ok, that's all from me. Bye. Regards, Lee Ann

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Dear Sister,

How are you? I spotted a notice about a swimming course and would like to invite you to join it with me. It will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool starting on 1st August 2025, every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

The fee is only RM100 for 4 lessons, which is really reasonable and affordable. Don’t worry if you are a beginner, because the lessons will be conducted by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. If you’re interested, you can register by calling 012-77788990.

That’s all from me. Hope to see you there!

Best regards,
Lee Ann

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Dear Daren,

Hi! How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum. It will be held on next Saturday. I am excited to see the dinosaur exhibition. Sounds interesting, right? Hope that you will come! Bye!

Regards,

Sze Jane

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Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum. It will be held next Saturday, and I’m really excited to see the dinosaur exhibition. It sounds interesting doesn’t it?

I hope you can join us on this fun and educational trip. Can’t wait to see you there!

Best regards,
Sze Jane

Dear sister,

Hi! How are you? I hope you are as fit as a fiddle. Guess what? I came across a notice about a swimming course. It will be held on 1 August 2025, from 10:00a.m. to 11:30a.m. every Saturday. The venue is at Bukit Indah Public Pool. In addition, the fee won't cost us an arm and a leg, we will pay RM100 for4 lesson. Moreover, the swimming course is suitable for beginners. They will be taught by certified coach Mr.Qi Han. We can call 012-7788990 for registration. I hope that you can join me for the swimming course. That's all for now. Bye!

Regards,

Sze Jane

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Dear Sister,

Hi! How are you? I hope you are as fit as a fiddle. Guess what? I came across a notice about a swimming course. It will be held on 1st August 2025, from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. every Saturday. The venue is Bukit Indah Public Pool.

In addition, the fee won’t cost us an arm and a leg — we only need to pay RM100 for 4 lessons. Moreover, the course is perfect for beginners as we will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. If you’re interested, we can call 012-7788990 to register.

I really hope you can join me for this fun.That’s all for now. Bye!

Best regards,
Sze Jane

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Dear sister,

I hope your doing well. Guess what I notice about a swimming course. It just a stone throw away. It is at Bukit Indah it’s a public pool date is one of august. Time is every Saturday 10:00a.m. to 11:30. Fee is rm 100 for four lessons. It’s suitable for beginners. Taught by certified coach her name Mr. Qi Han. Do you want to join with me it be great if we goes as a team.

Regards

Jiaxin

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Dear Sister,

I hope you’re doing well. Guess what? I came across a notice about a swimming course, and it’s just a stone’s throw away! It will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool on 1st August, every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, and it’s suitable for beginners. The lessons will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han.

Would you like to join me? It would be great if we could go as a team!

Best regards,
Jiaxin

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Part 6

To:darren@gmail.com

From:jerreth@gmail.com

Subject.A trip to the science museum

Dear Darren,

I hope you are in the pink.Guess what?My school is organising a trip to a science museum.The venue is at Kota Laksamana from 1pm to 3pm.I most exicited to see the telescope because I always wished to see the stars at night.It would be a blast if you could join with me.

Regards,

Jerreth

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Dear Darren,

I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? My school is organizing a trip to a science museum. The venue is at Kota Laksamana, and it will be held from 1:00 p.m. to 3:00 p.m.

I am most excited to see the telescope because I have always wished to see the stars at night. It would be a blast if you could join me for this wonderful trip!

Best regards,
Jerreth

Part 7 13/15

To:emma@gmail.com

From:jerreth@gmail.com

Subject:A Swimming Course

Dear Emma,

I hope you are in the pink of health.I recently came across a notice about a swimming course.I would like to invite you to go with me as we like swimming.The location is at Bukit Indah Public Pool on 1st of August 2025.The swimming course will be held on every Saturday from 10.00am to 11.30am.The fee is only RM100 for four lessons it is very affordable and reasonable.It is suitable for beginners and it is taught by coach Mr.Qi Han.If you want to register contact 012-7788990.Let’s not miss the boat.

Regards,

Jerreth

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Dear Emma,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I recently came across a notice about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me since we both enjoy swimming.

The location is Bukit Indah Public Pool, and the course will start on 1st August 2025. It will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, which is very affordable and reasonable.

The course is suitable for beginners, and it will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. If you are interested, you can contact 012-7788990 to register.Let’s not miss the boat.

Best regards,
Jerreth

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To: darren @ gmail .com

Subject: A Trip to Science Museum

Dear Darren,

Guess what? I can't wait to share with that my school is organizing a trip to a Science Museum in Penang. The trip is held on Monday from 7:30 to 12:00. I am excited to see the solar system of the whole universe. I would to invite you to join it with me! It will be fun if we go together.

Regards,

Sze Ying

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Dear Darren,

Guess what? I can’t wait to share with you that my school is organizing a trip to a science museum in Penang. The trip will be held on Monday from 7:30 a.m. to 12:00 p.m.

I’m really excited to see the solar system and learn more about the universe. I would like to invite you to join me — it will be so much fun if we go together!

Best regards,
Sze Ying

Dear sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a poster about a swimming course. I would like to invite you to join with me to this swimming course. It is located at Bukit Indah Public Pool. It starts at 1 August 2025, and the time is every Saturday. From 10.00 a.m. to 11.30 a.m. The fee is only RM100 for four lessons. This swimming course is suitable for beginners just like both of us. It will be taught by a certified coach which is Mr. Qi Han. If you are interested, you can contact 012-7788990 for registration. I hope you would like to join me to this activity. I'm very sure it will be fun if we go together.

Regards,

Sze Ying

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a poster about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me. It will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool starting on 1st August 2025, and the class will take place every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, and this swimming course is perfect for beginners like us. The lessons will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. If you are interested, you can contact 012-7788990 to register.

I really hope you can join me for this activity. I’m sure it will be lots of fun if we go together!

Best regards,
Sze Ying

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Part 6

To:darren@gmail.com

Subject:School Field Trip

Dear Darren,

I hope you are in the pink of health. My school is organizing a trip to science museum and I would like to invite you to join me. The trip will be held on 23October2025, Saturday at Penang. The most exciting part is, you can learn science knowledge to improve your science.

I hope you can join me . I am looking forward to your reply.

Regards ,

Wee Hou

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Dear Darren,

I hope you are in the pink of health. My school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I would like to invite you to join me. The trip will be held on 23rd October 2025 (Saturday) in Penang.

The most exciting part is that you can gain new science knowledge and improve your understanding of science through this educational trip.

I really hope you can join me. I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,
Wee Hou

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Dear sister ,

How are you? I hope you’re in the pink of health . I just stumbled upon a notice about a swimming course and I would like to invite you to join me. The swimming course is at Bukit Indah Public Pool . The event will start on 1August 2025. The swimming course begins at every Saturday, from 10a.m. to 11:30 p.m.. The swimming course costs RM100 for 4 lessons . It is suitable for beginners and it’s the lessons are taught by certified coach Mr.Qi Han . If you are interested and want to register, contact 012-7788990 . I hope you can join me . I am looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Wee Hou

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Hey Darren,

Check out this swimming course at Bukit Indah Pool! Starts August 1, Saturdays 10:00-11:30 a.m. It's RM100 for 4 lessons, beginners welcome. Mr. Qi Han is the coach. Call 012-7788990 if you want to sign up!

Friend,

Jin Xuan

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Hey Darren,

Hi! I came across a notice about the swimming course. You may check out this swimming course at Bukit Indah Public Pool! It starts on 1st August and will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, and it’s perfect for beginners.

The course will be taught by Coach Mr. Qi Han. If you’re interested, you can call 012-7788990 to sign up. Hope you can join me and I am sure it’ll be fun!

Your friend,
Jin Xuan

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Part 6

Dear Darren,

Guess what?My school is organizing a trip to the science museum.The trip is going to be held on 4th September at KLCC.I’m excited to see how they built the spaceships and how the force of gravity works.It would be perfect if we could go together.Let me know if you’re in.

Regards,

Qlowin

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Dear Darren,

Guess what? My school is organizing a trip to a science museum. The trip will be held on 4th September at KLCC.

I’m really excited to see how spaceships are built and to learn how the force of gravity works. It would be perfect if we could go together. Let me know if you’re in!

Best regards,
Qlowin

Part 7

Dear sister,

I hope your in the pink of health.I saw a notice about a swimming course,and I thought you would be interested in joining with me.It will start on 1th August 2025 and th classes will be on every Saturday,10:00am to 11:30am.The fee is only RM100 for 4 lessons,it’s very affordable and reasonable.The lessons will be taught by a certified coach Mr Qi Han.Its perfect for beginners like us.Please Contact 012-7788990 if your interested in joining.Please write back soon.

Regards,

Qlowin

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I thought you would be interested in joining me. It will start on 1st August 2025, and the classes will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, which is very affordable and reasonable. The lessons will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han, and it’s perfect for beginners like us.

If you’re interested in joining, please contact 012-7788990. Please write back soon and I really hope we can join the course together!

Best regards,
Qlowin

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To: darren@gmail.com

Subject: a trip to a science museum.

Dear Darren,

Guess what, my school is organizing a trip to a science museum, I would like to invite you to go with me to have a whale of a time at there. The most I would like to see is the dinosour bones. Believe you can join with me. Write back soon.

Regards,

Jae Hong.

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Dear Darren,

Guess what? My school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I would like to invite you to join me so we can have a whale of a time together! The thing I’m most excited to see is the dinosaur bones.

I really hope you can come along with me. Please write back soon!

Best regards,
Jae Hong

Part 7

Dear sister,

Guess what, I just came across a poster about a swimming course. I would like to invite you to go with me and have a whale of a time at there.

It will be held on every Saturday, from 10a.m. to 11:30a.m. and the fee telaboration is RM 100 for 4 lessons. If we want to join it, we can taught by certified couch Mr. Qi Han.

That all for now. Do you want to join me? Write back soon.

Regards,

Jae Hong

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Dear Sister,

Guess what? I just came across a poster about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me so we can have a whale of a time together!

It will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m., and the fee is only RM100 for four lessons. If we join, we will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han.

That’s all for now. Do you want to join me? Please write back soon!

Best regards,
Jae Hong

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To: darren@gmail.com

Subject: Science Musuem

Dear Darren,

How are you? I'm fine. Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum and I want to invite you to go with me. It's at the science museum. I'm so excited to see it because I think it is so amazing. Are you free to join? Please let me know.

Regards,

Alicia Hee

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Dear Darren,

How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum next Friday and I would like to invite you to join me.

I’m really excited about the trip because I think the museum will be so amazing to explore. Are you free to join us? Please let me know!

Best regards,
Alicia Hee

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Dear sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course. The swimming course is fun. I want to invite you to join with me. The location is at Bukit Indah Public Pool and it starts on 1 August 2025. The time is every Saturday, 10.00 a.m. to 11.30 a.m. and the fee is RM100 for 4 lessons. It is suitable for begineers and taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. Please registration with Mr. Qi Han 012-7788990. Please let me know soon.

Regards,

Alicia Hee

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course, and it looks really fun! I would like to invite you to join me.

The course will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool and will start on 1st August 2025. It will take place every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is only RM100 for four lessons. It is suitable for beginners and will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han.

If you are interested, please contact Mr. Qi Han at 012-7788990 for registration. Please let me know soon. I hope you can join me!

Best regards,
Alicia Hee

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part 6

To: Darren

Subject: science museum

Dear Darren,

Hi, how are you! I hope this email finds you well. I would like to invite you to a science museum trip organizing by our school. We can see a lot of Science things and more about history Science. I hope you can join me. Plus, If we join together it will be very fun. Reply me soon. Take care.

Regards,

Alyssa

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Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you? I hope this email finds you well. I would like to invite you to a science museum trip organized by our school. We will get to see many interesting science exhibits and learn more about the history of science.

I hope you can join me! Plus, if we go together, it will be so much fun. Please reply soon. Take care!

Best regards,

Alyssa

part 7

Dear sister,

I hope your are in the pink of health. I am writing this email to tell you that I saw a notice about a swimming course. I would like to invite you.

It will be located at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The date is 1 August 2025, the time is every Saturday , 10:00a.m.-11.30a.m. the fee is only Rm100 for 4 lessons it is affordable and reasonable.

It is suitable for beginners. Taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. The contact number will be 012-7788990 for registration.

I hope you can join together with me. Reply me soon! Bye.

Regards,

Alyssa

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I am writing this email to tell you that I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me.

It will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool starting on 1st August 2025. The classes will take place every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, which is very affordable and reasonable.

This course is suitable for beginners and will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. For registration, you can contact 012-7788990.

I really hope you can join me.Please reply soon!

Best regards,
Alyssa

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Part 6

To：Darren@mail.com

Subject: The school trip to a science museum

Dear Darren,

Hi. How're you? I'd like to invite you to join me for a school trip. This school trip will be held on 23 October, Friday at Kuching science museum. I hope we can see the things that we learned in textbook because this can help me understand science better.

I hope you can accompany me to join this school trip. Bye!

Regards,

Chloe Teo

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Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you? I’d like to invite you to join me on a school trip. The trip will be held on 23rd October (Friday) at the Kuching Science Museum. Would you like to join me?

I am excited to explore what we have learned in Science textbooks and it will help me understand science better.

I really hope you can join me on this school trip. Bye for now!

Best regards,
Chloe Teo

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Dear Sister,

Hi. How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? I saw a notice about the swimming course. I would like to invite you to join me. This swimming course will be held on 1 August 2025, every Saturday from 10:00 AM to 11.30AM at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The fee is only RM100 for 4 lessons ,which is budget friendly.This swimming course is suitable for beginners and our coach is Mr. Qi Han. If you want to sign up, please contact 012-7788990. Since you are into swimming, it's a great chance to improve your swimming skills.

If you can join this swimming course with me, please reply me soon.

Your lovely sister,

Chloe Teo

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Part 6 8/10

To: darren@gmail.com

Subject: A Trip to Science Museum

Dear Darren,

Exciting news! I can't wait to share with you that our school is organizing a trip to science museum, and I would like to invite you to join me!

The science museum is at Kuala Lumpur. This trip will be held at next Wednesday1st of October, from 8:00a.m. to 6:30p.m. and we will gather at our school gate.

The part that I most eager to see is A. I am excited to explore A.I. technology applied in science. Would you like to join me? Don't miss this golden opportunity.

Regards,

Zen Xi

Part 7

Dear Sister,

I hope you are as fit as a fiddle! I can't wait to tell you about I stumbled upon a notice about a swimming course.

We will practice at Bukit Indah Public Pool, start from 1st of August 2025 and every Saturday, from 10:00a.m. to 11:30p.m. The fee is budget friendly, RM100 for 4 lessons.

It is suitable for beginners and taught by a certified coach Mr. Qi Han. If you are keen to join, please contact 012-7788990 for registration. Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Zen Xi

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are as fit as a fiddle! I can’t wait to tell you that I stumbled upon a notice about a swimming course.

The lessons will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool, starting on 1st August 2025, and will take place every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is budget-friendly — only RM100 for four lessons.

The course is suitable for beginners and will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. If you are keen to join, please contact 012-7788990 for registration. I’m looking forward to your reply!

Best regards,
Zen Xi

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to:Darren@.gmail.com.my.

subject:School field trip

Dear Darren,

I can't wait to share with you . My school organizing a trip to a science museum.It will be held on 1st November 2025 at Setia Alam.The best part is there are some scincetists will perform some inclederble experience.Are you in?Let me know soon.

Regards

Zen Hao

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Dear Darren,

I can’t wait to share some exciting news with you! My school is organizing a trip to a science museum. It will be held on 1st November 2025 at Setia Alam.

The best part is that some scientists will be performing incredible experiments! Are you in? Let me know soon.

Best regards,
Zen Hao

Dear sister,

I hope you in the pink of health.I stumbled across a notice about a swimming course.Let's join together.It will be held on 1st August 2025. The fee is only RM100 for four lessons. It was affordable and experience. We will learn at Bukit Indah Public Pool.We go there every Saturday,10.00a.m.-11.30a.m. . It was suitable for beginners.We will taught by a couch,Mr.Qi Han.Mr.Qi Han has ten years of couching experince.If you interested, you can contact him for registration.Are you in? Looking forward to your reply.

Regards

Zen Hao

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I stumbled across a notice about a swimming course, and I think it would be great if we could join together!

The course will be held on 1st August 2025, and the fee is only RM100 for four lessons, which is very affordable and reasonable. The lessons will take place at Bukit Indah Public Pool every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

It is suitable for beginners, and we will be taught by Coach Mr. Qi Han, who has ten years of coaching experience. If you are interested, you can contact him for registration.

Are you in? I’m looking forward to your reply!

Best regards,
Zen Hao

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To: darren@gmail.com

Subject: A Trip To A Science Museum

Dear Darren,

Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum and I would like to invite you to join with me. The trip will be held at Bandar Seri Botani, on next Saturday. I can't wait to see the various dinosaurs and many more. What do you think? Looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

You Wei

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Dear sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I came across a notice about a swimming course and I would like to invite you to join with me. It is located at Bukit Indah Public Pool, start on 1 August 2025. The training time is on every Saturday, from 10a.m. to 11.30a.m. the fee is only RM100 for 4 lessons. Don't worry, it is suitable for beginners and taught by Mr. Qi. If you are interested, contact 012-7788990 for registration. Sounds incredible, right? Looking forward to your reply.

Regards

You Wei

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Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you? I would like to invite you to my school trip to a science museum. The science museum is at Shah Alam from 8.00a.m to 6.00p.m. My most excited to see is the robot, because that look like so cool! So, please join with me! Looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Sin Han

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Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you? I would like to invite you to join me on a school trip to a science museum. The trip will be held in Shah Alam from 8:00 a.m. to 6:00 p.m.

I’m most excited to see the robots because they look so cool! So, please join me! It will be so much fun! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,
Sin Han

Part 7

Dear sister,

Hi! I hope you are doing fantastic. Guess what? I came across a notice about a swimming course, and it will be blast if you can join with me.

The swimming course venue is at Bukit Indah Public school, start at 1 August 2025. The practice time is every Saturday from 10.00a.m to 11.30a.m. The fee is only RM 100 for 4 lessons, that reasonable and pocket friendly. This swimming course is suitable for beginners and there taught by certified coach. If you are interested, you can contact 012-7788990 for registration.

That's all for now. Looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Sin Han

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Dear Sister,

Hi! I hope you are doing fantastic. Guess what? I came across a notice about a swimming course, and it will be a blast if you can join me!

The swimming course will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool and will start on 1st August 2025. The practice time is every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, which is reasonable and pocket-friendly.

This swimming course is suitable for beginners and will be taught by a certified coach. If you are interested, you can contact 012-7788990 for registration.

That’s all for now. I’m looking forward to your reply!

Best regards,
Sin Han

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To: darren@gmail.com

Subject: School Field Trip

Dear Darren,

Hi! I can't wait to share with you about my school is organizing a trip to a science museum. there have a lot of AI-robot and animals. But let me feel excited and interesting is Dinosaurs. So, I would like to invite you to join this school field trip. I bet you will interest too! Await your reply.

Best regards,

Kong Jun San

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Dear Darren,

Hi! I can’t wait to share with you that my school is organizing a trip to a science museum. There will be many AI robots and animals on display. But what makes me feel most excited and interested is the dinosaur exhibition!

I would like to invite you to join this school field trip. I bet you will be interested too! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,
Kong Jun San

Dear Sister,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? I came across an advertisement about a swimming course. I would like to invite you to join.

Swimming course will be held on Bukit Indah Public Pool. from 10a.m. to 11.30a.m. It starts on 1 August 2025. As you know, this is a golden opportunity to improve our swimming skills.

Moreover, Swimming course taught by certified coach Mr . Qi Han and the prize are quite cheap. If you will fill interesting. please contact o12-7788990 for registration. it will be blast if we can join together. Looking forward to your reply.

Warm regards,

Kong Jun San

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Dear Sister,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? I came across an advertisement about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me.

The swimming course will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m., starting on 1st August 2025. As you know, this is a golden opportunity for us to improve our swimming skills.

Moreover, the course will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han, and the fee is quite affordable. If you are interested, please contact 012-7788990 for registration. It will be a blast if we can join together! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Warm regards,
Kong Jun San

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Part 6:

Dear Darren,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? I can't wait to share a good news to you. My school is organizing a trip to Petrosains KLCC on 5th October 2025, at 10 a.m. I'm excited to see planet displays and discovery stations that I can try the experiments. Let's join together. This is a great chance to explore the science. Hope you can join. Looking forward to your reply. Bye for now!

Regards,

Elson

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Dear Darren,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? I can’t wait to share some good news with you! My school is organizing a trip to Petrosains KLCC on 5th October 2025 at 10:00 a.m.

I’m really excited to see the planet displays and explore the discovery stations where I can try out different experiments. Let’s join together — this is a great opportunity to explore science!

I hope you can join me. Looking forward to your reply. Bye for now!

Best regards,
Elson

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Dear Sister,

Hi! Guess what? I came across a notice about a swimming course and I'm interested in joining. First at all, the swimming course will take place at Bukit Indah Public Pool. It will be started on 1st August 2025, from 10 a.m. to 11.30 a.m. every Saturday. The course fee is RM 100 for 4 lessons. It is really affordable and reasonable. The course is also suitable for beginners. The best part is the course will be taught by a certified coach. Sound great, right? Let's register together. Are you in? I look forward to your reply!

Regards,

elson

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Part 6 9/10

To : darren@ymail.com

Subject : Science Museum trip

Dear Darren,

I hope you are in the pink of health.Our school is organising a trip to a science museum by next school holiday and it's at George town, Penang.I'm excited to see their scientific items.I hope you can join me! Let me know if you'd like to join!

Regards,

Kah Hou

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Dear Darren,

I hope you are in the pink of health. Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum during the next school holiday, and it will be held in George Town, Penang.

I’m really excited to see all the interesting scientific exhibits, and I hope you can join me! Let me know if you’d like to come along as it will be lots of fun if we go together.

Best regards,
Kah Hou

Part 7

Dear sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health.I saw a notice about a swimming course.I hope you can join with me together.This course will be held at Bukit Indah Public pool.It's fee is only RM100 for four lessons,and it's affordable and reasonable. It will start by 1 August 2025.This swimming course will be held every Saturday,by 10.00a.m. to 11.30a.m. You need to call 012-7788990 for registration. It's suitable for beginners, this course will taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han.Let us join together. Let me know if you are interested to join!

Regards,

Kah Hou

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I hope you can join me. The course will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool.

The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, which is very affordable and reasonable. It will start on 1st August 2025, and the classes will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

This course is suitable for beginners, and it will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. If you’re interested, you can call 012-7788990 for registration.

Let’s join together !Please let me know if you’d like to join.

Best regards,
Kah Hou

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I hope you are in the pink.I can't wait to share with you about a swimming course.I would like a share with you take part in the event.The swimming course will held on 1August2025,every Saturday at Bukit Indah Public Pool.The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons. Let's join together.It's a great way to save our enviroment and have fun too! The contest number is 0127788990 for registration.See you soon.

Regards,

Varick

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Dear Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. I can’t wait to share with you about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join the classes with me.

The swimming course will be held on 1st August 2025, every Saturday at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The fee is RM100 for four lessons. Let’s join together — it’s a great way to learn a new skill and have fun too!

For registration, please contact 012-7788990. Hope to see you there!

Best regards,
Varick

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Darren@gmail.com.my

Subject: inviting your friend darren to the trip

Dear Darren,

Hi! Its a honor to catch up with you again, i would like to tell you that our school is organizing a field trip to the science museum. And i would like to invite you there.

The science museum is at Johor Bahru central area, We will go there by bus, and arrive at 1:30pm in the afternoon. The trip will be on the 13th November 2025.

I patiently waited for the moment on 13th November, I am excited to see the ancient tomb and the ring of Egypitians.

There will be a lot of souvenirs that you can buy it for memory's, and, to buy them, u can bring RM50 to the trip.

If you are interested, please join me. That's all from me, hope to here from you soon!

Best regards,

Ruoyee

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Dear Darren,

Hi! It’s an honor to catch up with you again. I would like to tell you that our school is organizing a field trip to a science museum, and I would like to invite you to join me.

The science museum is located in the central area of Johor Bahru. We will travel there by bus and arrive at 1:30 p.m. The trip will take place on 13th November 2025.

I have been patiently waiting for this moment, and I’m so excited to see the ancient tomb and the Ring of the Egyptians. There will also be many souvenirs you can buy as keepsakes. To purchase them, you can bring RM50 for the trip.

If you’re interested, please join me. I hope to hear from you soon!

Best regards,
Ruoyee

Part 7 12/15

Sister@gmail.com

Subject: inviting your sister to a swimming course

Dear sister,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health, I stumbled upon a poster about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to participate with me.

I think it would be a blast if you join me.

Trust me, it would be extremely fun!

The location is at Bukit Indah Public Pool, and the start date is at 1 August 2025.The fee is RM100 for 4 lessons.

The certificate is, suitable for beginners. Taught by certified coach Mr. Qi Han. The time is every Saturday, 10:00a.m.-11:30 a.m.

Contact:012-7788990 for registration.

That's all from me, looking forward for your reply!

Regards,

Ruoyee

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Dear Sister,

Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health. I stumbled upon a poster about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me.

I think it would be a blast if you could join — trust me, it’s going to be extremely fun!

The course will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool, starting on 1st August 2025. The fee is RM100 for four lessons. It is suitable for beginners and will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. The class will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.For registration, you can contact 012-7788990.

That’s all from me. I’m looking forward to your reply!

Best regards,
Ruoyee

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Dear Darren,

Hello! How are you? I am in the pink. I can't wait to share with you that my school is organizing a trip to National Science Museum in Kuala Lumpur on 1st September, at 10.00a.m.I'm so excited to learn about the energy generation, space and others. This is a great chance to try experiments too. Are you able to join? Let's join together. Looking forward your good news to your positive response!

Regards,

Cheau Qian

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Dear sister,

Hello! How are you? I am in the pink. Guess what? I came across a notice about a swimming course and I think it would be fun if we could join together. The swimming course will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool and ,

starting from 1st August 2025, from 10a.m. to 11.30a.m. every Saturday. The course fee is RM 100 for 4 courses. It is affordable, right? The course is suitable for beginners. The best part is. the course we will be taught by a certified couch, Mr Qi Han.Sound amazing, right? Let's sign up together. Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Cheau Qian

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To: darren@mail.com

Subject: trip to a science museum

Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you? My school is organising a trip to a science museum and I’m keen to invite you to join me to the trip. It’s on 22 December from 8 a.m. to 2 p.m. at Penang. I’m most excited to see the animal part because I’m interested at animal. Please let me know if you are interested. Bye!

Regards,

Zun Khai

corrected 7/10

Dear Darren,

Hi! How are you? My school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I’m excited to invite you to join me. It will be held on 22nd December from 8:00 a.m. to 2:00 p.m. in Penang.

I’m most excited to see the animal exhibits because I’m really interested in animals. Please let me know if you’re interested. Bye for now!

Best regards,
Zun Khai

part 7 corrected

Dear sister,

Hi! How are you? I saw a notice about a swimming course and I’m keen to ask you if you are interested.

It’s start on 1 August on every Saturday from 10 a.m. to 11 a.m. at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The fee is RM 100. It’s reasonable and affordable. It’s suitable for beginners such as us. We will be taught by a certified coach Mr. Qi Han.

Please let me know if you are interested so I can help you register. It’ will be fun if we go together. Bye!

Regards,

Zun Khai

corrected 11/15

Dear Sister,

Hi! How are you? I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I’m excited to ask if you’re interested in joining.

It will start on 1st August and will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The fee is RM100, which is very reasonable and affordable. The course is suitable for beginners like us, and we will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han.

Please let me know if you’re interested so I can help you register. It will be so much fun if we go together! Bye for now!

Best regards,
Zun Khai

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Dear Daren,

To: Daren@gmail.com

From: Kua Weng Yik

Hi Daren ,

I hope you are in the pink of health! Guess what? This Saturday 10.am. I want to go to the since center Kuala Lumpur. In since center I saw about my grandmother use the knight is same. I hope you can join with me.

Regards,

Kua Weng Yik

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Dear Daren,

I hope you are in the pink of health! Guess what? This Saturday at 10 a.m., I want to visit the Science Centre in Kuala Lumpur. At the Science Centre, we can explore many interesting and old exhibits. I even saw something that reminded me of the tools my grandmother used in the past. I hope you can join me.

Regards,
Kua Weng Yik

Part 7 corrected 4/15

Hi sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? I saw a notice about a swimming course. Location at Bukit Indah Public Pool, start date:1 August 2025, Time: Every Saturday, 10.00a.m.-11.30a.m

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Hi Sister,

I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? I saw a notice about a swimming course and immediately thought of you!

It will be held at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The course starts on 1 August 2025 and will be conducted every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.

Would you like to join me? It will be a fun and healthy activity for us to do together!

Regards,
Weng Yik

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Part 6: Subject:A trip to science museum Dear Daren, Guess what? Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I want to invite you to join. The trip is at Kuala Lumpur Science Museum. The trip is on 16, June 2025.I am excited to see the spaceship! Do you want to join with me? Await your reply.

Your classmate, Chan Yu Quan

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Dear Darren,

Guess what? Our school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I would like to invite you to join me. The trip will be held at the Kuala Lumpur Science Museum on 16th June 2025.

I’m really excited to see the spaceship there! Would you like to join me? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Your classmate,
Chan Yu Quan

Part 7: Dear sister, Hi! I hope you are doing well. I saw a notice about a swimming course and I would like to invite you. It will start on 1 August 2025, every Saturday from 10a.m.to11.30a.m.It will held at Bukit Indah Public Pool. The fee is only RM100 for 4 lessons ,it is reasonable! It was taught by a certified coach, Mr Qi Han.For registration, please contect 012-7788990. What do you think?Await your reply. Your brother, chan yu quan

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Dear Sister,

Hi! I hope you are doing well. I saw a notice about a swimming course, and I would like to invite you to join me. It will start on 1st August 2025 and will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. at Bukit Indah Public Pool.

The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, which is very reasonable! The course will be taught by a certified coach, Mr. Qi Han. For registration, please contact 012-7788990.

What do you think? I hope you can join me. I’m looking forward to your reply!

Your brother,
Chan Yu Quan

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Dear Darren.

I wanted to share with you about the science museum. It’s going to have a science shows. We’re going to learn robots inventing sand space and technology. It’s at 2 October at Monday. It is very educational I invite

Ing you to join with me we’re going to be great group if go as a team.

Best regards

Jiaxin

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Dear Darren,

I want to share something exciting with you about the trip to science museum. There will be amazing science shows, and we’re going to learn about robots, inventions, science, space, and technology.

The event will be held on 2nd October (Monday). It’s going to be a very educational experience, and I would like to invite you to join me. It would be wonderful if we could go as a team and we’ll make a great group together!

Best regards,
Jiaxin

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To:Daren@gmail.com

Hi! How are you? I hope you are doing well. My school is organizing a trip to a science museum and I am interested in it. We will need to gather at the school hall on this Saturday,8am in the morning . I am excited to know more about the dinosaurs and the exhibition on human body.Would you like to explore with me? Waiting positive response.

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Hi Daren,

How are you? I hope you’re doing well. My school is organizing a trip to a science museum, and I’m really excited about it! We will gather at the school hall this Saturday at 8:00 a.m.

I’m especially looking forward to learning more about dinosaurs and exploring the exhibition on the human body. Would you like to join me on this adventure? I’m sure we’ll have a whale of a time together!Looking forward to your positive reply.

Best regards,
[Your Name]

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To: darren@gmail.com

Subject: School Trip

Hey Darren,

Our school is organizing a trip to the Science Museum next Friday. I am most excited to see the space exhibition and robots. It will be fun. Please join us!

Regards,

Jin xuan

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Hey Darren,

Our school is organizing a trip to the Penang Science Museum next Friday, and I’m really excited about it! I’m excited to see the space exhibition and the robots — it’s going to be so much fun.

I hope you can join us on this trip!

Best regards,
Jin Xuan

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Hi Sister,

There is a swimming course at Bukit Indah Public Pool starting on 1 August 2025. It will be every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is RM100 for four lessons, taught by Coach Mr. Qi Han. Would you like to join me?

Regards,

Jin xuan

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Hi Sister,

Guess what ? There’s a swimming course at Bukit Indah Public Pool starting on 1st August 2025. The classes will be held every Saturday from 10:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. The fee is only RM100 for four lessons, and the course will be taught by Mr. Qi Han who is a certified coach. The course is suitable for beginners like us.

Would you like to join me? I think it will be fun if we learn together!

Best regards,
Jin Xuan