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1,,  If u see the pronoun 'them or it. trace the noun that represent it.
2. look out for the verbs that accompany 'is , are, am, was, were' - verbs should be in the past participle or continuous
3 look out for the verbs that accompany 'has , have had verbs should be in the past participle
4. to determine if the verb is singular or plural, trace the noun

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Visual text 1

1. It is to highlight to the readers that they might not be using the mouse correctly even if it seemed to be correct to them. X

2)The sentence is ‘Carpal tunnel syndrome primarily leads to numbness that is so intense that it can wake one up from sleep.’’ X

ii) One can practice good posture by gripping the muse gently, making sure palm and wrist are both comfortably resting on the table.’’ v

3) It shows a wrist with chains around it. The chains around the wrist highlights that it can very painful to move the wrist around X

4) It states ‘’safety starts with me’’, which is bolded to emphasize the message across to the readers.v

VT 2

1. It is to question the readers if they are eligible for the campaign and to encourage them to take part if they are. X

2. It is to allow readers to easily compare the death rates caused by smoking. It is also to emphasize the  consequences smoking has on one’s life by highlighting the death rates caused by smoking v

3. It is to engage the readers to take part in the campaign to avoid tobacco. X

4. The sentence is ‘’ The Tobacco Free Generation 2000 aims to work towards a new generation of Singaporeans to forever not use cigarettes.''v

VT 3
1) It is to promote HP laptops by showing its attractive features.
2) The phrase is ''all-in-one.''
3)The image shows the laptop inclined to a certain degree which shows that it can be tilted  .
4) It is to highlight that the laptop is unique as it offers many functions that other brands of laptops lack, thus making it attractive.
VT4
1) It shows various sea animals, thus highlighting that the marine creatures in the sea are in need of help.
2) The demand for seafood is greatly that it's supply

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Visual Text 1

1. This is intended to tell the reader that this syndrome cannot be seen on the surface. x

2. (i) ‘Does your wrist or hand hurt or feel numb after using the mouse?’ v

(ii) The solution is to practice good posture by gripping the mouse gently, ensuring that both palm and wrist are resting comfortably on the table. v

3. The picture shows that barbed wire is surrounding the wrist implying that the syndrome can be as excruciating as barbed wire wrapping around one’s wrist. v

4. By the tagline, ‘safety starts with me’.

Visual Text 2

1. This is to let readers who were born after 2000 feel intrigued as the poster is targeted towards them.

2. So as to ensure and convince readers that this poster is true and can be trusted as it includes real and reliable facts.

3. It is to let the reader feel included in being able to take a part to solve this problem making the feel needed.
4. The sentence is ' The Tobacco Free Generation 2000 (TGF2000) aims to work towards a new generation of Singaporeans to forever not use  cigarettes.'

Visual Text 3
1. The purpose of this advertisement is to let readers know of the abilities of the laptop to convince them to get it.
2. 'all-in-one desktop'
3. 'Tilt your HD touchscreen to 5° to 145°' and 'you can also recline the screen during a board game'.
4. It is to show that this laptop is different from any other laptop, making it special.

Visual Text 4
1. The illustration depicts the sea animals in the sea. This hence represents seafood which are the marine animals and therefore when the sea animals are sick, the sea is sick.
2. This is happening due to the way we manage our fish stocks and how we mistreat our marine ecosystems.
3. Using the words 'you and your family' engages the reader.
4. 'The sea is sick. Help save it.'

Visual Text 5
1. The illustration shows a lady with a relaxed look on her face, linking to the relaxation one can get from following the tips given.
2. It refers to the desired outcome from taking pills or using drugs to aid in slimming down.
3.  The writer using bullet points to signify the different tips that were given.
4. 'Simply go natural and put your best foot forward today!'

Visual Text 6
1. The intended audience is anyone who has any e-waste to dispose of.
2. The photograph is linked to the large amount of e-waste present and the waste in the bin signifies how one should recycle their e-waste.
3. It is to show the readers how simple it is to dispose of their e-waste and the outcome of it.
4. 'Last year, more than 10,000kg of e-waste items were collected which earned close too 3,000 energy-efficient light bulbs for the less privileged.

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Visual text 1

1) it has the intended effect of making the writer gripping the mouse carefully. X

2i) The sentence is “carpal tunnel syndrome primarily leads to numbness that is so intense that it can wake one up from sleep”.  X
2ii) The solution is to grip the mouse gently and your palm and wrist are resting comfortably on the table. v

3) The poster shows a hand being wrapped tightly with ropes that will cause pain to the wrist.X

4) With the boxed up words saying “safety starts with me” v

Visual text 2

1) It is to attract readers who are born in the year 2000 v

2) The organiser included statistics to show specific information to convince the readers of their claim.v
The visual is to make the reader empathise their generation that may die from the second hand smoke and to not smoke.X

3) It is to involve the reader directly with the poster. X

4) “aims to work towards a new generation of Singaporeans to forever not use cigarettes.X (qn is asking for a sentence

Visual text 3

1) The purpose of the advertisement is to promote HP’s ENVY recline desktop.

2) “all-in-one desktop”

3) “Tilt your HD touchscreen 5 to 145” and “available in 23” or 27””

4) It is a do it all desktop and has a new touch to it.

Visual text 4

1) The sea is where seafood comes from, saving it will save seafood.

2) There is high demand of seafood in Singapore and we do not manage our fish stocks and marine ecosystem well.

3) By using the word “our” that involve the readers directly as we all have part of the sea.

4) “Join our ‘save our seas’ activities”

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Visual text 1

1. The tagline is in the biggest font to capture the reader's attention and it makes them curious and want to continue reading it.  X

2. (i)The sentence is “ This poster is designed solely for the promotion of workplace safety and health to protect the workers of singapore.”X

(ii) The poster say to practice good posture and the email is given so that if they have any enquires, they can email them. X

3. .

4. The poster have this small graffiti at the side which says “safety

starts with me”. v

Visual text 2

1. The webpage includes a question to ask the readers if they are born after 2000 and it sets the reader asking themselves and if they are born after the year 2000, they will be interested to continue reading. X

2. The statistics is to prove to the readers that it is important and it is serious while the visual is to let the readers visualise what has been said.X

3. The “we” is like directing to the readers and the readers will feel that they should do something about it. X

4. The sentence is “ The Tobacco Free Generation 2000(TFG 2000) aims to work towards a new generation of Singaporeans to forever not use cigarettes. “ v

Visual text 3

1. The purpose of this advertisement is to promote the newest Envy Recline Desktop and the Envy Recline Beats Audio.  v

2. The phrase is “ all-in-one desktop .” v

3. The images illustrate the “ tilt your HD touchscreen to 5 degree to 145 degree when watching a movie.” and “ you can also recline the screen during a board game .”v

4. The desktop is able to tilt from 5 degree to 145 degree and it is available in 23 and 27. It is trying to convey that they are unique.

Visual text 4

1. The illustration shows the different types of sea creatures from dark to light colours and that they may get killed which shows that the sea is sick.

2. The first reason is that in Singapore, consumers consumed 140 kilogrammes of seafood every year which is quite a large sum and the second reason is that the way we manage the fish stocks and may mistreat the marine ecosystem which will lead to insufficient supply.

3. The writer used the word “our” to include the readers and make the readers feel that they should join the activities as well.

4. The sentence is “ We must make the right consumers choice by choosing seafood which is responsibly harvested without endangering the ecosystem.”

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Visual Text 1
1. This is intended to make readers check the way they hold the mouse, and let them know that there is more to holding a mouse correctly than it really seems. X
2i. The sentence is "Does your wrist or hand hurt or feel numb after using the mouse?" v
2ii. The solution given is to grip the mouse gently, and make sure that the palm and wrist are both resting comfortably on the table. v
3. The poster shows that the wrist is being tied around with some strings. This shows that carpal tunnel syndrome makes the wrist feel very constricted and uncomfortable. X
4. The poster emphasises this with the words "Safety starts with me". v

Visual Text 2

1. The use of the pronoun "you" makes the question seem more personal as if it is directly asking the reader, as well as to set the reader thinking about whether they were born after 2000. X
2. The statistics provide numerical evidence about the number of deaths smoking causes, and the visual also tells the readers that children are also in danger due to smoking. v
3. The pronoun "we" makes the solutions seem like they are directed towards the reader and makes the reader feel encouraged to take action.  v
4. The sentence is "The Tobacco Free Generation 2000 (TFG2000) aims to work towards a new generation of Singaporeans to forever not use cigarettes." v

Visual Text 3
1. This advertisement is to introduce to readers HP's new desktop, ENVY Recline. v
2. The phrase is "all-in-one". v
3. The images illustrate how we could "tilt the HD Touchscreen to 5 degrees to 145 degrees" and we could "recline the screen" of the HP Desktop.  v
4. The advertiser wants to convey that the desktop is one of its kind and has many different functions. v

Visual Text 4
1. The illustration shows many different types of sea animals that are being hunted down rapidly for food, and highlights the concern that our consumption patterns are endangering the sea ecosystem. v
2. This is happening in Singapore as Singaporeans consume a lot of seafood X and we do not manage fish stocks well. v
3. The writer uses pronouns like "you" and words like "your family" and "your kids" which directly refers to the readers and their families. This  makes the information seem more personal and engaging to the readers.  v
4. The sentence is "We must make the right consumer choice by choosing seafood which is responsibly harvested without endangering the ecosystem." v

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Visual text 1:
1. It is to warn people about the severe consequences of using the mouse incorrectly with their hands. X
2. i) The sentence is " Does your wrist or hand hurt or feel numb after using the mouse?" v
ii) The solution is to practice good posture by gripping the mouse gently, making sure that your palm and wrist are both resting comfortably on the table. v
3. The poster show a wrist being tight tightly with strings. This reinforces the feeling of constant unbearable numbness. X
4. By including the words "SAFETY STARTS WITH ME". v

Visual text 2:
1. The word "you" address the readers directly and poses a question to make them think about their birth year. X
2. The statistics show the severity of the situation of people losing their lives due to smoking tobacco.  The visual show the vulnerability of children being victims of smoking which led to their deaths. v
3. It encourages and involves all readers to play their part to put an end to smoking. X
4. The sentence is " The Tobacco Free Generation 2000(TGF 2000) aims to work towards a new generation of Singaporeans to forever not use cigarettes". v

Visual text 3:
1. It is to promote HP's new laptop so as to encourage and convince  consumers to consider buying it.v
2. The phrase is " all-in-one".v
3. The first image on the right hand side of the poster shows how users can "recline the screen during a board game to ensure everyone gets into a natural touch position". The second image shows "tilt your HD touchscreen to 5 degrees to 145 degrees". v
4. The advertiser is trying to capture the attention of consumers by making them know about the speciality of this new product on sale. X

Visual text 5:
1. The illustration show a variety of marine animals who are either dark coloured or lightly coloured which resembled like lifeless shadows. This suggests that the number of marine animals is dwindling rapidly. v
2. This is due to large quantities of seafood consumed by Singaporeans annually X and ill-treatment (u dont need to rephrase this word) towards marine ecosystems. v
3. The writer included the personal pronoun "you" which directly addresses and engages the readers. v
4. The sentence is "We must make the right consumer choice by choosing which is responsibly harvested without endangering the ecosystem".v
Visual text 5:
1. The image of an apple implies that one must have a healthy diet and the women lying back with a towel over her head shows how one should deeply condition their hair with olive oil to ensure smoother and healthier look.
2. It refers to the outcome of achieving a slim look.
3. It organises the points and guides the readers to read and follow them easily.
4. The sentence is "Simply go natural and put your best foot forward".
Visual text 6:
1. The audience are residents living in housing estates.
2. The huge pile of unwanted electronic appliances in the recycling bin can be converted into useful energy-efficient light bulbs for the less fortunate members in society.
3. It creates interest in readers wanting to do their part in recycling efforts as it is easy to understand the whole recycling process.
4. The sentence is " Last year, more than 10,000kg of e-waste items were collected which earned close to 3,000 energy-efficient lightbulbs for the less privileged".

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VT 1

1. It is to tell readers that the syndrome cannot be seen on the surface.X

2. i)The sentence is ‘Does your wrist or hand hurt or feel numb after using a mouse’.v

ii)To maintain good posture while using the mouse v

3. It shows the person’s wrist being chained up by wires showing that it is in pain. X

4. It has a sign showing ‘safety starts with me’. v

VT2

1 .It is to make the readers ask themselves the question and if they are they would read on. v

2. It is to show the severity of the problem. (this is a 2 mark qn)

3.It is to tell the readers that they can do something about the problem. X

4.The sentence is ‘The Tobacco Free Generation 2000 (TFG2000) aims to work towards a new generation of Singaporeans to forever not use cigarettes’.v

VT3

1. It is to introduce a new desktop,ENVY Recline. v

2.The phrase is ‘all-in-one desktop’.v

3.The desktop being able to tilt from 5 to 145 degrees and there is a wide display,availabv le in 23 or 27.v

4.It is trying to convey that the desktop is the only one of its kind.v

VT4
1.The illustration shows different type of sea creatures being hunted and that they are decreasing in numbers v
2.We consume too much seafood X and do not manage our fish stocks well. v
3.The writer uses pronouns such as 'you' , 'your family' and 'your kids' to make the information more personal and engaging to the readers. v
4.The sentence is 'we must make the right consumer choice by choosing seafood which is responsibly harvested without endangering the ecosystem'' v

VT5

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Visual Text 1

1. It is to highlight to the readers about health problems that may happen to our hands if we do not use the mouse properly. X MATSS

2. (i) The sentence is ‘Does your wrist or hand hurt or feel numb after using the mouse?’ v MATSS
(ii) The solution given is to practice good posture by gripping the mouse gently, while making sure that the palm and wrist are both resting comfortably on the table. v MATSS

3. The poster shows a person’s wrist being tied up of ropes, showing that the numbness is caused by the syndrome is painful and uncomfortable as the wrist is not able to move. XMATSS

4. The poster includes the words ‘SAFETY STARTS WITH ME’.v

Visual Text 2

1. It is to let the readers question themselves on whether they are born after 2000. X MATSS

2. The organisers include statistics to highlight the intensity of tobacco killing people in Singapore. The visual is there to instill a sense of empathy as no one wants children to be killed due to exposure to tobacco. v MATSS

3. The pronoun ‘we’ is used to let readers feel that they are a part of the solution that who can help Singapore phase out of tobacco. v MATSS

4. The main sentence is ‘The Tobacco Free Generation 2000 (TGF2000) aims to work towards a new generation of Singaporeans to forever not use cigarettes.’.  v

Visual Text 3

1. The purpose of this advertisement is to promote the ENVY Recline and to convince people to buy it. v MATSS

2. The phrase is ‘all-in-one’.v

3. The first image shows the ability to ‘recline the screen during a board game to ensure everyone gets into a natural touch position’. The second picture shows the ability to ‘Tilt your HD touchscreen to 5 degree to 145 degree’.v  MATSS

4. The advertiser wants to let readers know about the desktop’s unique functions, hoping that the readers will get convinced by it and thus buy one set. v  MATSS

Visual Text 4

1. The illustration show many sea creatures in colours ranging from grey to block, showing the constantly decreasing of the sea creatures. X MATSS

2. Firstly, Singapore is already consuming 140 kilogrammes of seafood every year, which is a very huge amount. Secondly, the demand for seafood is much higher than the amount that we can get. X

3. The poster uses  phrases like ‘you and your family’ to make the readers feel like they are involved in marine protection. v

4. The sentence is ‘Help save it’.X

Visual Text 5

1. The lady in the illustration is seen with circles around her eyes, seemingly to show the placing of cucumber over her eyes to alleviate the dark and puffy eye bags. She is also seen with her towel covering her hair, showing that she had conditioned her hair using olive oil. MATSS

2. The ‘happy ending’ refers to the slimming down of the body.

3. Using bullet points make the information more presentable, which is easier for the readers to sort it out and also easier to read. MATSS

4. The sentence is ‘Simply go natural and put your best foot forward today!’

Visual Text 6

1. The intended audience of this flyer is people who wants to throw their electrical appliances. MATSS

2. The recycling bin is filled with just electrical appliances as well as a picture of the recycling sign on the bin.

3. It gives the readers the idea of how the process of recycling electrical appliance happens so, the readers will start to recycle more.

4. The sentence is ‘Last year, more than 10,000kg of e-waste items were collected which earned close to 3,000 energy-efficient lightbulbs for the less-privileged.’

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VT 1

1. It is to inform readers to be wary about their surrounding.X

2. i) The sentence is ‘does your wrist or hand hurts or feel numb after using the mouse’.v
ii) The solution is by ‘practising good posture by gripping the mouse gently, making sure that your palm and wrist are both resting comfortably on the table.’v

3. The poster shows a picture of a hand using a mouse and the hand is being wrap around by a wire tightly.X

4. The poster shows a phrase ‘safety starts with me’.v

VT 2

1. This is because anyone born after 2000 is yet to be at the age requirement to start smoking.X

2. It is to show convincing evidence that tobacco is bad for the body and one-third of the primary 6 population will be killed by tobacco.X

3. It is to get the readers to feel involved in the help of going towards a tobacco-free Singapore.X

4. The sentence is ‘the Tobacco Free Generation 2000 (TFG2000) aims to work towards a new generation of Singaporean to forever not use cigarettes’.v

VT 3

1. The purpose of the advertisement is to promote the new HP all-in-one desktop.v

2. The phrase is ‘all-in-one desktop’. v

3. ‘You can also recline the screen during a board game to ensure everyone gets into a natural touch position’ and ‘tilt your HD touchscreen to 5° to 14°’.v

4. It is trying to convey to the readers that the desktop is the best currently.X

VT 4

1.  The illustration shows that the amount of different kind of sea creatures is getting lesser till it could be place into a small drawing.

2. This is because of how we manage our fish stocks and mistreat our marine ecosystem.

3. The writer add in verbs like ‘you’ and ‘your’ in the text to get the reader's involvement.

4. The sentence is ‘we must make the right consumer choice by choosing seafood which is responsibly harvested without endangering the ecosystem’.

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Intended effect on the readers
1. VAMA
V - verb - informs , entices , attracts, tells, warns, threatens, reminds
A - audience - people reading the article - readers -
M - message of the article/ webpage
A - action - action to be taken once the readers have read the article

The use of the pronoun 'You' and 'we'
The use of the pronoun 'we' / 'you' makes the message sound very personal to the readers , baa baa baa  (depend on the text)
Qn 3 - The use of the pronoun 'we' makes the message very personal to the readers and making them feel that they play a role in phasing out tobacco.