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Good movement

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very comfortable

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maybe too much info on each slide but still relevant

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Nice speaking voices, it's very easy to hear and understand what you're saying!

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Don’t say um, you got this!

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one knows more information than the other

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Hard to hear Tori

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Hard to hear tori

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Hard to hear

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I like that your walking around, it’s shows confidence

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good job walking around and speaking very clearly 

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good job walking around and speaking very clearly 

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Like how you are moving around you were one of the few groups that did that

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You guys know your info

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very nice slides

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Both doing very well without flash cards

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Tori nice walking around

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good movement

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Good speaking voice and sold colony very well

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I think I may go to Maryland simply because you appear so happy about being a colonist there.

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sold!

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Speaking very fast

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“conclusion”

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If I can do whatever I want in Maryland are there any laws to protect me from harm?

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Speak

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Clearly very prepared Honestly  I didnt see them read off the slides 

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Clearly very prepared Honestly  I didnt see them read off the slides 

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The only time theythey motioned to them was when they were showing pictures

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A lot of the pictures are all the same style! It makes Io
NAELCYREBKOOL

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i would have liked either more time to look at the map or a little more explanation

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Animations are amazing

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Great transitions between one another, move around a little more

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I love the way of talking and the animations very relaxed and friendly. Makes me want to go!

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The transitions/animations could be a bit smoother/could move slightly faster, but that’s appears just be a limitation of the technology

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Amazing PowerPoint

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I really like how you both build off from eachother it flows well

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pictures and transitions really add to the smoothe

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sometimes when you change the slide, you stand in front of the screen, making it difficult for some people to see the information

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Got a mind link

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Julia your not walking around like Nicole but your hand movements ware awesome5awesome 

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Julia your not walking around like Nicole but your hand movements ware awesome5awesome 

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Don't use and as much

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You both seem very confident and have great chemistry

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Speaking a little fast

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I can tell you prepared for your presentation. 

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I can tell you prepared for your presentation. 

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Clean and smooth

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I love the teamwork and ability to be so genuine and humorous about your presentation❤️

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Giving facts greatly

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You guys play off each other so well!

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can telling you guys are close

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great transitions between one another!!

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Love the interactive team speaking between u both,

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Really surreally selling colony

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your smiles are contagious and the animations are awesome

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Great enthusiasm

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Interactjvness

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Grea great enthusiasm

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Clearly practiced tof

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You seem so happy to present.  I like it.

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You seem so happy to present.  I like it.

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Nice switching between people

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Good

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I like how you presented the boring history of founders with a humorous dialogue

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Brochures

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what a dig at my faith....damn

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to me, i didn't feel as if information on why i should come was presented. i was only filled in on past facts

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I'm yawning. Little bit more excitement

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Too much

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They did not have tick

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Don't mention revolution

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Too much information I have no clue what was said

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Great fun facts, especially the one about the meaning of Massachusetts (At the great hill). Perhaps you could have used that as your introductory hook.

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not only your slides but some of your talking points sound as if you're only talking about the past rather than selling

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So why are you telling us about the facts and not like selling 

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So why are you telling us about the facts and not like selling 

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do you really know your facts or are you just guessing...

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do you really know your facts or are you just guessing...

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Not very conversational...too formal. You want to connect with your audience; talk to us not at us

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*present *

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“Oldest university in America”
"Now stands”
Again, you’re speaking as if you’re telling us about it now instead of back then

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Too much walking

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i don't wanta get kicked

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Seems like you’re forcing Jazlyn to move around

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Ok so like the colony sounds cool but why should I go there?

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Ok so like the colony sounds cool but why should I go there?

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"a quote i was able to find" makes it sound like you did research for a report rather than speaking as a colonist

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Don’t talk too fast

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i'm not being convinced to choose this colony because it sounds more like a history report

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Nice use of prezi, slides are appealing

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Spsaking in padt tense inseatd of present tense
Too factual and not enough “selling” BUT the information is very, well, informative

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It's obvious that both of you understood the information that you gathered. We can tell because you didn't rely on note cards or turn toward the prezi very often. Good job!