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Room 5: Format – heading, date, Salutation

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Room 4: Paragraph 4 - Closing

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Room 3: Paragraph 3

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Room 2: Paragraph 2

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Aaisha and Kennedy

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Taishawn

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Joan and Robbiana

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Cameron, Zachery, Carina

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Room 1: Paragraph 1 - Opening

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Adam and Johanni

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Assign someone to take notes within your Padlet Section and someone to present your results to the full class after the breakout session.

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Add the names of your group members to your section

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Task compare and contrast the section your room has been assigned to analyze for both cover letters.

Identify one strengthen and one area of improvement

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What's Good: Outlining their skills for the position

What Needs Work: Reasoning as to why they are interested in the position, and how their skills would translate

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Strength: sally mentions her skills that are applicable to the job and made connections about how her skills are transferable from working at mcdonalds

Weakness: Seems generic, could be more detailed and eye catching, or more personal.

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her closing statement seems very copy/paste as if this section could have been a fill-in-the-blank. It doesn't seem that this was a job they were very interested in, more so that they were looking for a hit-or-miss style of applying

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What is good:
- Listed her name
- Listed her email and linkedin
- Listed the address

What needs work:
- List a correct phone number
- Didn't delete [insert digital signature]
- Put the hiring manager above the address, should not be like that

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Prepare to summarize for the class.

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What's Good: Very detail oriented, and includes how their previous experiences can translate to the job

What Needs Work: Too much information, some can be put into the resume instead

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Strength: very detailed and specific and mentions volunteer experience along with her take-aways and skills gained from the experience. Effective use of action words.

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What is good:
- Listed her name
- Listed her email and linkedin
- Listed the address

What needs work:
- List a correct phone number
- Did not put her postal code
- Put the hiring manager above the address, should not be like that
- Didn't delete [insert digital signature]

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she had Thanked the reader, which emphasize that shorn valued the reader's time and also informed them that Sharan was looking forward to a follow-up, which can make to reader feel more obligated to respond.