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Strengths: Voice and causal analysis, effect
Weaknesses: A lot of long sentences, More narration, incorporate more modes

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strengths: grammar and flow.

Weakness: organizing ideas and transitioning topics

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Strength: concrete examples

Weakness: Im almost over the word count and I still have to finish up compare/contrast and add in my conlcusion. I need help cutting down words/cutting out unecessary stuff.

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Strengths:  voice and some modes of analysis
Weaknesses: Grammar, and conclusion

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S: Voice
W: Grammar and tone

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Strengths: Essay structure, Grammar, Thesis
Weakness: Conclusion

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Strengths: Grammar and flow

Weaknesses: My essay is kind of messy and my ideas aren't represented very well

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Strenghts: Modes of analysis and voice
Weaknesses: Conclusion

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Strengths
Ideas
Identification
Weakness
Fluency
Paragraph Transitions
grammar

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Strengths: grammar, spelling, incorporating my major player mode in my paper
weaknesses: repetition, voice, conclusion

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Strengths: Voice/diction/essay structure, grammar
weaknesses: Embedding patterns of development, conclusion, thesis

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strengths- Ideas, vision,

opportunities for growth- Organization, structure

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Strengths: I have lots of concrete examples for unknown things (my topic is jargon-heavy)

Weakness: I'm almost over the word count and I still need to include one more Major playermode. I need help cutting down the words/cutting out unnecessary stuff.

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Cora
Strengths: I'm killing it with grammar! Zero issues.

Opportunities for growth: I'm struggling to come up with really detailed narratives or examples! I need someone to be a sounding board.

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Tara
Strengths: My conclusion is really strong; I have a lot of concrete examples of actions people can take to address the issue.

Opportunities for growth: I have A TON of run-on sentences, and need help!