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it has commas and periods and it rhymed

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That they never quit,they keep going,The people are leader and they motivate us to become strong and powerful.

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Never give up,try hard,powerful

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The write compared many other famous people how they never give up on their dreams.

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I notice that he rhymed

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I notice in the essay has comma periods and his capitalized.

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How he used good words and used sucesfull people who completed their goals as examples

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I would give him a 3 because he did pretty good and their were some mistake and he had a good introduction the essay had good understanding.

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There is a good organization with an introduction, 2 body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

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Die hard hero, never give up, tryhard all the time

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i would give him a 3 because he did do pretty good but he had some mistakes in there but it was pretty good overall. He also did have good paragraphs and he used good strong words.

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That he used comma and he used the fanboy

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He compared many other famouse people on how they all never gave up on their dream or goal

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The claim for this essay goal is extremely important for you future.

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Die hard hero,eager,and give up

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Setting a goal is extremely important for your future

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Setting a goal is extremely important for your future

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Anias Gonzales

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3

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How he used good words and used sucesfull people who completed their goals as examples

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That they never quit, They keep going ,These people are leaders and they motivate us to become strong and powerful

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His sentences are controlled and varied

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i would give him a 3 because he has strong sentences but a few mistakes

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Setting goals is important for your future

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3 because he had good sentence stem,and he had his intro and the body paragraph and a concision

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This is a basic writers sentence. The reason I say that is because he used rhyme that sound basic.

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3

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Micheal Jordan, Powerful, Die hard hero

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He made connections with a famous person and his past.

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Setting a goal is very important for your future.

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This rubric would probably make a 3. The reason I would say that is because he stayed on the topic that he was  write about. He gave examples from a person's past.

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I notice his periods,commas, and his capitalized letters used correctly.

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die hard hero,powerful,give up

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They never quit, they understand the big 🤬, that hard work pays off, and it pays off big time.

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extremely, die hard hero, eager

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Setting a goal is extremely important for your future.