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1. Some people live to eat while others eat to live. Which do you think most represents your society?

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1. Some people live to eat while others eat to live. Which do you think most represents your society?

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12/15
-generally fluent & coherent
-content covered both sides of the spectrum: ppl eat to live and ppl live to eat
-I like your personal example, it’s very interesting
-improvement: try using a larger variety of vocabulary and varied sentence structures

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13/15 ideas were really well-developed with elaborated examples. there was also a pretty wide range of vocabulary used, although there were some stutters towards the end, the flow was overall quite fluent. however, your response was quite and it started to get a bit boring towards the end. i think you can try to shorten your points a little🤏🏻🤏🏻 oh and it sounds a hit like you’re reading from a script so perhaps you can try to sound more natural👍🏻

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shares about current society(food blogs available online)
good personal experience
good description of the phrases(eat to live-eating is like a chore to some people)

can improve on adding in more vocabulary but overall development of ideas was good+conclusion is very clear👍 12/15

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good points:singapore has a wide variety of food, singaporeans support local food, eating is like a hobby to many singaporeans, they are willing to go the extra mile to eat good food.

Can improve on the sequence of sentences, but the examples are very good😊12/15