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I notice that they all have a sort of hook, bringing the reader into the part of the writer's life that is being explained. theyre written like short stories

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I liked how they take you through their personal confusions in the midst of a search for an answer.

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I liked how they take you through their personal confusions in the midst of a search for an answer.

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I wonder how it feels to switch from one school to another school [?]

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I liked how they talked about their life and struggles and grew from it.

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i like how they use detail

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I notice they talk a lot about how they feel

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it's has a purpose

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i notice thy are using sensory details

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I wonder how many paragraphs you have to do ? - Jessica L

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I wonder how many paragraphs you have to do ? - Jessica L

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I like how they went into depth

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I noticed how they would talk about where they came from and their background.

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I notice that in the one I read not only is he telling his own interests he's also going through struggle he had and how he learned from that struggle.

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They used sensory details

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I notice how deeply they describe the prompt - Jessica 

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I notice how deeply they describe the prompt - Jessica 

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I wonder how far is too far? Can you be too personal in your personal statement, how can you tell if or when you have crossed that line?

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I noticed how they talked about important things personal thoughts

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They went in depth on the topic and connected it to themselves

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I noticed that they talk about what issues they went through in they’re life

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I like how they connected their interests with their passion for writing. it was also enjoyable because it was relatable habit that i have too.

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I noticed they talk about the things they like on #4

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I noticed they talk about the things they like on #4

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I like how the people talked about how they grew from their struggles

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I like how people talked about their childhood.

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I felt hot, my heart quickened, tense with aprehension

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A lot of info about the people

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A lot of information about themselves, showing vulnerability.

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I like how some used days as plot points in their answers. A new day was another paragraph and it was like marking a log

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I like how they present their hardships that they had to go through, but they learn that they have choice to do something for themselves.

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reading #7 i noticed that you could write about a more niche interest or  emotionally impactful experience which could really show who you are

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I wonder how high school life was like as for a 12 year old. Socially and academically.

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I like how they are interesting and are actually about themselves, personal.

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I like that the guy has a love for animals and doesn't mind dealing with them. He was patience.

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i like how one of them talked about their experience working with animals

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i liked listening to all the peoples experience and story's

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The growth of their story.
From the simple idea of a child to being the dream career and passion as a adult

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I like how someone used religion/science and used it as an personal statement for college

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A little longer than the UC answers, but still has descriptive language and is fairly simple

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Conflicting feelings,
Using a hook
Descriptive language
Finding harmony through struggle
Nuanced opinions
Rejecting dialectics

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They are pretty to the point.

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They are not long responses