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Cecilia Canavan - Personal Narrative 2020

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Lucas Carrillo - Personal Narrative 2020

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Evelyn Mancuso - Personal Narrative 2020

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Emma PatrickSasaki - Personal Narrative 2020

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Erin, I loved your story! I love how you used a lot of figurative language! 🦷

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I love the detail of the story you wrote. You moved through each minute so carefully and really made me picture what’s going on. I saw you playing soccer with nick even though I wasn’t there. Great job overall. Maybe next time you could show not tell a little more.

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You did such good detail

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Saige, I love your story! I like how you added a lot of detail!🐴

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Great so much detail

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That was so good a loved how you said I felt like a Seagull

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That was one of the BEST stories I’ve ever read. Specifically the way you described every little Detail.

Great job Jake

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I like how you showed what you are doing, 👻

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Penny, I loved your story! I loved they end when you said it was your first lessen but not your last

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I like your details that must have taken a long time

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I like that you put bold letters and I like how you hade so much detail.

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I liked when you said I slept like a little bear

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Amelia I love how you added how you were so exited! Your story is 👍

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Leo,your story was amazing! Your story had great detail and figurative language

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Great show not tell Ryan.

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I love how you put in so much detail! And you really added in lots of dialogue!

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I like how you added dialogue and detail I could really picture you breaking your leg 👻✨

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I like it

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Addi, I like how you said your throat was so dry. ❄️

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I loved it, maybe you should add a tiny bit to describe where and why u were at the hotel. It was a great story.

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Great good dialogue

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Great detail Cris.

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I love your story you added so much detail about the story

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Wow very good I like it lot of details

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Emilia, I love how you added that big BOOM and CRASH! 🏃‍♀️

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I liked the detail

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I like the detail, Cece! ⭐️

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So many details!

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I love how you added so much action!

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Great detail

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I like how you added figurative language! 👻 I could really picture the tooth fairy 🧚‍♀️!💫😆

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I love how you said you got ready in a flash 👙

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I like your figurative language. ‘over the moon’

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Good job

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Good job wit the details!

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I liked the book I loved how you added a lot of details

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You have a lot of details, yonaton!

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So many details Lucas!

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I like how you put such good details

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I like how you explained it good

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Good job with the details

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I liked how you explained the gloomy and stormy

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Great

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Nice details and figurative language

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Good show not tell Sean

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I like that you started your story with a action.

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I like how it was flashing lits like a hore move.

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I like how you showed not tell.

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I loved how you said you saw the CUTEST DUCK EVER!!!

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I love your story. I loved that you described the setting.

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I liked your details

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Really good detail

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I like how in your story you told everyone how much you look up to your dad

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You can add more detail who Charlie is. But pretty good storie

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I liked how you described the horse

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I like how you have detail

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I like the details and I like how you described how you were riding the bike with Charlie

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Thanks Ryan and Sean