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Turn in:
1. Old Map
2. New Map
3. Reflection Question

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From May 14th 1804, to September 23rd 1806 Lewis, Clark, and Sacagawea explored across the western side of America. This expedition was important because they discovered much about the louisiana purchase and made friends with native americans.

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Erik is a legend because he founded the first continuous settlement in Greenland

This is not a thesis it's biography. Why is he a legend?

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Red jacket was born in the year 1750. We don't know the month he was born in. He died in Buffalo, New York on January 20th 1830. He was known for his magnificent oratory skills which kept him in power despite strong criticism from his people.

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John Hawkins was known as one of the best naval commanders and ship builders, as he explored the US . He was a strong leader.

Check your google doc

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George (Rogers) Clark, was a reliable man due to achieving many victories and helping the U.S.A and it’s borders

I don't know whose this is but it isn't a thesis. First, what do you mean by he was a reliable man?

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Francis Drake is one of the most important and greatest explorers ever. He is the first English men to ever circumvented the globe he sailed across five continents Africa, Europe, North and South America and Asia this made him one of the most renowned sea men in English history

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Christopher Columbus was the most important explorer of his time.
This iis because  he was sent on a voyage by King Farland on the Santa Maria, with Pinta and Nina, hoping to find a new route to India and later discovered "The New World".

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Pocohontas is known for her story. If she didn't make friends with the settlers, and gave them food, the settlers probably would have attacked Pocohontas' town

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Hiawatha
Born in 1450, Hiawatha was a Native American visionary thought to be responsible for bringing 5 tribes together in the Iroquois Confederacy, with peaceful and democratic co-existence for some time. Hiawatha was maybe in fact a composite figure, this has been suggested through story. The subject of Henry Wadsworth Longfellow's Song of Hiawatha is someone different, Nanabozho.

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Daniel Boone was one of the greatest explores out there Daniel Boone led an expedition and discovered a trail to the far west through the Cumberland Gap

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George (Rogers) Clark, was a reliable man due to achieving many victories and helping the U.S.A and it’s borders

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From May 14th 1804, to September 23rd 1806 Lewis, Clark, and Sacagawea explored across the western side of America. This expedition was important because they discovered much about the louisiana purchase and made friends with native americans.

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Should I completely rewrite this or should i keep this and add a second sentence explaining why it is important?

add a second sentence

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says i need to install something again

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when i just put exploring, is that what you meant about grammer being wrong?

Yes.

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John White was a very talented painter/artist who put lots of details into his paintings. His paintings are one of the very last resources we have to knowing the setting and a lot of history.

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Christopher Columbus was born in Genoa, Italy on October 31st, 1451 He died May 20th, 1506. He was known for his explorations and is the best explorer to ever live.

This is a weak thesis. While we can debate it, it lack any specifics

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Samuel de Champlain

Samuel de Champlain was a great French explorer because he is best known for establishing and governing settlements of New France and Quebec. He was a cartographer, and that helped him travel around the globe and that made it easier for him. He was also a geographer, which helped him find his way across the globe as well.He was on of the best explorers of his time, in which in his earlier life, him and his uncle would travel all the way to Spain and the West Indies.

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Louis Joliet created maps which helped traveling for him and his people so they can trade and explore. If Louis Joliet did not create maps, it would of took longer to trade fur with other tribes.

Take that last sentence and condense it into a statement about French Fur Trading.

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hunter if you are trying to use cut and paste just highlight it and press CTRL and C then go to padlet and CTRL V

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What else do i need to turn in besides the map

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Marco Polo was born in Venice Italy and the year 9/15/1254.  He died in Venice Italy and died on 1/8/1324. He was known for his magnificent traveling skills which kept him going the right way to his destination.

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James cook was a great explorer who was born on October 27th 1728, and died on February 14th 1779.he was very well known for his exploration of New Zealand and the great barrier reef and became the first to vessel the east coast of Australia, this made a big impact on his because he  founded great  explorations.

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Are we supposed to turn in our cities today?

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do we delete our prior post to post another one

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Erik the red’s journey to green land was dangerous, but it is said that his superior navigation skills and the advance viking boats design got erik and his crew there safely 

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can i say that he used the route to trade fur with tribes.

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How Many Paragraphs 5 or...

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Francisco Pizarro is best known for conquering the Inca empire. This is significant because, after kidnapping their leader and demanding a ransom,even though the Incas paid the ransom they brutally murdered him and conquered the Incas.

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Christopher Columbus was born in Genoa, Italy on October 31st, 1451 He died May 20th, 1506.

He was known for his explorations to find a path to India He explored on his 3 ships the Santa Maria, Pinta, Nina. He is the best explorer to ever live

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John White had served as a governor for the second failed expedition, now called Lost Colony today. He had been seen as a poor and unpopular leader, he had been a very...unique choice of a governor, he had no leadership skills and was possibly born a commoner, despite that, he had been an amazing and wonderful artist.

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Captain John Smith was responsible for the survival of the common people in the first colony of America, Jamestown. He guided the way by being an effective leader to his community.

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There are many similarities and differences between the indians and the british during the pontiac’s war of the 17teenth century.They were both fighting for rule over each other’s land.But chief pontiac was fighting for peace so they can share there lands.Chief pontiac was known for his leadership he knew fighting was going to solve  anything but he had to fight are else he was going to lose his

Chief Pontiac

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can we go on and turn in our homework from yesterday?

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It was kinda hard finding a thesis for pontiac because all the information on him was talking about the wars

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Can I have my introduction in my thesis paragraph 

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Can I have my introduction in my thesis paragraph 