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I like your 2 drafts I like the 2nd draft because it has many colours and they are bright. I also like ow you have 2 borders it makes it more depth. I do think you should add more flowers to make it more interesting.

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Sheep Jones mid Process - feedback from Thalia

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Sheep Jones mid Process - feedback from Thalia

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Points of shine : I really liked how you used lots of different colours in the bottom part, it really stands out from the rest. I also like how the colour you chose for the underground matches so it feels more connected. One more thing I like is how you show the underground as well as the above.
Points of polish : I think you could work on having a bit more dominant colours at the top because they are a bit dull. I think you could also work on making your lines a bit clearer. Good job 😁

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i think i'm doing quite well on using a lot of weighted lines and doing digital art but i think i need to work on trying to draw new thing by hand and not just sticking with what i already know.

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Picture of your bee drawn repeat pattern

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Picture of your bee drawn repeat pattern

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I think it is repeated well and has some good weighted lines on the flower which look's nice. It is also very simple but look's good and enough.

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Google link to your Written assignment on Sheep Jones 

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Google link to your Written assignment on Sheep Jones 

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Google link to your written Sheep Jones 

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Google link to your written Sheep Jones 