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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HlPEg9xilTGtV7R6aRRS88Spl9UrEjnA8ztIoIzkbb0/edit?tab=t.0

Hi Janae,
This draft is a good foundation to a solid essay. You've selected good details and clearly connected them to a "so what?" in Wiley's work. Your introduction probably needs a little refocus - if you introduce Wiley's style in the overall painting collection and perhaps define your key terms, the essay will have the context it needs to be well-grounded in evidence throughout. See my comments for more on clarifying details in the essay.

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Z-1nr5UNzDW6LyQt7vpnuA4FRSAeGDIfqgHR1RmRcMo/edit?tab=t.0

Hi Janae,
Your essay is written clearly and shows a good understanding of the content of the podcast episodes. However, the focus of the essay needs some adjustment. The analysis of the features themselves is getting a little lost, and much of the dicsussion in body paragraphs 2 and 3 is summary/description. While these paragraphs do represent the big ideas in the episodes well, they don't quite get to the "how?". How do the producers use interviews in "White vs. White?" to explore the problems with racial categorization in this story? How do the producers generate pathos in "Therapy Ghostbusters," and how does it add to the episode? Part of the difficulty here is that these episodes are complex, and I think you can start to address that by adding a short summary of the episodes in the intro paragraph, so your body paragraphs can focus more on analysis.

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Y7MXixoflVOspytBl0j3Qj8bNVHh40ui/view

Criterion A: 8/10

Criterion B: 7/10

Criterion C: 8/10

Criterion D: 7/10

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Persepolis and "Bad Girls" by M.I.A

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Global Issue:

race

gender (masculinity and feminity)

abuse

family

education

culture

power

love

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GI:

race gender (masculinity)

manipulation

power

class

love

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GI:

mental health

justice

masculinity

manipulation

education

greed

trauma

safety

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GI:

gender

power

trauma

government

justice

safety

culture

religion

education

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1RAwtsmVHGhnzdfkBYTI7bla0aP2BGT-SlxlLJKO4xz8/edit?slide=id.g17f6cc78ffc_0_284#slide=id.g17f6cc78ffc_0_284

race

gender

power

class

beauty

culture

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Government Surveillance

mental health

extremism

cultural conflicts

ideas of power

collectivism

race

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https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/0/d/1pWT8GjAD81OpPDGSmCTPP5vFlzxQ1jcNqxHfoYY9DcU/edit?authuser=0&usp=classroom_web

GI:

power

justice

freedom

mental health

class

government

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Done on paper

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Othello Literary Device Video Analysis 1

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Othello Literary Device Video Analysis 1

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RtCFwhB6QyclL6M6z6UbzdJ1kYbkyZgh/view

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZvL2p5qTZiQJ-URVkp8Ad-CepriBYaGmxXKPPo6Qgw/edit?tab=t.0

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M3OmoUY5PjUlyloUTglXi02U4BLfe2XSyZqD8Av25As/edit?tab=t.0

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V5tqzhwIcUUtBpuKXMZBh1FC3FG7R8nGsxLFQS3yJ_4/edit?tab=t.0

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ukp2Zkm8iIrROhTIG5KXUEJmXKdZePnIIWnpW5eyF7k/edit?tab=t.0

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sI9wJ1YoOnP16eKXlUHNdb6u4FTt-e3AkaBYos7RGPs/edit?tab=t.0

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HL Essay 1 Refined Black Women in Old Master Paintings

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QEMDaftZnAzmEownAQ_xZAu-cg9_sWgi9CbCEaxIXJg/edit?tab=t.0

HL Essay 2 Identity in Invisibilia https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Z-1nr5UNzDW6LyQt7vpnuA4FRSAeGDIfqgHR1RmRcMo/edit?tab=t.0

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/124PzCIncjFfVpRaVXvMH83YB_DtrhyhzH2XfN-TJ_yI/edit?tab=t.0

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1xoVsQwuDAEflIm2gW4ZwUDtr4I6iqeuT4C5suFtXd14/edit

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1_og9nuoI59mEPxgXAGjUgb6-Vy_wKs_mtlsI8aSqBfs/edit

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1k_WNHplHZGjZYJQG1lRFNBuj0cMLTOHh/view

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Paper One, Paper Two, HLE, EE - Improving Analysis