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T= 4
E=5
A=5
Con=4
18/20

# data[].attributes.body
T= 4
E= 5
A= 5
C= 4
Total=18

# data[].attributes.body
T=5
E=4
A=5
C=3
Total=17
It was ok through but the conclusion was a little ify.

# data[].attributes.body
T=4
E=4
A=3
C=5
I could not tell where the analysis was

# data[].attributes.body
T=5
E-3
A=5
Con=3

# data[].attributes.body
T=4
E=5
A=4
Con=4
Grade=17/20

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T=4/5
E=5/5
A=5/5
Con=4/5
Totol=18
I like I you listed were you got your evidence from.

# data[].attributes.body
T=4
E=4
A=3
Con=3
total=14
I like the how they started the topic but they just kept repeating the same thing. So my advice is go back erase the repeated sentences

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T=4
E=
A=
Con=

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T=
E=
A=
Con =
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# data[].attributes.body
T=5
E=5
A=4
Con=4
grade=18/20
this had great evidence but at the end found it really repetative

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T- 4
E-5
A-4
Con-3
Grade-16

# data[].attributes.body
T=4
E= 5
A=4
C=3
total: 16

# data[].attributes.body
T-4
E-5
A-4
Con-4

# data[].attributes.body
T=4
E=5
A= 4
Con=
grade=

# data[].attributes.body
T-5
E-5
A- 4
C-5

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T= 4 Clear for the most part statement states the main idea but it’s wordy
E=4 The evidence was repetitive
A= 4 It was good for the most part had a good connection between the evidence
Con = 4 conclusion didn’t end strong it repeated the same thing said in analysis
Grade 16/20

# data[].attributes.body
T=4
E=5
A=4
Con=4
Total=17/20

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t-3-4
e-5
a-4-5
con-5
wasnt bad, couldve been better.

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T: 4
E: 5
A: 5
Con: 4
Total: 18
The writing was overall ok. The thesis could've been brought to depth a little more to coney reader attention. I love the analysis based on the evidence and how they connected it to real life events, but it became repetitive after a while.

# data[].attributes.body
T: 5
E: 5
A: 4
Con:4
Total: 18

# data[].attributes.body
t=4
e=5
a=4
con=5

# data[].attributes.body
T=3
E=4
A=3
C=5
Total=15

# data[].attributes.body
T=5
E=4
A=4
Con=5
Total=18

Restating the same opinion multiple times

# data[].attributes.body
T=5
E=4
A=4
Con=5
Total=18

# data[].attributes.body
T=5
E=4
A=5
Con=5

Total:19

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T= ?
E=?
A=?
Con=?
Total= ?

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